Became Hongmao's Younger Brother at the Beginning

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, the enemy and the enemy and other multi-angle story plots. The original story plot can also be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

1. The emphasis should be on stories rather than reasoning. A few points should be highlighted and the rest should be left to the readers to think about. 2. The plot should be changed instead of being original. 3. System design is unreasonable 4. The protagonist's character is unlikable and featureless. 5. The plot is too gentle and has no contradictions or conflicts.

Let's briefly talk about the reader's thinking: the red and blue CPs were replaced, and the readers were so moved that they immediately dropped.

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Okay, okay, don't be a eunuch, it's very well written.

Let me talk about the situation where you feel that the power value of Black Little Tiger and Black Heart Tiger is only a little higher than the realm of the protagonist group. Anyone who has seen the swordsman walking to the end of the world, the Sword of Light, etc., Knows that Hongmao's power is actually invincible, but it cannot stop all kinds of poisons, formations, etc., And can only be seriously injured. Keep it to the development of the plot. If you want to write it like this, the protagonist of the subsequent novels cannot be seriously injured all the time. Therefore, the setting can only count each map as a normal novel. The Seven Heroes pass here, and then go to the next map. The level will be higher. In this way, it is much better than the Rainbow Cat who was always seriously injured in the original work.

The writing is really good, come on, don't be a eunuch! I just found this book of yours. I will come back next week and recommend it to you. Come on, keep writing.

The realm is still ranked too low or the author still underestimates how big the world of Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit is. Hong Cat and their stories may be about the three realms. The first Rainbow Seven Mile has many divine beasts. The second one has many divine weapons.