Film and TV: Starting from the Little Joy of Traveling Through Time

Qiao Yingzi Qiao Yingzi Qiao Yingzi Qiao Yingzi

It looked good at first, but suddenly a man appeared and started boxing with gangsters. Brother, you are a 25-year-old time traveler. Can you not be so naive? Are you just learning boxing for me? It's so poisonous. The more you watch it, the more disgusting you are. I gave up.

These two chapters are really hard to explain in one sentence. There is a car accident out of nowhere, and then a Western angel is introduced, and he also has to save others. Hard, too hard; collapsed, too collapsed. Let me check again in two days.

I thought that after the incident came to an end, the story would be brought back to campus life, connecting Han Fei, Qiao Yingzi, and Lin Miaomiao to tell the complete story. However, a separate wind dog was created, which completely separated the story. The wind dog chapter can be read as a new book. I would like to ask the author to sort out his thoughts.

I came here for Xiao Huanxi, so forget it if Qiao Jingjing pops up, there is no big overlap, and Lin Miaomiao is fine. I like Pi very much, your heroine is not Yingzi, even Taozi or Wang Yidi. I don't even know who Han Fei is. The more and more the writing becomes more and more messy, and an angel comes out of it. I am really convinced.

Isn't this an official document? There is no heroine in my life, but there are quite a few female supporting characters. Half of the attraction of this book is the female supporting characters. If it was just a book about the father-in-law, I would not read it.

Hmm

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The plot has collapsed... It's better to write about daily life well than to dress randomly like this

If you just like Han Fei, write your next book. You, the author, also like this and that. A girl pops up every now and then. Are you in high school or in the palace? There is no problem with a single female protagonist. So why write such a female supporting character? The female protagonist still appears suddenly.

Ask the author if this is a novel with a single heroine or multiple heroines. I just read it because of the female characters in the character card. If it is about stock trading or an original heroine, please explain it, and I will not read it.

Was it too toxic to get into a car accident?

Huang Zhitao

The protagonist has no sense of existence, like a supporting character.

The more I write, the more chaotic it becomes. It feels like there is no main line. I just write whatever comes to my mind.

The more I look at it, the more messy it becomes, and I keep cutting. It's still confusing. After a hundred chapters, I still don't know whether you want to have a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. The plot is seriously confusing. I was so happy in the first two chapters, but suddenly Han Fei was mentioned in the last two, and then suddenly the whole Yu Zui. The whole Yu Zui is unbearable, it's too confusing.

Starting from the plot where the villain appeared out of nowhere and was forced to join the boxing practice when I started subscribing, the content that followed was purely disgusting. I felt like the author had changed as a person. The plot began to add characters non-stop, and a new TV series would appear in an average of three or four chapters. It was a hodgepodge with no post-production. It is recommended not to watch it before starting to subscribe! ! !

I saw that I had given up the book on learning kickboxing. I just taught others how to call the police to protect their rights, and then I acted stupidly and force-fed poison. I also talked about writing Zhu Xian, but the rest was gone.

When I get older, I like to watch sweet things. Han Fei is the best

Ever since I met Mo Xiaobei on the bus, what was going on behind me...

Since I was a child, I have really started reading it. I jumped to read everything I wrote. The elite high school in the setting is amazing, but it is a city key point in Jiangzhou. Chunfeng Middle School itself is a district key point in Beijing. It's not a big problem if you don't respect the setting. Don't mess with it so much. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. I won't say too much. It's really amazing. Reading this novel makes me crazy.

It was good at first, but in this urban film and television comprehensive drama, you made a quick time travel again, what the hell are you doing! It's a hodgepodge. This is the second time I've read it. As soon as I get to these few pictures (Wind Dog), I lose the desire to look at them.

No wonder I still have a first-level authorship after writing for so long. The rest of the writing is really messy. The author just comes out as he thinks. There is no main line at all. Did the author not even make an outline?

Film and TV collection! Movie name, character, best picture! Contributions welcome!

I feel that the author's writing ability is not bad, and Xiao Huanxi did a good job in the early stage. But it collapsed in the later stages, and the addition of other film and television plots was very abrupt. Is the author not good at original creation and post-production layout? Give me some advice! The author can write Zhutianliu, that is, write a movie and TV show and then finish it before moving on to the next movie and TV show. Writing about 300,000 words for each movie and TV show is enough. The Xiao Huanxi written by the author is not bad, come on!

After finishing this book, I will organize my thoughts and read more feedback. I hope that the next book will have a main plot, and the early characters and later characters can be connected in series, and there will no longer be a hodgepodge.

Ling Du Shui, I would like to ask if this is a single heroine or a harem. Can you give me a confirmation {"NickName":"Lingdu Shui","UserId":339782621}

Judging from the writing style and episodes, it seems likely that it was sold to a studio. Fleeing.

You can start a new book! Although the previous book was a bit broken at the end, the writing in the front was quite good. I can continue to write better in the next one. I recently watched Mayang Street and it felt good.

Do you know why you have always been V1? Do not accept comments from readers, ban them, and write to follow the popular trend. It would be strange if you are popular.