Goudao Starts from Simulation

The writing of this book is still good, and it is indeed a true biography of Gou Dao. Not much to say, this is my first full subscription to a book.

After reading dozens of chapters, it was okay, but there was a bit too much nonsense at the end, and I felt like the author had let himself go.

I don't understand. This dynasty will be over soon. It should be a genius to break through the seventh level at Pig's Foot's age. But he is forced to be sent to the border. If he doesn't go, he will be killed. The border monster is at least equal to the sixth level. Isn't this a scam? Can't the genius wait until the sixth level before giving it away? If you have to send it when the combat power is weak, many geniuses will die young. It is better to wait until the genius' cultivation level is higher.

The author's self-confidence seriously affects the reading experience. This investment will be wasted.

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The author has some writing skills, but there are still some flaws that should be mentioned, that is, he likes to write a lot of inner monologues, euphemistically called the protagonist's mental journey. Really, this way of writing is no longer popular. Author, do you know how many chapters I skipped in your novel? The inner monologues of the three younger brothers and the inner monologues of the villain's beautiful teammate are almost ten chapters in total. Those who know will say that you have a rich personality, and those who don't know will say that you are dumb. It's really a lot of nonsense. I'm not teaching you how to write. Your writing skills must be better than mine, but you can turn this inner monologue into behavioral dialogue. For example, first transfer the view to the villain, use clues to find out that the protagonist is not aware, start investigating the ambush, and start fighting with pig's feet. If the villains are good, don't add such inner drama to them. Just make it happen in a matter of seconds, and just act directly to determine their character. The protagonist can also sum up his experience during or after the battle. Don't just stop time. The villain crawls on the ground and the protagonist thinks about the philosophy for two whole chapters. For the supporting characters, you should probably write that you feel that the protagonist is a rare commodity, so why not just follow the protagonist? There are a lot of inner monologues, and you want to repay the protagonist in the story, which makes people sleepy. The summary is that the battle scenes replace the inner scenes. Don't put the cart before the horse. Author, you are writing a novel, not a composition. If you really want to describe the supporting characters in too many words, it's not possible. Don't describe so much in one early BOOS. It's very wasteful. How will you write it later? So far, upgrading the golden finger to defeat monsters is pretty good, but I really can't stand the inner monologue. Just like Naruto, remembering to kill or something, fighting in a matter of seconds, and having a whole chapter of mental journey, it is simply kidnapping instead of buying.

To be honest, it's a bit watery. You have too many psychological descriptions, which is fine, but you can't stay until you are invincible. You can't pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, otherwise you will really become a pig. There is no climax plot, and the number of updates cannot keep up. The subscription is all about psychological description, which will easily make people abandon the book.

Forget about creative imitation. The author's name is also imitated. This reminds me of cutting fish with a sword. Cook fish with autumn saber.

It collapsed in the later stage, so you can watch it without thinking.

It feels like the author doesn't have an outline and just comes up with what he thinks. Every plot change is extremely awkward.

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It can be said that this book is well written. I give the author a thumbs up. Then, I found three questions that I would like to mention. First: To be honest, if I read too much, I feel that it is just a story about a man and three men. There is no emotional drama. I just hope that the author can describe some emotions. Second: The author can actually write about the protagonist. Why did he become stronger? I don't have a particularly good experience with this. Why? The protagonist seems to be on the way to becoming stronger, but the problem is that he has no motivation to become stronger, you know? Because this protagonist doesn't like beauty, money, power, or fame. This is the summary after reading this. I just don't know why the protagonist wants to become stronger? So I feel very confused when it comes to this point. For example, if he wants to be stubborn, he will be the same no matter what realm or rank he is. It doesn't feel like there has been any change at all. I feel like there is no need to upgrade to the same realm. So the main character here is fine, but actually it's good to have a goal Third: In fact, many people should understand the general principles, and there is no need to write so much. To be honest, I am actually a little bit dumbfounded because I think this book is very good, and I am very fascinated, but the problem is that I found that I skipped three chapters, and I can actually read them together.

I say I'm being strict, but why do I feel like I'm not being strict enough? Every time you simulate, you won't live until the end of your life.

The writing is pretty good, but I'm just complaining about a question: Do you know how much global GDP is in trillions? Hundreds of billions of silver are simulated once, which is equivalent to billions of billions.

The front is okay, but the back door is not my cup of tea, so I won't watch it! Actually said some nonsense.

Everything else is fine, but there are a lot of monologues! There are 4,000 words of monologue in 5,000 words 😅

It seems that the title of the book has started to break away from chapter 12.

Just write it like this. Even if your combat power is improved too quickly and ends too quickly, I will still subscribe to the next book. The main reason is that you have improved too quickly. You can consider opening a few more small copies like the father and daughter named Xue without affecting the enjoyment. You don't have to learn a few million words from others. A million words or so without being unfinished is good.

These chapters are too watery