Infinite Cursed World

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After following the update, I feel a little bit subtle. The author's overall idea is quite good, the plot design is reasonable, and the decryption is OK, but there is a big problem that the rhythm is not well controlled. The overall pace is too fast and many places are not well laid out. I will take the first twenty chapters as an example. Three games are crammed into the first twenty chapters, plus a real-life event, and the world view, ability system, etc. Are also described at the beginning, which leads to many places being swallowed up and passed over in one go. However, what this will lead to is that a lot of things are foreshadowed, but not completely foreshadowed. It is written, but there is no sense of substitution at all. It gives people a feeling of neither up nor down. The first dungeon was actually handled very well. The only problem was that the doctor was the murderer and it was too free. It would be better if some clues were added in the previous chapters or more information was given to the protagonist for the protagonist to analyze by himself. The second dungeon is actually quite average. It relies entirely on chatting and analysis to advance the progress. It is a typical victim of a too fast pace. Personally, I think we can add a little exploration process, gradually discover what is wrong with the villagers, and then make a reasonable transition to another village. Otherwise, the difficulty of this dungeon would be a bit too high. Without time to explore, it would be easy to die immediately if you just stay in the village. The third copy is relatively better. Although the pace is still a bit fast, exploration and decryption are back. The biggest problem is the pressure table. The appearance of that table is too far-fetched and has no foreshadowing at all. My personal point of view is to describe the table in question early, think about the table as the center of decryption, and finally move on to gravity decryption. In addition, in a family of four, the role of mother can actually be explored and should not be given up completely. Back to the real issue, in fact, the daily life of the protagonist can be longer, and the protagonist's personality, living habits, etc. Can be better expressed before starting the next dungeon. Now, the protagonist's personality is too thin. Due to the lack of foreshadowing, the protagonist cannot be established, and the tool attribute is too heavy. The psychiatrist can be designed as a small copy, add a little detective story, describe the psychiatrist's current life (in contrast to the victim), and show the doctor's other abnormal behaviors. In addition, the mental hospital is not so easy to enter. It not only has surveillance and access control, but although the protagonist has abilities, it does not include super powers. Only in this way can it arouse people's resonance. Finally, the Cursed Killing Team came out too quickly. At least a small plot of the protagonist being followed would not be too abrupt.

It's a good weird novel, although it's not weird enough, but in today's environment, if you want to write a weird enough effect, you can only do it if you have connections and are a master. Otherwise, you can only write it on the Internet. So according to this standard, this novel is not bad.

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It's really well written. I'll try to catch up today.

Author, you can learn from the system of this comic. I feel it is similar to yours. Strange Garden Record

Is there a female protagonist, is there any ambiguity?

A good book worth reading. I've invested in it. Cheers to the author 🌹

It's beautiful and well written. How could I live without your book?

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There has been no update for almost two days (≧▽≦) The production team is working hard... You know ╮(╯▽╰)╭

Author, you have the potential to reach the heights of Black Fire and Finger Smile. It's very well written.

You are too upright. The clown has become a compassionate old father. There is no intrigue in the whole book. The boss and friends are peaceful and have no bad intentions towards the protagonist. The entire network is made up of people with high moral character. Is this the style that Soul Horror Style should have? If I were to write it with a smile, it would be completely the opposite.