American Comics: Graduating from the Madhouse and Becoming Batman

This chapter is a bit of an anticlimax. You put most of your words into the growth of the knight's abilities. In this description, you seem to be trying your best to describe him as a punisher or a ghost rider. He kills evil and wants the sinful city of Gotham to dance in flames and be reborn from destruction. (Or maybe killing those super criminals and wiping the butt of his old father?) His image is a bit unsustainable, a knight who was tortured by the clown for a year, was able to ruthlessly accept human body modification, and used cruel methods to kill super criminals tooth for tooth and eye for eye. The final fight and conversation were like an adult brat showing off his strength to his father, "Look, I've grown up and can beat you up. But there's nothing I can do about this," and then he ran away. This series of things is like time bringing physical growth to a naughty child, but in his heart he is still a naughty child who can cry, make trouble, and roll around. In fact, he can also be a madman, or he can be a great person. But here's the thing, he's nothing. This is a bit like the feeling of taking off your pants and discovering that your girlfriend's relatives are here: it's cool, but it's a lot different. In addition, a dark hero's words contain a little bit of joke without AC, which makes me feel like Deadpool snatched the Infinity Gauntlet from Iron Man's hand, snapped his fingers for the last time, and then went to heaven with a benevolent look on his face, praying devoutly to Jesus with Lucifer... Some personal opinions, I hope you can forgive me if I'm wrong.

This latest chapter has been studied for a long time. I couldn't eat at all, so I simply opened it again and read it. After a while, I saw the words between the words. There were four words "short and weak" written in the whole chapter.

Why are time-travelers omnipotent... The protagonist is an ordinary person who traveled through the past for a year. He was afraid that something might happen to his adoptive father so he came to help. He also avoided the Joker and let Batman deal with him, and then he killed other Arkham criminals. Unexpectedly, Batman let the Joker run away before his body was picked up when he was seriously injured. What's wrong with this logic? People said from the beginning that this is not a system flow but a fandom, why do you have to watch a brainless system get slapped in the face? Then why come in?

Don't compare the man named Wang with Batman in the introduction. Although Batman appears to be a playboy, he is keen on charity. He is a true charity, not the kind that wants to hire one or two disabled people to reduce taxes or just donate some money and want everyone to know about it. He also treats his employees very well. Even if he is injured and resigned due to no work-related injury, he will be given an annual subsidy. He will not wantonly oppress employees for capital. As for the man named Wang, he is just an ordinary capitalist. There is nothing special at all. He can be regarded as a larger capitalist at most.

I haven't read the comics, but I only learned about Jason's plot from the novels. So I didn't feel much about the plot where the protagonist was caught. At the beginning, arrange a system, the time traveler, there is nothing much to say, it is standard. But why do travelers still follow their original route? Or he was caught by the clown and tortured... Where is the system reflected? It would be better not to have a system. Pushing the protagonist onto the original plot route. "The plot is too classic and the author is reluctant to change it, which is a common problem of most fan authors." The chapter review said, I think it is quite right. Since you have traveled through time, then if you don't change the plot, you might as well not travel through time. It would be great to directly set up a parallel world, or the protagonist has never read DC comics and does not understand the plot, but has only watched a few movies and knows Batman and Superman. But I see that some people like it very much in the comment area, which means there is nothing wrong with what you wrote. It's just that I didn't get it. It's my problem.

This novel is too messy, but to be honest, if there were Chinese people who traveled through time in American comics, they most likely wouldn't become superheroes for the sake of the freedom and democracy of the Lighthouse Country. I think it would be more likely to subvert national power.

Harley Quinn

The socialist successor is still obsessed with why the citizens are against him, instead of being keenly aware that in order to eliminate Gotham, capital must be subverted. As the son of the richest man, the largest capitalist, he actually has such a weak voice in Gotham. This is something I don't quite understand about Batman. How did he become the richest man?

DC Universe Harley Quinn has a busy business and can compete with Marvel's Black Widow

To be honest, if the author doesn't take pleasure in himself and carefully examines the timeline and story line, this book would actually be quite good. But now the situation is that the more I read, the less understanding I get. The story is scattered here and there, and it would be a bit embarrassing to write a novel if you can't even get it right from beginning to end!

The protagonist's pronoun was changed in Chapter 18! The name was Jason Todd. The origins of some characters and extra chapters have been placed in the relevant volumes of the work The early stage of the system is not very useful

It's very frustrating to watch. You follow Batman's principles and don't kill the clown. It's not difficult to cripple the clown and turn him into a vegetative state during the fight. You still follow the original work. I'm really sick.

Ridiculous, Batman is just a deformed product of American personal heroism and American values. He is a typical self-centered person. When has he ever considered the feelings of others? Super criminals are caught and released, but no one cares about the lives of ordinary people in the meantime. Does he not know that the Joker can escape from prison? No he knows.

Who still remembers that Jason is a time traveler? Anyway, I can't feel it anymore, like a native who has a little comic memory and thinks of himself as a time traveler. Emmm, he doesn't think half like Deathstroke next door. Isn't it because the time traveler has the same mentality as the player when he goes in? The worst thing is the mentality of Waiter Gwen, and to be honest, except for a few extenuating circumstances of those Batman figures, I think most of them should have no sense of guilt. How can they actually feel guilty?

A time-traveler who has been changed by others, a time-traveler whose soul has become something else, a protagonist whose mind and spirit have succumbed to others, what are the readers reading? Are you reading fan fiction that inherits the spiritual core of comics? Then why is the protagonist set as a time traveler?

The logic is fine, but the protagonist being a time traveler is too strange. The various ideas and behaviors inherited from Batman are completely like an eleven or twelve-year-old kid who has no complete understanding of the world and has read a few comics and traveled through time. In other words, it is like an aboriginal child suddenly having a small memory and no complete world view of his own at all. It's okay to accept Batman's principle of not killing, but when someone is tortured by the Joker, it's like the worldview inherited from Batman collapsed instantly. It's like a child who was raised with a certain ideology and suddenly saw the darkness of the world, and then his heart collapsed. This way of writing is really not as good as not taking on the identity of a time traveler, and directly writing about the adventures of the indigenous Jason

I hope you don't have a harem as much as possible. I was really excited when Jason said Harley was his salvation. If you say this and then open up the harem... I'm sorry but I can't accept it

Are the heroines Harley Quinn and Poison Ivy? How come this plot looks like the 15-year-old Batman Arkham Knight?

Now that I have finished reading the first volume, let me tell you my feelings. First of all, the author must have read the comics, and the various settings are not OOC. It can be regarded as a good fan in the starting point. But I personally think there are a lot of small problems. The first is the plot rhythm. It's no problem to travel to the Second Young Master. It's no problem to have a system, but the system is useless. In the end, I was caught by the clown. To be honest, it's a bit poisonous. I understand that the protagonist needs to grow up, but how can you write about Jason being beaten by the clown? It's very strange. First of all, it's not the original Jason, and then it follows the original plot. I understand that the protagonist needs to grow up, but to be honest, it would be better not to write about time travellers. For those who like Jason, it feels like it is criticizing others. For those who like the story of time travel system, it is too oppressive and cruel, and it is not pleasing to both sides. In addition, the entire first volume is more like a fusion of classic plots from comics and games into a timeline than a fanfic, and then mixed with popular science about the comic settings. To be honest, there is basically no original plot except for learning the villain's skills and the final battle. The other 80% is just a description of comic events from a different perspective. The system is written in a fog. If I don't write an upgrade article, to be honest, the system would be worse than nothing. If you focus on the inner growth of the protagonist, the more abusive the protagonist, the better. I feel that the author is a female author. I also watch female channels. The characteristic of many articles written by female authors is that the character must lose something and be hurt a lot in order to grow. This may not be a big deal in female channels, but it is considered poisonous in male channels.

It's really good. Not many American comics are good-looking. As long as the quality of the later ones is not worse than the previous ones, that's fine. Also, after you have cut off all the talents in Gotham, how do you plan to write the subsequent plot? You need to have some ideas, otherwise it will easily collapse. Although there are many plots that can be written outside of Gotham.

Dear Shennong, how do you think of this book? 🙂

Batman is the most disgusting hero. What is the so-called no-kill principle? Every time those criminals are caught, they are escaped shortly after, retaliate and destroy, causing more deaths. They repeatedly play cat and mouse games and talk about the so-called trial; as a result, they indirectly kill many people, and they are no different from criminals.