Zhe Tian: I, a Fellow Practitioner of Yin and Yang, Am Invincible.

Just randomly choose a little princess from a divine dynasty to get married. Have you never seen a woman before... Slipped away?

Author, will you continue to write after writing the chapter on Zhe Tian? If you want to write about it, it would be best to write more about the Immortal Burial Era. After all, I always feel that this period of time is missing from the original work. I am really speechless.

Please recommend some good-looking fellows of Zhe Tian. Let me start with: Lord of Great Tribulation in All Worlds. I came with Golden Finger after I became the emperor. The peerless black hand of Zhe Tian. The rainbow of Zhe Tian shines in the world. I am cultivating eternal life in Zhe Tian. The yin and yang of Zhe Tian work together.

The author's combat power should not be broken. He has crossed more than a dozen realms in the world of Zhetian. I am speechless. What kind of world is Zhetian? The laws are incomplete. In the world of the end of the law, elixirs have become elixirs of immortality. What is his upper limit? Is your so-called background useless in the world of Zhetian? You may have a higher level of understanding, but do you have the power to achieve it? The limits are there, don't mess with them. Those who cross more than a dozen realms are actually just trying to cover up the sky. The author should not learn from them. Otherwise there will be chaos.

After reading the introduction, you will understand that this article is probably about eunuchs! The descendant of Sun Saint Queen's surname is Li and his name is Daoji! ! I'm so convinced!

The name Li Daoji is really a joke. I suggest the author change the name now that there are fewer chapters. It will be more convenient. For example, the guy next door named Zhe Tian and his friend Tang Wei persuaded many people to quit. Sometimes the protagonist's name is really important.

The recent writings are really poisonous. I haven't read them for a few days and almost poisoned me to death. The emperors of Zhetian are either thinking about solving the weirdness or building a heavenly palace to teach people and ascend to the immortal world. Now the main character's ambition has come. He wants to make red bloom in the Zhetian universe and plead for the people. Tsk tsk, it's so great. Yin Tiande doesn't even know that the protagonist has karma to repay him, but the protagonist rushes to repay his kindness. It's really touching. Why not get married and let the Sun God Sect's surname be Yin in the future? The protagonist still has a lot of karma to deal with in the future, maybe Yin Tiande can help, hahaha

Even the Chaos Body and his ilk cannot become the supreme emperor in two hundred years, right? I remember that Ye Yishui and Er Fenghuang also fought for about 500 years before becoming emperors. If the protagonist wants to fight the dark chaos on his own, he must have the cultivation speed of No. 10

Because the original title was not very good, and some people said it sounded off-putting, so I changed it to the current title!

The author, Ziwei has written about the inheritance of the way of human desire. No one has written about it. How good. The inheritance of the way of human desire is absolutely strong. After all, this is the Hengyu Emperor I Have a Friend series.

The author himself doesn't want to write, and his grades are poor, and the author doesn't want to write anymore, a vicious cycle. I'll finish it as soon as possible, lest I see another bad eunuch book. It's not that easy to write a novel and become a god in one book. It's like buying a lottery ticket. If you want to make money from your novels, just be serious and stick with it, and show it to someone else. It's not that I'm asking for leave, but I feel that the author is becoming more and more perfunctory about this book, and he still wants to get into this business. You don't even love it yourself and you still want readers to pay for it?

It has been too watery recently, and so many chapters were lost in one early stage. A person in the Second Immortal Realm has to hone his skills and consume so many Medicine Kings and Immortal Liquids. When the water is full, it will overflow. The cultivation of a quasi-emperor is not so exaggerated. A Great Sage of Medicine King can live for 800 years. You, a Second Immortal Monk, can eat more Medicine King and Immortal Medicine than you can eat cabbage. There has been little progress in the plot in the last 20 chapters or so. I need to develop more supporting characters. Otherwise, writing one character every day will be tiring to write and read. ∪･ω･∪

Now the crape myrtle chapter written by the author is really damn poisonous. It was well written before, but why is it so poisonous now? Are you engaging in the rule of law in a fantasy like Zhetian, where individuals are extremely powerful? Do you want to be attacked by a group? You don't have imperial weapons, and you don't have any background. Even if you have imperial weapons, if a saint king from other Holy Land royal families randomly comes to lead the imperial soldiers, you will pick them up with a hammer? I don't have any background, I just want to eat shit. Damn, I'm speechless. I thought it was a good book, but it turned out to be very toxic.

Let me first complain about the title of the protagonist. It is true that out of the ten Zhetian fanfics, six of them, not to mention eight, are given the title of banished immortal for the protagonist... Personally, I don't think the title of banished immortal sounds very awesome. After all, according to one of the meanings of banished immortal, it is just a demoted immortal. Also, let's talk about the plot. Based on the current situation, I suggest that the author should either update more, or change it to a brand new map early, such as: Fairyland. After all, it is updated twice a day, and it is still within the familiar plot of the original work. In addition, there are too many fans in this book, so I have no interest in reading it.

Give the author a thumbs up for his writing👍

It's difficult. The protagonist Beidou suppresses his cultivation and fights with the younger generation every day. I wonder if the protagonist should stop cultivating. If his cultivation level is high, he still has to look down on his face and fight with others who suppress their cultivation? If you don't know how to write a book, why don't you write it? The protagonist's level of cultivation should obviously compete with the older generation, but he has to lower himself to do so? Based on the way you write it, I wonder if there will be a great sage who will point his finger at 9 and say, "You must lower your cultivation level and fight, but if you can't beat me, you won't be allowed to attain enlightenment." Really happy

Tsk tsk, the only bright spot at the beginning was the overpowering smell, but now it is just fried rice. The novel has always written about how awesome the protagonist is, but it is always pecking at the noobs, various passers-by are shocked, shocked, gasping, etc. There are so many descriptions, I feel that there is only water, two updates a day, and the plot is not very advanced. The author is not as good as a eunuch. Don't waste the points of those book friends who liked your book in the past. Now you feel sorry for them and they spent money to pursue it. You are no longer worthy.

These novels that cover the sky always remember the emperor, and I don't know where the sense of identity comes from. Isn't the darkness and turmoil just like a wolf eating a sheep? If you put yourself in someone else's shoes, just travel back in time to protect the people around you and maximize your interests, and don't bother yourself so much.

Also, why did the protagonist let Yin Tiande go in order to repay the karma? According to the following, it is obvious that Yin Tiande was a chess piece to test, but the protagonist let him go. , Your theory is not suitable for writing fan fiction. In a cruel fantasy world, I know where there is an opportunity to become stronger and save my life, but I don't go or if I take it, I still think that there is a cause and effect and I have to pay it back. Just because I know that the plot takes something that belongs to someone else's original work and feels at ease? Are you kidding me?

Regardless of fantasy and immortality novels, cause and effect are matters at the boss level. Looking at the entire story of Zhetian, who is worthy of talking about cause and effect? As for the main character, who is not a saint, and Yin Tiande, who plays a small supporting role, the scenes between the two of them are like ants fighting for food, and there is no cause and effect. . .

If the author writes about the heroine, consider Yan Ruyu. Marry the rich woman who gave the Emperor's Arms and Emperor's Sutra. He can also abduct the fairy-eye Weiwei and the Purple Mansion Saint. Weiwei's original work is an alternative to enlightenment. The Purple Mansion Saint's innate Taoist fetus also has high potential if she has the Emperor's Sutra.

This is a pure self-pleasure article. It is either cultivation or cultivation. A 15-year-old saint. Why didn't you become a saint at birth? I wrote several chapters in a broken situation. There is no story at all. The events of the original work are mentioned in one stroke. It is completely separated from the book.

Drive high and go low, with such a big golden finger, it ended like this

Most of the inner drama feels like mental illness. The yin-yang fairy species seems to be a decoration, and then it is pretentious and stiff. Most of the original descriptions seem to be true, except that these are basically inner dramas.

Many people probably abandoned the book because the author wrote a female protagonist. I used to follow it every day, but after the princess came out, I gave up.

6. Looking at the chapter title, the protagonist was born in Ziwei. He is the son of the Sun God Sect, a descendant of the Sun Holy Queen, and his bloodline returns to his ancestors. As a result, he has to wait for more than 300 chapters to follow Ye Fan back to Ziwei before he can recall the Sun Holy Emperor's soldiers? 🤔

They say the three golden chapters... I've only read the first four chapters, so why don't I have the desire to continue reading? They are all inner dramas, and they are also the number of words in the original work about Ye Fan's spiritual practice and insights.

Le Sewen, Ye Tong is gone, and there is a bitch girl behind the male pig. It makes me sick just to look at it.

They want to take care of everything and love being a nanny!

The name of the protagonist is not cool enough. If you want to be cool, it falls short.