Isn't Elden's Ring a Love Game?

I broke the defense. I have to say that this generation of netizens is really aggressive. Compared with the mobs at the junction, they are really no less generous. With this level, you can easily clear the level with one life and dominate Elden? I thought to myself that my attitude wasn't that bad either. As a result, all I can do is point fingers and complain, and now I even directly say that I am a cloud player. I am stupid. I come up with ideas every day. I have read through the inventory introduction and read countless branches. Although 92 hours per week is not a big deal, it is not a cloud player, right? Xiao Gao took the money, why do you scold me? Anything can be criticized, the writing is poor, the logic is bad, and the characterization is disgusting. I know that this is my shortcoming. I really can't stand cloud players. Anyway, I am just a novice color pen author, you black silks can figure it out on your own. The book will be finished and the comments will not be deleted. I will not talk anymore. Let everyone discuss it as you like. I will change my mentality and become a fun person. Finally, I would like to thank my brother for not attacking me. Thank you very much. The code words are gone.

Melina, whom I had only met a few times, wanted me to be the King of Elden, but she refused, so I chose to trick Melina into sacrificing herself and triggering the Burning Fire to destroy the world. This does not include Melina's destined death. Hahahahahaha.

The reverse version likes Melina and her courage to complete her mission even if she throws herself into the sea of ​​fire.

I'm numb. The protagonist is always afraid and in need of rescue. It's really not flattering. Although I really want to see him transform. But I couldn't hold on any longer, so I ran away first.

Good guy, how long has it been since the novel came out?

For Lani, I turned into a werewolf 🤤🤤🤤

I have read a few chapters so far I feel that the protagonist is a bit coward He is shaking and scared I know that most normal people are like this, but the protagonist feels like he is not worthy of the female character in the work, and he is cowardly and promiscuous at the same time, and his self-awareness is not very high Looking forward to the transformation of the protagonist

The protagonist, I don't want to say the protagonist, is too bold. He didn't even get through the novice guide, so he ran directly to find Brother Wolf. After finding Brother Wolf, he went to fight the Orc. That Orc was very powerful.

Thoughts after watching "Guard Broken": I support the author, and being scolded by Yun is almost the norm for new authors of games and anime fanfiction like Qidian 🙂. I haven't played the game, so I'm just talking about this book. The author's writing style so far has generally no problems, and it's pretty good for newcomers. I haven't found any major flaws yet (I've never played the game, so I don't know the characters, so if you have any questions, please don't complain). Problems that arise: the emotional part is a bit abrupt, the protagonist's character (not *the overly reckless A-Zhai) is relatively weak and needs a transformation, and the characterization of verbal fights is relatively rigid. I'm just talking about my thoughts, don't criticize me 🥺

The protagonist is a bit more amusing than Luo Zhi. He has traveled through the real world and is still talking about games and robots.

I understand everything

(Not intended to be insulting at all) In a Western culture novel, you give an Eastern name, and the name is so outrageous. It is an absolute thunderbolt. This name alone can cause discomfort to many people. Also, in the first chapter, at the beginning, I asked Melina what the relationship between the Queen of Night Eyes and her was, and then what she said to her, you are a person who wants to do big things, you will not kill a little faded person like me. I was immediately put off guard. How could there be such a plot? I stopped reading after reading one chapter. (I am also an old Shennong, and I have been able to read "Ote's Son-in-law" for a long time. This book really broke my guard.

It is suggested that the protagonist's character should undergo transformation. You can escape from the soul world, but you still don't know how you will die if you keep escaping. I hope the author will consider it.

Don't forget your finger witch

I now find that adapting Hidetaka Miyazaki's games is more difficult than writing my own original version😭