Endless Tales: Beginning in Type-Moon

Starting from Chaldea, the author has been spreading poison and shit, fighting Chi You, the main body dies, and the clone replaces the main body. It does not inherit the memory, but has the main body memory like watching a movie, which can be regarded as changing the protagonist. I also accepted the protagonist's woman and all the relationships. I brought the protagonist into the novel. You write it like this. It's really rare to see an author write like this in this day and age.

I was so impressed with the first few chapters. Can anyone tell me what the follow-up is? ? The system is hostile to people. Cultivation system. It took several years to regain my complexion. Because of her weakness and the author's plot arrangement, she could only watch Sakura being destroyed. . For the sake of acting, pretending to be crazy and acting stupid. . . It doesn't matter if it's slow heating or something like that, but is the function of this system too much? .

The writing style and writing are quite good, but maybe I read too few sand sculptures. I really can't stand the plot where the protagonist recognizes an unknown system as his grandfather 😂 It's so annoying to see this system

Can you change the description of the system in the first three chapters? Does the author think it is humorous for the system to belittle the host? Won't any readers be as disgusted as me?

Most of the magicians in Xingyue are lunatics and a cancer on human society. Why doesn't anyone write a fanfic that destroys the foundation of magic?

This book will be defeated by Naruto Alas

I'm begging you, can you please stop trying to match up your sister with Shirou Emiya? How can you push your sister out? Moreover, you said that the protagonist thinks that his sister likes Shirou Emiya and wants to match them up. Then why are you trying to match up Shirou Emiya and Saber later? So what you mean is that you want your sister to marry a scumbag? I don't understand your operation. In my opinion, your writing style is one of the best in the starting point, but this plot makes people feel sick to their stomachs. You don't have to worry about what your sister is doing. Why do you want to actively match her? A little of this kind of plot is enough. You keep writing, and the protagonist is like a fool and keeps pushing your sister away. Why are you so anxious about your sister's love? How old is she? Ah? ! I have said so much, and I have no other intention. I just want to complain. My stomach hurts a little. I hope there will be no such stomach-ache scenes in the future. I feel really uncomfortable watching it. Author, your writing style is very good, even a person like me who doesn't like to read fate can read it, come on!

It's surprisingly good, although I haven't seen the main mission yet. Tohsaka Rin and Matou Sakura have been booked by the protagonists. Will Saber be left to Shirou? Shirou is still a good person, at least leave him one.

Slip away, I'm coming back after finishing writing Naruto

Can you please stop writing about Naruto? Nowadays, if the fandom is either Naruto or Pirates, it's disgusting. Now this one always returns to Naruto. I read a Hammer book and want to give up.