Da Qin: Qin Shihuang Can Hear My Heart

It's a bit messy, but at least it's readable (the book has been in short supply for too long), but the description of the First Emperor is not good (he doesn't look like a person who established an autocratic monarchy).

I came here after watching an advertisement for Douyin Storytelling, and found that the text was not as comprehensive as Douyin Storytelling. The copywriting of Douyin Storytelling actually helped the author remove some poisonous points, and also optimized the plot and corrected historical errors. This really left me speechless.

The author's idea is suitable for writing about Chongzhen and his bunch of cuties. Is it really okay for Qin Shihuang and his men to be forcibly reduced to intelligence by you like this? After all, who can leave a name in history is a simple character.

Another person who used the imperial examination in the Qin Dynasty... It's not that it can't be used. How many years have you developed? The saying "Xue Fu Wu Che" literally means that knowledge is money. Before the paper came out, where did the lower class get the capital to study and study? The imperial examination is just to open up the way for the lower class to advance to the upper class. If the lower class has no knowledge, what do you expect him to pass? Bi Ma Wen. Of course this is my personal understanding. If you are serious, you are right.

You are the Qin Dynasty or the Qing Dynasty. This cover of the Qing Dynasty Dome House is a bit weird 😅

The content of your book was changed on Douyin and I created a second version. I actually think it's better than the original version 😂

I can't stand it. The First Emperor doesn't look like the First Emperor. The villains are idiots. They're just fake and fake.

Brainless and refreshing article, to borrow the words of one of the readers, "The author is just a storyteller, and he cannot be required to understand history, technology, or politics." It's considered a poison test, and everyone can make their own decisions.

It has been verified as authentic and is authenticated as a pure studio assembly line routine!

It's okay to explain and analyze various events, but it's too blunt to force everything into "voices". In a daily conversation, the protagonist is talking to himself with a long series of explanations and introductions, which is inexplicable. On the outside, (the author) does not let the protagonist speak, making the protagonist cowardly and listen to the blind instructions of his relatives and friends, and pretend to be stupid, but he behaves really stupid. The clear and coherent voice is "said" by another person, as if it has nothing to do with the protagonist. In order to set off the talent of the protagonist (voice of the heart), the First Emperor, who is responsible for listening to the voice of the heart and praising him, has an exaggerated reaction and an uncomfortable appearance; The other characters are all the kind of buffoons in the divine drama. There is nothing wrong with the traps dug by the villains, but the description of the writing makes people feel that this is a parallel conspiracy; the plan to defeat the conspiracy is too idealistic and naive. The big boss tried his best to defeat Xiao Baiwen's parallel import scheme with kindergarten wits, which really makes him unhappy.

By the way, why wasn't Qin Shihuang hearing what the protagonist was thinking when he obtained the system? If your heart is going to be eavesdropped, why not be eavesdropped all over the place? You can't pretend to be cool, right? Think about it, Qin Shihuang knew that the protagonist had a system, and also knew that the protagonist was underestimating rebirth, future life, system rewards, etc. Even such a big guy couldn't do it, but the author couldn't...

The more I read, the more I feel my IQ has dropped by 886...

We need to build an air gun in these dozens of chapters, but why not build a spaceship later on? What's more, I hate this kind of system flow the most. This is the most poisonous time travel novel I have ever read!

I feel like I'm joking if I want to take the imperial examination without paper and printing technology.

You can take a look at the second version of Douyin. The changed rhythm is tighter and feels better than the original. . .

I also found this book after watching storytelling videos posted by others. . It's such a waste to write about this subject like this. Hey brother, all the poisonous points have been corrected in the storytelling video.

Qin Shihuang probably called himself a widower, which sounds weird to me

This is not the book that came over Douyin. The real title is, Da Qin Seizes the Bamboo Shoots. . . . Ha ha

This book is set in the Qin Dynasty, but the system is very chaotic. The Qin Dynasty where a hundred schools of thought contended has turned into a Qin Dynasty that only respects Confucianism. It looks very funny. The villains described by Li Si and others are like mindless novels and are very entertaining. It is okay to watch it for fun, but I can just read it for free. It is not worth my money. And He Daqin: Did I give you permission to be a salted fish? It seems like, was it copied? It's still a studio article, I can't tell.

He's a bit weak. He can kill 30 people with one shot and can produce eight stones per acre. In that era, any thing he took out was earth-shattering and he was sent out to fight. It's really funny. He was not allowed to engage in production.

It is recommended to watch, "The Prime Minister of the Qin Dynasty"

This update can't keep up with the pace.

Don't top up, you'll deduct fees randomly. I've done it without seeing it and I have to top it up again.

So why do others recommend Danmei and the copywriting is also about two men? You can see a little spark in the front, but it becomes more and more romantic as you go to the back.

For the sake of history, Liu Ji may be Afang's child, and in the end the throne was still his after tossing and turning.