Cultivation Proficiency

If it were me, I wouldn't learn anything about shooting, calligraphy, or hidden weapons. I would first max out my hacking skills, then click on computer programming, click on artificial intelligence manufacturing, and then create an artificial intelligence to invade the world and explode the robots. Control the world in minutes. Then let the artificial intelligence combine Bajiquan, Tai Chi, Bagua Zhang, Wing Chun and other martial arts into a martial arts in line with human evolution, and then practice it. Then let the artificial intelligence learn the technology of all industries around the world, create a gravity training room, and train your martial arts body to become a saint.

When I saw Chapter 9, I really couldn't stand it anymore. It's so poisonous, it's really good at licking, and its fighting power in dog licking.

The writing is okay, but the plot seems a bit cliche and could be used as fodder.

It's a very serious problem. Practitioners can't even handle hidden weapons, let alone hot weapons. In other novels, practitioners can't be controlled because they don't have the ability. Your setting here is too outrageous. Do you think it's possible for such a weak practitioner to still want to be outside the law?

Have you considered learning parkour? Qinggong is not Qinggong, and the agility is flexible. In a low-spirited world like this, parkour can definitely save your life.

I blindly guessed that the following plot must be about the protagonist going to treat a patient and discovering an abnormality, and the result is almost disastrous. Along the way, there are some plot points about distrust and being rejected by others.

I'm really speechless. What are the skills that the protagonist has cultivated? Other novels include attack spells, defensive spells, light spells, eye spells, etc., But what about the protagonist? 😅 There are even more poisonous things. For example, after the A skill is upgraded to the magical level, it can no longer use the lower level A skill. What the hell, you have to re-level up to obtain the lower level A skill. This is like trying to lift 100 kilograms through weight training, but as a result, you can no longer lift 90 kilograms. If you want to lift 90 kilograms, you must start from scratch and train to be able to lift 90 kilograms 😆 Can the author be more careful? This setting is crazy. (Author, take a look at this setting for yourself. Do you feel like your brain is twitching?)

I regret it, I really regret it. Don't read it, everyone. The plot is too contrived. The protagonist seems to have no brains. He doesn't even have common sense.

After reading Chapter 19, although I know that I want to deliberately create conflicts, I don't want to write the supporting characters too intellectually. A doctor in a hospital has never seen anything. Oh, when I saw the protagonist showing the subtitles to the patient, I hurriedly tore them up. A normal person can't deliberately tear other people's things even if they don't believe you.

Good subject matter, what kind of thing are you writing about?

It is indeed like a newbie's book. Some of them are really unreadable. The protagonist has no money saved after working so hard. He even dares not to resign immediately if he has a cheat job. As long as he has some money, he can resign and slowly think about how to use the best cheat. Also, the protagonist's temperament is too nice. . I'm a little kid, but I'm still immature. I have a lot of reasons. I obviously entered the extraordinary world, killed people with my own hands, and asked a lot of questions to others. Although the others were not novices, they were still considered rookies and didn't know much. If they asked too many questions, they would get annoyed and continue to ask. Really, in reality, I would never meet people at work who are so incapable of seeing. Continue to improve your writing skills, you are a bit immature.

Why does it feel more and more wrong the more I read it, and later on I became a nanny. One person strives to explore and then feeds a group of people. The key is that these people still want to harm him. The protagonist is probably a masochist.

The introduction problem is very serious. Four thousand years of Chinese history is recognized by foreigners, but our own is 5,000 years, because foreigners do not recognize the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors and think it is fiction, but I don't think foreigners need to recognize this kind of thing.

As a bookworm for more than ten years, this book should buy traffic.

Why is the protagonist so stupid? . After practicing calligraphy, my energy decreased, and I felt uncomfortable. If I think about it for a moment, I wouldn't have discovered this problem. If my energy is low, my body will be weak. Then I must find someone to replenish my energy. Why would I think of anything else?

No, after reading dozens of chapters, why do I feel that the characters in it are all twitchy and mentally deranged?

The book has a lot of bugs. It is said that the things coming out of the cracks are poisonous and ordinary people can't get close. So I want to ask why you have to get close. The machine gun is not far enough and there is a sniper rifle. The sniper rifle is not powerful enough and there are artillery. The artillery is not good for rockets to wash the ground. It is not good for Dongfeng to serve. The writing of the Secret Service is too awkward. Well, Meishan and the like are not at the same level as the official power. If he dares to blow up his hair, the government will definitely destroy him. Don't talk to me about your broken rules in the new dynasty and new atmosphere. The intelligence he has and so on, the weakness of the landlord class is more outrageous than you think. If you put a two-headed slag gun to your head, you will say anything.

It's illogical, 985 students become teachers, 5000 per month, holy shit, holy shit, shit, how much do you hate college graduates? If you say a few years, it is acceptable, but you have to know that money has to be connected with goods. 5,000 At that time is not the same level as it is now. The basic salary I met at 985 all starts at 5,000. The basic salary I am talking about is free of responsibility and does not include bonuses, performance, positions, etc. General positions and performance will not deduct much, so generally graduates are more than 9,000 after tax. Your 985 is directly equivalent to an ordinary undergraduate degree, not as good as screwing in a factory.

The writing is very good. The author takes his time and doesn't be influenced too much by the readers The protagonist is an ordinary person. His mentality is a gradual transformation process and an inevitable trend. Don't be like the readers. God's perspective, give instructions, don't be in a hurry, develop slowly, and you will get good results. Come on, Oli! ✊👍

I'm done with it. Clichéd plots can be found everywhere. After reading thirty chapters, do you dare to be more vicious? In the beginning, the leader of the same group gave her a little shoe to wear, and she relied on her father, a basketball friend she knew, to break the game. Then there are two things that rich diaosi will definitely do, buy a car or a house, and don't it feel good to live in a five-star hotel and rent a luxury car? Finally, Chapter 30 discovers that there are cultivators in the world, and the young lady running a stall in the night market next door is a cultivator. After reading online articles for twenty years, there are not ten thousand, but fifty thousand of this kind of bridge. Amitabha, the poor Taoist has ascended and gone.

After reading the first twenty chapters, I found that there is a reason why this book is not popular. Although life is difficult, it is useless for such a person to have cheats in his brain.

The protagonist is a bit too naive, like a well-protected child who doesn't understand anything. For example, if you help the general manager find a calligrapher at the beginning, you don't say hello to the general manager in advance and ask him to write down the favor. Instead, he finds the person without saying anything. After the person comes, a series of operations are also very problematic. If you meet a good one, you will be remembered as a favor. If you meet a bad person, you will be taken away directly and kicked out. There is no problem at all. The period of learning calligraphy was also very naive. Some people actually believe that you can make money if you write good calligraphy. The same goes for using extraordinary calligraphy to make money later. I went directly to the hospital to discuss ways to make money with the doctor, but the doctor kicked me out. One more thing, I didn't expect that the doctor didn't believe him. Only if he believes in you will he be a ghost. He is very naive in doing things, just like a child. I think of it as soon as it comes out.

The plot is too cliche. The freshman college student has no blood, is weak and incompetent, licks women like crazy when he sees them, and lacks common sense! After reading a few chapters, I gave up decisively. It is more suitable for novices who are just getting started!

I think it's well written, I'm an old bookworm. I still want to read the next chapter after reading it, please come on, author.

He died of poison, the brothers couldn't hold on any longer, the wind was blowing hard

He has absolutely no common sense about life, just like a novice

It was originally a pretty good novel, but when I saw Tao and the horn girl getting married, I decided to abandon the book. If you want to write about stallions, just write about ancient emperors🫅.

The protagonist's IQ is worrying. He doesn't look like he has gone to college at all. He even feels like he has never entered society.

After reading the introduction, I immediately didn't want to read it, and I felt like I had seen it before. I had a sense of déjà vu. I couldn't live forever. Why should I earn so much money? Please, please don't write so vulgar novels about cultivating immortals. I don't want to read it regardless of whether the introduction involves the main text. Maybe I'm a little picky. After reading novels for so many years, I always see some authors write I really don't understand why I write like this. Why I write like this? I have to keep pace with the times no matter what age I am. Later I realized that it's not that the author has always been a newbie in humanistic writing, but that I am growing up. Yes, from the beginning I loved the harem exclusively to now I stay away from it. From the time when I read novels I never took them seriously to now I worry about whether a setting is reasonable or not. I have to read books and look up information on the Internet. This all shows that I am changing. I will not go into details about whether it is good or bad. It is a matter of opinion. I don't know if some book friends will feel the same as me after reading for a long time. Nowadays, there are very few books that can keep me reading for dozens of chapters. It is not that the book is not good but that I can't accept the heroine (I don't do anything but rely on knowing the protagonist step by step) The vase that rose up was finally processed by the author, well, a self-improving woman, or a sister) What I said before today is not to say anything about the author, but I am planning to stop reading novels recently and start a new chapter. Other hobbies are also possible. I don't want to think about the end. If I read this book again, the result will still be the same routine and the same pattern. Hey, goodbye,

I finally invested in your book, I hope you can stick with it