Zhutian Film and Television Starts with Xiuchundao

Good guy, I thought it was an unlimited flow for one person at first, but I didn't expect it was an unlimited flow for a group of people.

It's okay. There are only two settings that are relatively poor. One is what team to form and how poisonous it is, and the other is what kind of original heroine is created in the film and television world...

I'm so confused, isn't there 800 taels of gold and 900 taels of silver in the package? How come the protagonist is so short of money in that world? The real world is also special. In ancient times, taking anything back was not money. Will the gold you put in the package give birth to cubs or increase in value?

The writing is okay. Although there are shortcomings, there is a process. As long as there are no poisonous points, it is good. Also, follow your own outline and use the readers' words as a reference. Don't believe everything, otherwise you will go crazy... It is difficult to agree with others. It is good if you can write well and retain readers.

It's not physical time travel, but leukemia can be brought here. And since Guhuo Niaohuo became popular, the protagonist has to carry leukemia and other diseases.

Male protagonist

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Xiuchundao is written with a feeling, what the hell is Batman?

First of all, the Hell Point can directly strengthen the body, and the Iron Cloth Shirt and the like feel redundant. Second, it can directly strengthen the energy, and it is a bit redundant to improve various skills. It should be changed to a way of using energy to improve skills. To be honest, the author, your setting is really a bit redundant. Henglian should only improve the body, and there is no need for any skills such as the Iron Cloth Shirt. In terms of energy, it can be turned into a way of using energy, that is, knowledge is stuffed into the protagonist's mind, and no internal strength is needed. After all, this thing is essentially the use of energy. Of course, some energy-consuming skills can also be added appropriately. In short, I feel that there is really a big problem with the author's setting.

I saw 142, what the hell did you write in the next chapter, boss? Two chapters are basically copied from the original work, and the whole article is a running account. What's wrong with you, boss? If you don't have the status, you can write less. Can we guarantee the quality first?

If you want to write about Zhutianliu, you don't want to have a protagonist who doesn't know the plot, because readers all know what will happen next. However, it will feel stupid to watch the protagonist fighting wits and courage in the air alone. The key is that the protagonist's imagination is exactly the same as the plot, so what else is there to watch? If you don't know the plot, you might as well just create something original.

At first I thought it was traveling through the heavens, but it turned out to be a group of people playing games

How fucking talented is this guy to be able to write something so short!

This book is not long, the golden finger is too wide open, there are no restrictions at all, there are extra points for killing people, and then it falls apart casually.

Wait until the author finishes writing and read it alone. It's getting boring. Let's see what happens in the next world. If it doesn't work, give up.

There are many problems at present. I have written them down in a small notebook and are slowly correcting them. I'm not afraid of criticism, it's okay, just don't be too harsh, otherwise you'll become emo. I hope that those who have opinions can join the group and communicate. It is best to send Wu Lu me privately. In this case, others cannot see when you point fingers at me. Ahem, I still have to have some face when I travel around the world.

Chun Chun's reply, I guessed it right, it's a female author writing a male channel again. How lonely you are, you must find an organization

Ouch

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