Perfect World: Signing into the Ancient Blue Dragon Body at the Beginning

This is Shuangwen, it looks boring

The writing is okay, but I feel like I'm wasting money by reading it.

Author, do you like "Douluo Dalu" too much? The fairy grass in "Douluo Dalu" is placed in a perfect world. Passers-by may not pick it up when they see it. The year is quite exaggerated.

Reading the introduction, I feel that the protagonist is like a nouveau riche, and I don't know what the content is. Add it to the bookshelf first.

Either open a harem and accept everyone, or have a single female protagonist, otherwise it won't please both parties. I support opening a harem and accepting everyone.

Bro, this book is meant to be funny, right? You put Douluo's tattered things in here and it still looks very precious. Why are you lying to me?

The protagonist has a lot of stuff, but why... It's very crotch-stretching! Also, why do people who write about Perfect Covering Heaven now like to include all the women they see? Is it excessive obscenity? Or is he just a stallion? Earlier, he said that he would deliver the fire spirit to No. 10, But then they sealed their love with a kiss? Are you like this...?

Ni Ma, have you read the original work? Like a fool, he gives everything. Take the bronze fragment and exchange it for a chariot

Let me tell you a few words. I read part of it. Overall, the writing is very good. It is already your masterpiece. Please don't write any more.

Using energy to guide the spirit, using spirit to form the world, raising hands and feet, the mighty power of a thousand, one person, composed of 840 million particles. If its potential is awakened, every tiny particle is the power of the world, all awakened, comparable to the thousands, turning the sky and falling to the ground, roaring down the thousands, picking up the universe and swallowing the universe, in a single thought. The types of worlds are: small thousand is young, medium thousand is green, big thousand is yuan, yuan thousand is strong, and it turns into multiple. It is for great success. Diversity is mixed, and the mixing is immeasurable. It is the great perfection. There is no quantification. It is the great perfection. To create something out of nothing is to reach the peak. The power of 840 million particles composes all the impossible and possible power in the heavens and the world. It is to reach the peak to create the great perfection.

In fact, a newcomer without writing skills really can't write a fanfic for a trilogy, there are too many pitfalls. If I don't understand the setting of the trilogy, I can't write it. Look at those high-scoring trilogy fans. Perfect World Zha Tian knows that the plot is useless, as long as you understand the setting. It's not like Douluo fandom can be picked up without writing skills. I haven't read the trilogy several times and this fandom can't continue writing.

Will Liu Shen accept it? To cover the sky? Are you going to cover up the sky and capture the ruthless people?

I just saw Chapter 17, the Great Five Elements Technique of Immortality, Xuanhuang Realm, Douluo's Immortal Grass, Blood Bodhi in Fengyun World, Doupo's Hanging Ruler, Xingtian's Ax, I can't stand it anymore.

What the hell are you writing about? If you don't write the whole process perfectly, these things will go to other worlds. I've lost so many photos and still haven't returned to the starting point. Even if the plot is messy, it's still so watery.

What kind of cattle and horses are the ten headed Yang snakes?

Very poisonous! I guess the author has never read the original work 🙂🙂🙂

Full of two-stroke style writing, it is not as good as Xiaobai's writing, at least Xiaobai's writing is good

I've read too many fan stories, and I see so and so being the sister of so and so. It's really disgusting, especially Liu Shen.

Otherwise, the author should abandon this book and start a new book called Perfect World.

Too many flaws

Why is there an ancient blue dragon body everywhere?

Why is there an ancient blue dragon body everywhere? ? ?

What follows has nothing to do with a perfect world.

To be honest, when I watched it for the first time on Kuaishou, I thought it looked very good. The king exploded at the beginning, but the end was full of shit. Can you believe it? I have to say, this is really awesome

What's going on without Emperor Huang? They are all written around Shi Teng's cheating, just cheating, and the cheating is unclear! Rotten