I Opened an Academy in the Red Mansion

The author's writing style is very good. It is neither boring nor mindless. It is step-by-step. The relationship between the characters is clearly understood and the plot progresses in an orderly manner. Unfortunately, the vividness of the character also clearly gives me a big problem with the protagonist. Maybe the protagonist has embarrassed the time traveler a little. Judging from the current performance, Father Lin's evaluation is very underestimated. The protagonist is not only so-called weak, but also behaves a bit stupid. Although he is a teenager Character, but the protagonist is not. The protagonist's modern experience and the influence of his ears and eyes are more obvious when compared with the accompanying brother. Especially in the scene in Rongguo Mansion, even the second brother noticed the protagonist's various behaviors and was confused, but the protagonist pretended to be the "protagonist". He was indeed fascinated by the background of the aristocratic family. The other is the author's description of the protagonist's cognition of various characters in the Red Mansion. Regarding the original characters' views of Xue Pan in Jiayu Village and the Jia Mansion, I think the author's writing is a bit shallow and kind. Why did Jia Min die early and was Mrs. Wang's operation? I don't need to talk about the dirty things in Ning Rong's second mansion. After all, I didn't write it here. The protagonist does not want to be an official but to open an academy. I think it is too early for the protagonist at the moment. This can be a lofty goal. Instead of today, the protagonist is only 15 years old. At a young age, he goes to a famous academy to study as a teacher. He can only say this after passing the imperial examination and getting married. Of course I shouldn't say this. Finally, Daiyu will no longer participate in the plot of Rongguofu. The author may need to create the plot of the protagonist. The protagonist is not an official, which makes it difficult to write. Ten thousand words are omitted here 😴

As a teacher in that era, why did you protect your family? You were useless as a scholar! This selection of material is meant to attract attention, but there is a problem. Except for people who care about you, who cares about what you do? If you can't support the family, you are a waste like Jia Baoyu! Can a teacher maintain such a big home? Not to mention anything else, if your pretty wife is robbed, you can only stare and be unconvinced. The powerful have 10,000 ways to make your death a reasonable one! This is not just taking advantage of my father. My whole family has been killed a long time ago. The premise of any career is to be able to protect my family. How big the family fortune corresponds to how strong the family is.

A little puppy, without the temperament and pride that a man should have. Open an academy? With such a good background and platform, it is very boring to be the king of children and a teacher, and it is a waste of time to rebirth.

I recommend "The Last Emperor of the Ming Dynasty" written by me. If you don't know how to be an eunuch, please give me a free collection and comment! No system, not poisonous! You can read it!

There is no way that a book with a single female protagonist in Red Mansions will be popular, let alone popular, it can't even make ends meet. The most popular books in Red Mansions are well-written books with multiple female protagonists. People who read Red Mansions are already a niche, and everyone knows who most of this niche is. To be honest, the results of single-female protagonists written in other dynasties will be better than those of single-female protagonists in The Red Chamber.

The writing is good, but the character development of the protagonist is very unlikable. One of the great highlights of Red Mansions is that the protagonist rises up despite all kinds of constraints under the background of feudal ethics. If you just want to write a love story, then it doesn't matter if you have a Red Mansion background or not.

This book is destined to be read by only a hundred or ten people.

Is the author the same one who wrote about fake female scientists? If so, I want to tell you that I have been waiting for six years.

After the peak of the world, there are no more pure men in the Red Mansion, they are just a bunch of meowing little puppies.

Without golden fingers, being in the Red Mansion is nothing! What can you do? You can do whatever others want with you! And you are not an official yet!

This character is quite awkward. It feels like he doesn't think much. And quite reckless. The things I think about are too one-sided. If you don't become an official, what can you do?

[Protagonist, main plot issues] Let me respond here to the questions about the heroine of this book. There is a high probability that the single heroine in this book will not change, and the heroine has already been decided. I wonder if any book friends have discovered it. As for who it is, let me keep it secret🤫, it will appear after a while. The main plot of the male protagonist in this book is to run an academy and not to become an official in the court. Moreover, the identity of the male protagonist is set to be relatively high, so the identity of the female protagonist will not be low. Nowadays, it is more important to be well-matched, not to mention that the male protagonist has both parents and will not choose a low-status wife for his only son.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       We mainly need to consider the social system, economic development level and student level of that era to create a large framework. Although we are being imaginative, we try to be more rigorous. And these are really out of line for the author. (Sorry😣, I'm too bad) I've also been reading some books and information recently in order to try to be as perfect as possible. If you book friends have any good suggestions, you can leave a message below. Thank you all!

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I feel that it might be better if the protagonist is directly set as a person of that era, because the protagonist's behavior and thoughts do not feel like a modern reborn, and every time some modern content appears, it gives people a very inconsistent and awkward feeling. It is probably more appropriate to open an academy as the protagonist in the middle and late stages. It feels a bit confusing to open an academy at the beginning, and it is not suitable to just be a salted fish at the beginning with the identity and aura of the protagonist. The content of the novel is written fluently and the plot is also very good. I feel that the only problem is that there is a sense of rupture in the setting and behavior of the protagonist. It always feels that it does not fit well and is very awkward.

Who is the heroine chosen, Baochai?