Difficulty: My Years on the Defeng Ancient Road

I am a habitual subscriber, after all, it is not easy to write such a long Pili fanfic. Next, let's talk about some personal feelings. The first 1/3 is generally quite good, with enough foreshadowing and suspense, and the plot progresses normally. About the last 1/3 of the book, people lost their desire to read. Lin Chongyang's strength and origin were set too high, to the extent that they seriously affected the progress of the plot. It can be seen that the author has made very detailed settings and completions, but no matter what, it is still within the overall framework of Pili, which leads to a problem. The protagonist has no opponent, whether in terms of ideas or strength. Anyone who meets the protagonist's ideas will be assimilated by the protagonist, and their force will be instantly killed by the protagonist, resulting in the last 1/3 It is really as bland as water, the plot has no conflicts, neither ideological conflicts nor physical conflicts. Except for the protagonist, other characters have almost no character arcs, and the stars must exist to shape a person. On the premise that other characters have lost their highlight, the protagonist's own character charm has been eliminated. In short, I still hope that the author will write better and better~

Very well written, keep it up! !

The more I write, the better I get, and now it's become an enjoyable article.

The snowman is alone in the evening frost. How many moons are bright in the world of mortals now and in the past? Laughing at the cold drink, getting used to the new sunshine, thousands of mountains have passed through the wind and clouds.

Wang Yu: To prevent Gu Yao from being stolen. Hou Kui: To protect Tong Tian of the Three Yangs. Wang Yu: Implementation Dance and True Sin. Hou Kui: We are cute and charming villains. Wang Zhi: I am Wang Zhi. Hou Kui: I am Hou Kui. Two people: We are the world and the men who travel through the three realms. Wang Yu: Eternal life and an immortal tomorrow are waiting for us. Ge Ye: That's it~Ge~

The book lamp in the ancient palace is as bright as an orchid; the bright moon is flawless, and the blue front moves beautifully.

God Emperor! God Emperor! Shocking the heaven and earth, weeping ghosts and gods, seizing the cardinal of the shining sun, capturing the source of all things. The divine weapon that conquers ancient and modern times has come to this world!

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The common people are in many tribulations, their eyes are filled with darkness, and the Confucianism has warmed the world. Change the sky and mystery, change the legal system, and alone support the light to shine in the world.

The Huntian Treasure Mirror has come out. The next step is to consider going to the fairyland to inherit Nuwa's divine power. Moreover, the protagonist is the body of the Yang Zhi, and can also be divided into the body of the Zhiyang Hanyue. And I feel that Tianjiang Ancient Yao is the same as the protagonist's Zhiyang. The body is specially matched. If we really get a Yin body, when the three Yangs are in the same sky, Gu Yao will give the Yang body, and Black Moon will give the Yin body. The two energy treasures can strengthen the protagonist, and the protagonist can still use it for subsequent breakthroughs. External forces must still be used.

There are many hardships in the common people, and the darkness is all over the sky, and the Confucianism has warmed the world. Change the sky and the mysterious, change the legal system, and only support the light to shine in the world.

Song selection: It's hard to be idle Singer: Xigua JUN This is the first lyric Poems and books contain teachings and mottos Principles of quiet study and study Quiting the heart to hang in the palace Confucian style crown Adhering to the belief in eliminating evil Dazzling light of the Double Ninth Festival Time has changed The ancient road goes on forever Mysteries are not revealed Playing with chess etiquette Tuning Seven Strings Writing Classics Reading and Hoarding Thousands of Volumes Gods and Demons Forge the Heart in the World When people are robbed, they first lift up the sword On the Rivers and Lakes about Sages Spring and Autumn Competition Debate Martial Arts Emperor Tu Ba Ye Love, hate, sorrow and joy are scattered like smoke Sitting in a brief history Walking through misery and asking about the sky Looking back to the clear plane after death Reflecting the circle Warm glow always shining on the top The morning light melts the frost and snow Using the years to inscribe the pain and sleeplessness Surrendering to danger Falling into misfortune Fighting misfortune Sealing the God of Sin Hindering the coming of the world and abandoning the sky Only supporting the light and Qi Yuxuan Benevolence and virtue promotes good deeds to show the emperor's mirror Greed hides the skin Innocent people have mercy Purchasing conspiracies and plots This life's long-cherished wish Fleeting time Hong Kong Yagu Yingxian Hongyanming responds to Shengyuan Stand side by side with me Sacrifice one's life to defeat the soldiers Choose between man and god Simply fulfill the purpose Look at the abyss of the sea Desolate and ruined ruins New shoots Standing on the torch to set the prairie ablaze Perseverance and idealism are finally realized Resting on the rock by the window Describing the invasion and sudden changes The wind in the pines is far away Through the various forms of the world

I hate Confucian scholars the most. They can only beep, cannot farm, and cannot fight.

When Shesheng Tongzi was young, he was always in a state of neglect. His father didn't care about his mother, his brother didn't care about him, so the young devil ran wildly on his own in the Changchun field of Tao Realm. His short shoulder-length light golden and mixed brown hair was fluffy, looking like a newborn mushroom from a distance. At that time, Zhe Shanjun was only in his early 200s and under 300s. He was responsible for purchasing food for Xuanzong's Four Wonders and worked hard for five buckets of rice every day. One day, the red ocher squad leader passed by Changchun Field and thought that the wild mushrooms were growing well, so he might as well pick some for his brothers to eat as a snack. Pick it, pick it, pick it, it's a big mushroom when you hold it in your arms. The big mushroom has eyes, a nose and short limbs. Has it become a spirit? She Sheng was sleeping soundly in the grass, but someone unexpectedly picked him up. The big golden eyes opened, and a strand of red hair came into view. Red hair, is he the brother? There is a short section in the memory line of Shengsheng that is hiding behind the curtain of the main hall and watching the demon king entertain the demon generals who are going out for battle. The red-haired demon with loud ears drank up a bowl of strong wine, threw the bowl into pieces and turned around in a graceful manner. Who is that? She Sheng asked his cousin Fu Yingshi standing in front in a low voice. Pretending to be startled, he slowly turned around, picked up the little demon and wrapped it in his own quilt and cloak. The Fu Yingshi whispered into She Sheng's little ear, "That's your brother." Class Leader Zhe looked at the mushroom that jumped into his arms in confusion, brother, brother? ! (He went to the mountains since he was a child, but he didn't know that his family had given birth to a little brother. No, almost three hundred years have passed, and his family has long been dead, right? No, isn't this a mushroom? Am I also a mushroom?! I only heard that potatoes in the realm of destruction turned into human forms. Maybe I came from the realm of destruction... No, I want to Is he from the realm of destruction and should go to practice Buddhism? Is there any improper relationship between the master and the boss of the realm of destruction...) The divergent thinking squad leader unconsciously returned to Xuanzong with the big mushroom and the small mushroom in his arms. Brother Mo and brother Zi gathered around the stove and looked at the pot eagerly, as if their eyes could ripen the vegetable porridge cooked by the senior brother. Zhe Shanjun prepared stir-fried shredded mushrooms for his junior brothers. During this period, he kept hanging the big mushrooms he picked up around his neck. Gao Mushroom was given a bowl of porridge. Da Mushroom was dissatisfied and said, "Brother, how can you eat vegetable porridge? If you don't eat meat, your pointed ears will shrink." Captain Zhe, who had a reflex arc that circled the earth thirty times, touched his ears and realized what kind of mushroom this was. This was the new little prince added to him by the ghost clan of the opposite alien world on his 200th birthday. Tian Xielang fought this battle for a long time, and finally drove those stinky Taoist priests who were eating vegetables south of the border. His subordinates said that the eldest prince was invincible, but Tan Xielang himself thought that it was the Taoist priests who did not eat meat that caused their lack of strength. Both sides ignored the fact that these guys who did not eat meat had delayed them for three years. The Queen's father received him reservedly, but the Demon Lord almost slapped him down so boldly. Look around, okay? Why is that little golden furball that always hides behind the curtain missing? Yinhuang Xuanwu went to ask his parents, Yinhuang Xuanwu just saw his eldest son coming back, he vomited a mouthful of blood happily, and was helped by the queen to drink medicine; Tanxielang went to ask Demon Lord, Yan Mohanba drank five jars of wine, and was about to kill Huang Shen Zhan with Lian Emei; Tanxielang went to ask his cousin Fu Ying, and Aunt Wanyue happened to capture Fu Ying. He went to find his uncle Yinhuang Zhuwu; Tan Xielang went to ask the four heavenly kings, but King Hui packed a table of food early and ran away; Baofeng Candao was being slapped on the head by his younger brother Tianhe because he couldn't wash his hands; Duan Fengchen was busy chasing Huayan Wudao, and Huayan Wudao was busy running; Gan Xielang tried to ask the boy who swallowed the Buddha, only to find that Ya was not in the hall at all. Tan Xielang had no choice but to go out and find it himself. The peach grove in Shuilinyunchuan was a place I always loved to play when I was a child. Maybe it could be there? When I went to take a look, there was indeed a golden retriever dumpling hanging on the tree that was flapping non-stop. Uncle Qian waved his whip, and the golden-haired dumpling was immediately held in his arms. When he looked closely, he saw that he was not his little brother. Jin Liuying has recently fallen in love with Chi Yunran, the new little girl from Cang Squirrel's family on the hilltop next door. Just kidding, there are ten people in Liuxiansiqi, nine of them are stinky old men. Seeing other fellow practitioners just settling in and having an affair as the locals do (they are basically just kids...), Jin Liuying, who is so noble, is very depressed and chooses to take the normal route, preparing to pursue sister Xiaochi. I heard from Zijing Yi that girls like flowers and plants. Jin Liuying searched and searched, and finally found this large peach blossom forest. Climbing up the biggest tree and picking the most beautiful flower, Jin Liuying happily wanted to go back, but got hung up on the branch... Later, this was what happened, he was captured... Damn it! ! ! Xiao Jin clutched the peach blossom tightly and let out a silent cry. A group of people from Xuanzong gathered around She Sheng and commented. Master Xuanzong twisted his beard and smiled: Monster, work hard to death! The little Cangyan opened his mouth and hummed: Xiaojin, I haven't seen you for a few days and you actually dyed your hair! Almighty housekeeper Xiao Cui suddenly pushed the two unsightly guys aside and asked Squad Leader Zhe what happened. Monitor Zhe said this, and Butler Cui nodded frequently. I also asked you, "Four Strange People", "Where is Xiao Jin?" Monitor Zhe looked around, really, where are the people? Zijinyi slapped his forehead and said, "I tricked him yesterday into picking peach blossoms to offer to Sister Chi. Could it be that he went to the peach forest in the devil world?" Butler Cui looked at the newly weaned red baby in Cang's arms and wiped away the sweat. A group of demons in the demon world surrounded Xiao Jin. The Xenolord twisted his beard and smiled: Taoist priest, work hard! The female queen of the evil clan opened her mouth and hummed: Shesheng, I haven't seen you for a few days and you actually pulled out a lot of hair! Military Quilt and Military Advisor Ren Shenfu gathered the rest of the people together and asked Uncle Yu what happened. After Uncle Yu said this, the two military advisors nodded frequently. He also said that this was bad, where did Shesheng go? All the adults looked at each other in silence, so silent that Uncle Qian was both upset and chilled. I said, how come you are parents, you don't even know if your child is missing! When Yinhuang Xuanwu heard his eldest son yelling at him, and the fact that his younger son was missing, he felt guilty, blood spurted out, and he vomited in everyone's face. While the scene was in chaos, a small piece of paper flew in from outside the door, with the crooked words "Pardon" written on it. Uncle Lang picked up the note and smelled it: "There is the smell of the second grandson, mixed with the smell of Xuanzong Taoism." Cousin Fu took the note and looked at it: "It is the handwriting of She Sheng." It seems that the little guy was detained by Xuanzong. Everyone thought that okay, okay, we still have a hostage to exchange, so they asked Jin Liuying to write down his name. Jin Liuying is disdainful, but he still writes. The three characters "Jin Liuying" are written in one go, which is cultured! Everyone in the demon world looked at it with faces full of shame, and they only regretted that the popularity of compulsory education was too low. Military Advisor Ren, who had the highest diploma and always clamored for reasonable treatment for intellectuals, summed it up by saying: "Knowledge is power." He was gouged out several times by the demon generals. Xuanzong also received a note from Jin Liuying and began to prepare for the exchange of hostages in a humanitarian spirit. At this time, Shesheng had realized that Squad Leader Zhe was not his eldest brother and that he had become a prisoner. He felt very sad. Mo Chenyin, who had just learned the horse step, took his little whisk to play with Shesheng, but it failed to arouse his interest. Over here, Jin Liuying was also very depressed. This huge, surging demonic energy really stinks to death! Although he was young but had great political ambitions, Xiao Jin had a fierce look in his eyes and gritted his teeth. He was thinking about how to carry out the devil's plan. Tan Xielang stretched out his long arms, picked up Jin Liuying and strode towards Xuanzong. You are responsible for your own sins. Squad Leader Zhe also carried She Sheng to the border of Tao and Demon. The boundary between the Tao Demon and the Tao Demon is a small stream. The reaction caused by the entanglement of good and evil qi of the Tao Demon day and night is like nuclear radiation, making the creatures here grow taller and bigger. Monitor Zhe held She Sheng in his arms and stood under a dandelion that could be used as a pavilion. The little guy tugged at a strand of hair at his temples. Zhe Shanjun knew that Xuanzong's Taoist Watching Talisman was floating in the sky to monitor for unexpected events. He touched the messy hair of Shesheng Boy and took out a mahogany comb to comb it slowly. The spring wind blew and blew, making She Sheng feel sleepy. He felt that Zhe Shanjun was a very good, very gentle person. Why did the demon world want to fight Xuanzong? The young demons don't understand, and maybe the adult demons don't understand either. Dao Demons seem to be born to be antagonistic, and this element of confrontation is in their blood. But why? The future Shesheng boy will learn to be silent and follow orders without thinking too much. The future Shesheng boy will understand what stand means and what helplessness is. The future Shesheng boy will abandon distracting thoughts and only seek to become stronger. Now the Shesheng boy was confused and full of doubts, clutching the strand of hair that was similar in color to his brother. She Sheng smelled the pleasant smell of Zhe Shanjun, which was the fragrance of vegetation and flowers. Why do all adult demons and priests stink? They must have never smelled this person. I don't think the taste of human flesh roasted by flames is good. Why do Demon Lord and others say that it is a wonderful taste... Squad Leader Zhe raised his head and looked across the stream. From a distance, the real brother was walking over carrying the real junior brother who was flapping non-stop. The two sides exchanged hostages, and the demon world also watched the live broadcast through Hui Jingying. Xiao Jin held a sprig of peach blossoms in his hands and hugged Senior Brother Zhe's thigh, looking fiercely at She Sheng Tan Xie Lang as he left. Suddenly, the Zheshan Army made a move! Monitor Zhe chased after him, took out the mahogany comb, and gently placed it in She Sheng's arms. Young Mo raised his big watery eyes to look at him, stretched out his small hand, and pinched Zhe Shanjun's face, which had not changed for a hundred years. After that, hundreds of winters and summers passed. The four wonders and four demons faced off. She Sheng, who was no longer a boy, faced off against the uncle version of the Zheshan Army. Tan Xielang, who had always been rampant, picked up Jin Liuying, who wielded the Cloud Dragon Slash. Three undead, one phantom, two camps. The stream is pulsating, the peach blossoms are scorching, and the dandelions are as big as the pavilion. I am the one who combs your hair. How much do you remember when you were young?

If you want to use the Taoist system in reality, Taoist priests, regardless of gender, are collectively called Taoist priests, male Taoist priests are called Qiandao, and female Taoist priests are called Kundao. Taoist priests collectively refer to each other as senior brothers. No senior sister would say this, and they would not directly call the female Taoist priest Kun Dao. "Taixiao Lang Shu Jing": "People who walk on the great road are called Taoist priests. Their body and mind are in order, they only follow the Tao, and they do things according to the Tao, so they are called Taoist priests." Regardless of male or female, as long as the Taoist priest is one generation higher than you, he will be called either master or teacher.

At the beginning of Hengxian, Taixu was unified, The gods were subtle and full of energy, but Taijiang was nameless. The dragon picture is in the shape, the tortoise script is in the form, the laws of heaven and earth, the origin escapes. After taking four steps, the only word is "Tao".

Quick snow and sunny post

After all the complicated things are done, you will feel light when you are free; Why not find a ruler and raise a few flower ponds.

Although the protagonist in this book is very good, it is too heavy. He has to be a saint protagonist at the front line of any plot, but it is not interesting enough. It is better to write a more relaxed and refreshing protagonist. He can be righteous or both good and evil, etc., But he is in danger of dying for strangers. Or the protagonist establishes a dynasty and conquers difficult situations or anything else. There are many plot arrangements to write in such an outline. The protagonist of the emperor can transcend the distinction between good and evil, and he can also create a harem, queen, and concubine. In the Thunderbolt set by the original screenwriter, no matter whether it is a miserable state, other realms, countries, dynasties, etc., The emperors have no good results. They are all buffoons, villains, and tycoons. They cannot be like the three emperors to unify everything in the world. To be honest, no matter how powerful the dynasty leader is, The setting that all powerful people will lose to the Righteous Path is definitely suspected of being outwitted and favoring the Righteous Path. They are always engaging in battles of wits and repeated plots. Even if the Righteous Path protagonist dies, he can still be resurrected and do sit-ups. Although there are too many righteous forces and villain forces in the Perak world, it is difficult for the protagonist of Dynasty to unify everything in the world. It is interesting if it is difficult. You can travel to earlier timelines, change your appearance or do more A few incarnations, mix more plots and be the sixth person behind the scenes, change the plot not too much, recruit good and evil masters who can be subdued, receive the legacy resources of villain forces, etc., Mix more plots, wait until you have many near gods under the true god level and dynasty forces, and a lot of innate people. With such a powerful force, you can declare to unify all the world, no matter whether the good or evil forces are not convinced, they will be defeated or destroyed ~

As we all know, Kujingsu is really a typical death initiator. As long as you are invited by him, there will be no good end. Once you are invited by him, your life will enter a countdown, unless you cheat (a page of the book means that the cheat is too big, the dead will be resurrected, and then die again and then be resurrected)

A fishing manuscript given to Yangzi's wife who draws characters

I feel like my performance is still not as good as that of the Perak fandom Yuan Gongzi next door.

Another good book is missing. Now it seems that the starting point is too difficult. Congratulations. Few of them have finished.

I hope some friends can recommend some Pili books to each other that I can read. In addition to this article, I recommend the following books: Pili of Paintings and Wenren, Pili of Jianghu and Qingyi, (Wenren's later period) Wearing the Days in Difficulty.

Marshal Tianpeng, in Taoist mythology, is the first of the four protector gods under the Northern Emperor (Zhongtian Ziwei Arctic Emperor), also known as the so-called Four Saints of the North Pole. The Four Saints of the North Pole: Tianpeng, Tianyou, Yisheng, and Zhenwu. Among them, Marshal Tianpeng is also known as Tianpeng Zhenjun and Cangtian God. Marshal Tianpeng, the full name of Grandmaster Jiutian Shangfu, General Manager of the Five Directions, Arctic Zuoyuan, General Marshal Tianpeng Zhenjun, surnamed Bian Mingzhuang, is the incarnation of Beidou Pojunxing, the successor of Jinmei Laojun, his honorary name is Tianpeng Yuzhenshou Yuan Zhenjun, Arctic Dharma Master Tianpengdu Marshal Cangtian God, Protecting the Country and Eliminating Demons, Zhenzhen Dharma Cloud Universal Heavenly Lord, resides in the Palace of His Majesty Yuanying Taihuang; the Four Saints of the Arctic are first the True Lord, then the Emperor, and finally promoted to Heavenly Lord

Thanks to Snake Snake (starting point ID@ Snake Staff) for inviting Yang Zai to Wanhe Songfeng.

This is the best Pili fanfic I have seen in recent years. Books with their own thoughts are always more comfortable to read than those that follow the plot and follow the copy.

Song selection: Xianyao Singer: Ye Li Lyrics,Lin Chongyang × Ji Wuxia The road is steep and unpredictable, and the family planning life is involved The snow brings hope, and the clear sky disappears the darkness Forgot the name The heart is still bright The appearance is like a god The book holds the world, and the things are so familiar that they seem to have been described before Listen to the wind and moisturizing things sweeping the vicissitudes of the rivers and lakes The hairpins have a delicate appearance, made by flawless causes and conditions The plum fragrance floats The smoke from the furnace The sound of the piano whispers that tranquility is good The red color shakes and the clear shadows dance with the bustle of the city The king is like waving the warm soul The morning and dusk spring and autumn are hanging in the world The immortal light fragrance is subtle, aloof and alone to enjoy the loneliness Seven strings noisy The voice and every sentence ask questions from the sky Yi is like the dexterity of cold jade carving The fairy's posture is stunning, the snow is shining, and the girl is graceful The eyebrows are springy and the mountains are drunk. The pen is drawn and the paper is thin The outline is shallow and obvious, but it is far away The pine breeze often plays a happy tune Happy and less worried Chatting often ends up empty, helpless and troublesome Ru Guan Lao writes a manuscript Sitting in seclusion, others are watching Hiding up the volume and laughing The two of us are together today You are the eternal glory of the falling light Slowly shining the sky and the earth of Kyushu Hao De cleanses the Yao Yao Tianrenji Road Miao Miao Views the tide of the world The river is long and the waves are rolling over time I am the newly born vine in the cold field The snow bullies the frost and is still unyielding After drinking the new wine and the old wine, I regain my sense of chivalry It is just the right time to cross the river by Gongyang boat

It's hard to let go, it's hard to let go, this is the third Pili fanfic that I have watched that has been completed successfully, the first one is Legend of Evil King, the second one is Buddha's Pity, and the others that are suspected of being unfinished are not included.

I have read the author's new book. I have not read Pili at all. The only thing I have read is the author's new book. Is it difficult to read this one?