Zhu Mie: the Ultimate Ancestor

It's well written, but I'm tired of watching it. The protagonist basically joins the Demon Slayer Corps. I don't know what's so good about the Demon Slayer Corps. Joining the demons or creating your own force is more interesting, and the protagonist is too kind. Why should he still stand in the human camp if he is a ghost and not a human being? Those few members of the Demon Slayer Corps didn't teach them a lesson by killing themselves. It's my words that at least tear them apart, so that they know how to respect the strong.

The combat effectiveness is really broken. The protagonist is a ghost king, and he has to slowly upgrade, so he really has no idea to stick to the original plot. Can't you create a boss stream? Just learn Dio, resurrect the style, and make a few official puppets.

Bashi, the writing is very good. I like the character of the protagonist. He is calm and not brainless.

The first generation of ghost kings couldn't even beat the minions who weren't even half-hearted. Wuhan was much stronger than you when he first became a ghost.

The small details of the writing are very poor. At the beginning, the mother was asked to watch the ceremony to see how her child died. Those strong men were just eating hard food. They watched the ghosts eat and drink enough, and developed the bleeding ghost skills. It was like waking up from a dream. It is difficult for me to understand. There are also children whose mothers know that their children are going to be experimented on. So the common people don't know everything, and the common people don't know everything after knowing it?

I have read part of it and made a review The writing is immature and the writing style seems novice There are too many plots, and many plots are written as if they are copied from the original work. I hope it can be shortened. Most people who come to watch Demon Slayer know the development of the plot. Once you get past the original plot at the beginning, when you get to Natian Spider Mountain, It can be seen that the author is a little confused. He started writing the plot of the original work while thinking about how to insert the protagonist's role in the next plot, so it seemed strange to save Zenitsu and fight side by side with Inosuke Generally speaking, it is suitable for book lovers who are not very old

The protagonist must have a child with Butterfly Nin

This book is very well written, and the characters of the original characters are well grasped. Come on

It makes people feel haggard for Yixiao (The big picture of the umbilical cord old demon on Bizhan. If you like it, I hope you can support the original author and delete it.)

So many good reviews? I haven't read it yet, and I'm in a dilemma right now, because there are very few Demon Slayer fans, but after reading the introduction about cultivation and seals, I feel like I'm not interested in reading it.

Anjuro is still going to die, what has changed when the protagonist travels through time?

Happy Birthday Butterfly Ninja

The author has a word to say, is it a single female protagonist?

If Sister Ren still has the original ending, I will directly 😡😡

Holy shit, what the hell is this introduction? What you mean is that the prince wanted to create the emperor's fire technique, and then the emperor just kicked the prince out and took back the power. The prince wanted to win over his connections again, but the prince is still a prince, and he can travel around the world, right? I'm so fucking awesome.

Ah? ? ? ? ? Ah? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Finished? ? ? My day

How many chapters after chapter twenty-seven have the protagonist become awesome? The protagonists I'm watching now are so weak that I can't even stand them

So it's been a month and a half, where are the new books?

If we release all the first-generation ghost kings, will we write our own ghost slayer?

I feel that the skill setting is good, but not as strong as I imagined. I can develop my own skills. There are a few vague points, that is, whether the skill is sustained or is strengthened when the skill is released to attack. Is the previous skill effect a continuous movement speed buff or a flash? If it is a movement speed buff, how long does it last? And can soldiers only take damage to copy? There is no system for each growth skill. Growth is just one more skill. Does the original skill have higher damage, or is it just a simple skill? The basic panel is higher, the damage caused, and the skills can be considered for evolution. Each upgrade of the claws can bring characteristics, such as bleeding, burning, sharpness, or blood suppression. Those who are weaker than themselves will directly turn into smoke due to blood suppression. It does not have to be the neck, or the claws may inject their own blood into the claws. They can control other people's bodies, or the five senses disappear at the scratched position. It feels like the nine-character secret force is very high, but the actual effect is rubbish, such as whether it can achieve the space effect in the future. He could predict the follow-up time, etc. One second in advance, but now he feels that the name of the skill is lofty, but it is not worthy of his name.

So many more at once?

It looked quite enjoyable, but the ending was written too hastily. After all, I didn't expect Infinite City to be finished in less than 15 chapters!

What kind of vampire magic is Jiumi?

I want a side story about my daily life, ah, a side story

How to say it! I don't appreciate it a bit. It's either the Demon Slayer Corps or the demon camp. Isn't it okay to go all the way? Why do you have to write about ghosts helping people kill ghosts!

If I'm writing a fanfic, my skills and other aspects should be more or less biased towards the original work, right? Vampire magic, what is the Nine Secrets, covering the sky? It would be great to write a fanfic without being biased towards the original work, just reskin it and make it original.

Recently, I only have one chapter and 2,000 words.

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Personally I think it's average, there are too many small problems, the expression is not smooth, and it's uncomfortable to watch.

Can't you write without the main character of the original anime? This kind of novel looks very tiring