Douluo: Captured the Clear Sky Hammer at the Beginning

1: The protagonist of Su Yuntao has already awakened his martial spirit before he came to the Holy Soul Village. The martial spirit will not awaken out of thin air. 2: Being on good terms with Tang San is one thing, but Tang San doesn't take the protagonist seriously. Tang San was a reborn person who jumped off a cliff and was a hidden weapon genius with the secret knowledge of Tang Sect. Except for his father, he might not take a direct look at the villagers of Holy Soul Village. 3: Tang San is extremely vigilant. When he discovers that you are mature far beyond your peers, he will speculate with great malice on whether you have other motives for approaching him. When Tang San had this idea, the protagonist already had the word "danger" on his forehead. ............ The author, you have not grasped the essence of writing Douluo fandom. If you want to write a Tang San who is ruthless, cautious, a hawk and a wolf, and a villain who repays kindness with revenge, you have to learn to arouse the readers' disgust and hatred for Tang San. You can't torture Tang San just for the sake of torturing Tang San. You have to learn to let the protagonist torture Tang San in the name of justice; you have to let the readers know that Tang San made the first move and the protagonist has to fight back; you have to let the readers know that the protagonist is representing justice and bloody torturing Tang San; you have to let the readers know that the position Tang San stands on and the class he represents is backward, ignorant, and ignorant, and is full of oppression, servitude, and exploitation.

I've invested. Don't keep updating. I'm optimistic about you.

Absolutely illogical. Two 6-year-old children went to the Star Dou Forest alone to hunt for soul rings. . . The Soul Hunting Forest is relatively close! Besides, Tang San's master and apprentice both rode for more than half a day at that time. It takes more than a day to go to the Star Dou Forest in Shrek. Can your child teleport?

The opening is well written! Chase! !

Looking forward to it, my little bunny!

Why give it back? Isn't it good to destroy it? If this martial spirit is no longer needed, destroy it.

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{"NickName":"Drink a few cups of peaches","UserId":374155325}@ 😍Junyang, success lies in endless struggle, always full of hope, waiting for progress 🤤4634,7533, come on, well written.

{"NickName":"Drink a few cups of peaches","UserId":374155325}🤭junyang^^628,10O,515, think about the rationality of the entire story: don't let the characters do things that the author wants the characters to do, but that violate the rationality of the characters. Consider whether the character's actions and motivations are reasonable

Single female protagonist, single female protagonist, don't write multiple female protagonists

It seems that there is a new card. Although the starting point is extremely weak, 😏

After reading Chapter 35, I felt that Tang San was too embarrassed.

It was okay before Chapter 35! Anyway, that's it, I've been living with Xiao Wu for a few years, and I'm still thinking about things I don't like, so I asked you if you'd like it or not. I'm here to see if you're using Xiao Wu to disgust Tang San. There are a lot of things to complain about.