Elden's Ring: Superman Grek with Limbs

Your shortcoming is very obvious, that is, you think about yourself. I haven't had time to play the ring yet, but I have always been a fan of Dark Souls. Because I haven't played it yet, I'm confused about your novel. You barely describe the characters. You didn't describe most of the monsters' shapes, sizes, and personalities. It seems very confusing to me. Author, you lack the ability to see things from the reader's perspective. Let's use an analogy. Although I am a Dark Souls fan, I really don't necessarily remember the names of the monsters in it. If there is a Dark Souls novel and the author does not describe the characters but only gives a name, I really don't know who he is talking about. You have to at least describe it: "It looks like a lobster the size of an elephant." The crab is as big as a cow but has a shell made of rock.

Grek's final form😃

After discussing it with my roommate, I found that there was something wrong in the battle against Fengling Yueying. In fact, it should be written that the player unlocked the health lock, and then Ge Xiaochuan used throwing skills to knock him off the cliff and kill him. This is more logical and better reflects Ge Xiaochuan's understanding of the game. Then some places are not smooth and there are some problems in reading, alas :-(

Thank you for your support. It is my first time to write. It has many shortcomings and it is not convenient to reply to everyone one by one. I have read all your comments. I will try my best to meet the requirements of the comment area and bring happiness to everyone and Ge Xiaochuan. Please bear witness😘

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Not many people write about Dark Souls, and not many people write about Wolf. A lot of people who wrote Dharma Ring suddenly jumped out! It's strange, it's all the Dharma Ring that got into the trap, right?

It's hard to imagine what kind of environment the author lives in to create such a crude article. It's really eye-opening

This must have been written by the King of Ten Zhou Mu Dian Fire, it's so crazy!

I just asked if you want to lick Marlenia's feet.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is just for fun, with little potential.

This book and Foyego, the book writer, are a perfect combination. Two of the craziest mudslides from Dharma Ring and others.

It's so unbelievable. In terms of stitching, the author has surpassed George Martin. He suggested that he be the soul of the auditorium or the old Bidden Ring fell to the altar.

After reading the first few chapters, I only have one thought: Bad news: the protagonist of this book is a Stitch Monster. The good news is that he is completely stitched up.

In fact, I want to see Greg abandon the idea of ​​limb replacement and follow the footsteps of his father Godwin, train his body and skills, and then compete for supremacy in the border area.

Shrimp King

"Since his birth, he has been full of flaws and weak. Greg has never given up." "The Shattered War has begun. He has mixed with weak women and young children and fled in panic. Greg has never given up." "The king's coalition forces attacked the royal city and defeated Rodel. Never give up" "The Valkyrie Malenia is unstoppable, even if she kneels down and licks her feet, Greg never gives up" "All the creatures in the border area, please bear witness! Greg never gives up!"

The samurai protagonist who painted casually a long time ago 🙂

What do Valkyrie's feet taste like

I came across this book in 2025 and read it together with the author's various life reflections within a few days. It was like something that was around me, but I knew that I couldn't see the author and the book review behind it. It was as cold and hard as a cybernetic visiting a grave.

The first sight of this name makes me uncontrollable 😃

I feel like up should stop writing a few souls game fanfics, that's why I read the author's novels. The main reason is that the author has a great imagination and has sealed all the elements.

I just saw the third chapter, it's so pure.

Typically, I write whatever comes to my mind. The important supporting characters in the past disappear after a few chapters, and then the finale of the character who made a lot of noise suddenly bubbles up. But I just love watching this kind of shit.

It's a pity that there are no dresses to discuss, and the author's next book is probably unlikely. I hope everything is pleasant.

What is the title of the book about Foego?

Author, the Soul 3 server has been repaired

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I thought it was a French novel, but I didn't expect it to be a science fiction novel.

The author's DLC is coming out soon, are you interested in writing a side story?