Ultraman Teliga: Eternal Guardian

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, the enemy and the enemy and other multi-angle story plots. The original story plot can also be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

It would be a failure for the protagonist to lend his transformer to a child and turn him into Teliga←_←How can you lend something that is exclusive to the protagonist to others?

The card sister is always awesome

Keiichi Hasegawa, the screenwriter of Dyna, said that he believed that Sphia was a branch of super-ancient humans who lost their dreams while escaping and became an all-devouring darkness. Only by surpassing them can humans have a future, so the finale of Dyna is "Flying to the Future". He also believes that the power of giants is a powerful force that humans cannot control. Humans who try to get involved in it will suffer backlash. This is true for Masaki Keigo, the TPC who excavated the Luluye ruins, and Gondo's staff. [The original work did not explain the origin of Sphia, maybe this can be used as a reference. Digari mentioned that in addition to those waiting for death on the ground, some super-ancient humans also fled into the universe.

Carmilla is indeed poorly written. Someone made a comment before, and you said that your setting of Carmilla is different from the TV story. But you also didn't let us see the story you wrote. And later on, Carmilla is basically just a vase without any settings. I watched the previous parts because I was looking forward to how Carmilla's twist would be written. So since Carmilla joined the Elite Victory Team, I gave up after reading a few chapters. And to be honest, the plot was a bit of a blur. If you don't like it, just delete it.

The real bull of stage drama, in every sense 😁

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It is said that Smailu is the real high-powered fighter, much better than "I'm so confused", and he is still working overtime to help his juniors 🙂!

In fact, I have been following this novel since it was first written, but now I can't stand it anymore. I am mainly confused by a few things and the fact that my teammates and the public are not clear about the position of pig's feet. It's like the kind of people who feel at ease that they should protect them because they must be Ultraman or something (this does not count pig's feet after all). The heroine likes it very much, but it feels like a vase and does not feel powerful. Also, why don't you learn Kung Fu by looking at your own Kung Fu in China? If the hardware is so easy to learn, wouldn't it lead to qualitative changes? Wouldn't it be easier to fight? I always feel that I am exaggerating the skills of the Kingdom of Light too much. I don't think the crystallization of wisdom accumulated by human beings is weaker than Ultraman. First of all, I am quite confused about the arrangement of pig's feet. Shouldn't we first be moved by goodness and beauty before choosing to protect human beings? Shouldn't you have to go through something before you start doing it? Second, the heroine you wrote is very powerful, stronger than a pig's foot, but I can't feel it until now. She is just like a very simple girl, who can express her joys, anger, sorrows and joys simply. Shouldn't fighting and ability be maintained through constant competition? And whips are often used in the dark, right? Suitable for winding and the like, why not use something else? After all, fighting is about pursuing lethality and speed, and since everything is clear, why not think like pig's feet or discuss the truth type with pig's feet, and unlock your own truth type by yourself? After all, it's completely okay to be both dark and light, the basics are all there. Third, since the Holy Ghost can plunder light, why not catch a few more monsters and slice them into pieces to study how to load the power into people? Why not develop something like mechas? In this way, the pressure on monster disasters around the world can be drastically reduced, and it can even allow those fighting masters to cooperate with the power of mecha technology to defeat monsters that are not BOSS. Otherwise, if only pig's feet come to the rescue, wouldn't those who are dead be contradictory to what was said at the beginning? Fourthly, those monsters are not incapable of peaceful coexistence and use, right? You can refer to Gaussian world. Fifth, the eternal core is aligned with the universe. Since we have consciousness, why don't we often comprehend it? You don't have to covet this power, but why not understand it? Sixth, I saw Chapter 186, but I can't read anymore. I'm very confused. I want to read it, but I don't have the desire to read it. You can't write all the endings perfectly, because it will feel like a bad street and you can't feel the touch. "Because the world is full of despair and darkness, so the traces of warmth and light make people feel yearning and longing." Instead of being protected all the time, it is natural. Seventh, I just don't feel the growth. As mentioned at the beginning, it looks like "it's inevitable, a gamer", it seems like it should be done, it feels fake, and there is no sense of substitution. Eighth, since you feel tired, why don't you think about not letting yourself get tired? This pig's trotter does everything by himself, using the most time-consuming and labor-intensive method. It's strange that he is not tired and inefficient. Why not go to a high-level position when he has not achieved success in the past? Wouldn't it be better to change and protect from the top down? If we have the power and ability, wouldn't we be able to do better? In fact, I was watching Gauss recently, and I felt that Gauss and Musashi got along very well. They were both teachers and friends, and they both grew up. The author can refer to it. That's all for now. I don't even know what I'm talking nonsense about.

Qiuzhui

There is also a book about Telika next door, the heroine is also a sister, and the strong strategist Gongzi brother is an awesome one. It is a world where only Zitram is injured I won't mention the title of the book because I'm afraid it will be regarded as an advertisement

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In the drama "Telijia", everyone's fighting ability is bungee jumping. Little Jinniu and Little Jinniu are basically the same level, but Jinniu and Gongzi brother have been fighting for a long time, and their fighting ability is strange. Judging from the fight between Jinniu and Lao Qiao, Teligali are all gods.

"Later, the political commissar will be arrested to play the human body of Carmilla. Sakamoto can act normally as a person. If there is no mole, he can have a bright future in this drama." [Doge]😏

In fact, I think the protagonist is the incarnation of light and has been training since he was a child. He should be the same as the protagonist in Kato, from beginning to end, but I think it is only a little better than the original version. I feel that the training of the protagonist is useless.

It's Chapter 255. Now that I see it, I feel like I'm from 255. In my opinion, this book has always had no problems. The plot in the past few days can be said to be confusing. You might as well sacrifice Yousalei when you fight the evil god. Even if you don't want her to die, what's the point of making her have feelings for the protagonist. Let her be more noble and righteous, so she can tinker with the love between men and women. Even if you want to write about her ordinary girl side, there is no need to make her like Kenwu. What's more, you have already decided on a single heroine, and then you said, "In case there is a need in the future." You know how slow your plot is. You can see more than two hundred chapters. Which one is not based on the settings of perfect sword enlightenment, single heroine, normal Carmilla, etc.? Your whole "maybe two female protagonists in the future". Apart from making the readers sick, it is basically useless, and your Carmilla has no great use after being cleaned up, which is also a point that makes people speechless. If you can see that, under normal circumstances no one will delete the book. As a result, you can spend all your time there. You have been building the perfect swordsmanship from the beginning, but as your plot develops, you become indecisive in emotional entanglements. Emotional entanglements are a taboo in Oven. This is not one of those light novels with multiple female protagonists. If there are emotional entanglements in entertainment, the author will be scolded if they don't handle them well. What's more, Owen, are the readers who read Owen come to see your emotional entanglements? I am speechless and have no comment on how you handled it in the end.

"If there is a reason for my time and space and your time and space imagination, I think it must be a time and space born from the desire of people who yearn for you and like you and want to see you again." "I may not be able to become like Tiga. But even in this state, there are people who believe in me and cheer for me; I have irreplaceable partners. For the smiles of those people, I will never fall down or give up!" The author can use this sentence

The finale of Dekai is a bit regretful, I wonder if some bugs can be fixed. For example, there is a barrier on the surface of Sphia's mother body. Suada was infected by Sphia, which happened to be contaminated by Sphia's power, so he can ignore the barrier and attack the weak points. It can create a barrier that even Ultraman cannot break. The mother body is so powerful, but it can be resisted by the physical body. It is also drunk.

The fourth of Ultra's five major oaths (don't rely on the strength of others) is probably impossible for the new generation of Ultraman (except Trigga and Dekai), especially "Ulbu"

After the finale of Telliga, netizens said: I don't want to become light this year

Flash might be close, but Zhente can definitely penetrate the Dekai copy.

The village team member died in the fight with the monster😭😭😭😭😭

I don't care about anything else. As long as Agamus doesn't live, I don't even have the thought of saving him. Just kill him with a knife.

The Flame Dragon Warrior couldn't defeat the Black Demonic Beast, so he rushed towards the sun and shouted with all his strength: "Light, do you hear it... Give me power!" At this time, Ultraseven's voice sounded: "The Flame Dragon Warrior, you shouldn't stop Close to the sun." Yanlongxia: "Who are you calling me again?" Otseven continued: "Go back, Yanlongxia, if you enter the gravity of the sun, you will be finished, go back quickly! Yanlongxia, Yanlongxia, Yanlongxia... " Just when Yan Longxia was out of control and about to hit the sun, Ultraseven appeared and rescued Yan Longxia... Ultraseven took Yan Longxia to a safe place, took out the Emperor's Belt that could summon the Emperor Man, and told Yan Longxia: "This is the Emperor. The Emperor's Belt, with it, you can defeat any supernatural monster." The Flame Dragon Man took the Emperor's Belt and thanked Ultraseven before leaving: "Thank you, Taylor!" Utseven also said: "You're welcome, Xingtian!"

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I feel like a chapter is missing. What's going on, author?

I remember that Future Yusale is also a descendant of super ancient Yusale, right?

Kenwu has experienced many battles, so he should be able to dodge it, but it seems that he is slacking off; it is better to say that it is normal to be able to dodge. The opponent can at most use "smoke bombs" to interfere with the line of sight and escape.