Five Embarrassing Starts

In fact, I find these routines boring. First of all, the title of the book is destined to be focused. If you focus on writing about good performance, you are putting the cart before the horse. It doesn't matter if you adjust it a little from time to time, but it will be boring to write all the time.

To be honest, after reading two chapters, I didn't understand anything written, especially the two women in the second picture were simply incomprehensible, just like a bloody romance novel.

It's well written, but very tiring to read.

The story is good, but the writing style needs to be improved. I was so tired from watching it and wrote like this.

Licking dogs, two disgusting women.

It's mainly a matter of templates. How to change height and weight? You might as well just integrate and grow.

After all, I have written four books. Please sort them out, brother, and simplify some irrelevant things. There are only so many new books that can be read in basketball articles. I found that basketball is too good at numbers. I often look at a lot of numbers and a lot of English names. It doesn't matter so much. It needs to be divided into more paragraphs and then some punctuation marks can be added.

Why can't there be a blacklist function? The writing is purely disgusting

Very good and worth watching. Someone in the comments section said that the two female protagonists lick dogs, but it is not licking. It is probably similar to the relationship between childhood sweethearts, and one of the family backgrounds may have a big foreshadowing. Also talking about the logic of the narrative, the writing style has a slight problem. I guess it's because I have to rush to explain clearly in the front, but it's much better in the back, and there are quite a lot of jokes. Another question is whether the author can control himself. How many book reviews have you written into the text! I really didn't take the money 🙂

I wrote dozens of chapters about the All-Star Game. Is it necessary? There are so many words for "exhibition competition", which is more important, the main competition or the exhibition competition?

This book is really progressing at a speed that can be seen with the naked eye. From the beginning when the supporting characters were annoying, to now the rhythm is smooth and full of gimmicks. It can be said that from a novice to a seasoned author, it really feels like a mature cabbage. Come on, author! 🥳

Do you look down on NBA coaches too much? Do you want your players to plan tactics?

Damn it, the first chapter confused me. It's not that it's not well written, but it's that the paragraphs are too long and there are too many words. I almost didn't dare to read it, for fear that I wouldn't be able to continue reading😴

This book was really not very good in the early stage, but after entering the NBA, it became more and more readable. It controlled the protagonist's strength quite well (not too weak or too strong like in other books), and added embarrassing things to embellish it to make it more interesting. Generally speaking, it is good-looking, so cheers for the author!

Hurry up

From now on, the protagonist's height should be controlled at around 213cm, and the protagonist's wingspan is too short.

The front part may not be in the right state, but the back part is much better, but it's too little and it's not enough to see.

Too little😭😭😭

I think what you wrote is quite interesting. Come on!

It would be interesting to give Rodman a template forty chapters in advance, create a nonsensical modern Rodman, and then slowly improve other skills. Writing it this way now is too confusing and boring.

The plot after entering the NBA is indeed very good. Should the author consider revising the beginning to make it more coherent and more unified in style? Maybe it will help with grades? (Not entirely sure, just guessing)

The latest chapters are a bit poorly written. It's really the 2008 Olympics, right at your doorstep. Do you think it is more important for Dayao to bring glory to the country, or to the NBA? Besides, even if they surpass the Lakers, they still won't win the championship. Don't write about McGee winning the Olympic gold medal one-on-five, that would really make you laugh.

It's going to be more and more exciting from now on, come on

Didn't Stoudemire break his leg? . . Why are All-Stars coming out again?

One chapter is worth two and a half chapters to you, author.

Why can't I write basketball articles now without a system? I read that Lin Haitingtao, who is more successful in sports writing, does not write about the system, and his results are quite good.