Film and Television Holiday Warm Ocean 2 Begins

Have you ever considered updating 3 times a day?

It was quite surprising at first. I am a fan of Holiday Warm Ocean 2, but what you wrote is no different from the TV series. A 12-year-old CEO has no use in being a CEO. He is not as good as a 12-year-old genius rich second generation. I hope the author can work hard, I hate that iron cannot become steel.

The lack of chapter names greatly affects reading

Is it a rebirth article? Why is Zhengshengwen so busy making money? Weren't you busy enough in your previous life? And as soon as you enter the class, you directly tell me that the game you are playing is made by my company? What kind of plane are you doing? Do others need to know who you are?

The author cannot directly follow the plot of the TV series when writing this. He should be able to add some of his own ideas into it. Otherwise, wouldn't he let readers watch the plot of the TV series?

Good guy, I'm too lazy to even name the chapter, and the age setting is too young.

This male protagonist is too young to watch.

After the identification, Poison Douluo is so terrifying (#ﾟДﾟ) The wind is tight and howling

Just copy the plot, brothers can withdraw

There are a lot of grammatical errors, so read it yourself after writing it.

Will you do something to my Teacher Bai like a small horse pulling a big cart?

What age are we in, and I can't afford the chapter title?

Good-looking ones, okay, just less

I don't like reading books without chapter names.

It feels like you are forced to participate in the plot.

Come on, author. There are not many books on the Internet right now.

To be honest, I don't really like Tian Shuang being the heroine.

Chapter 1, page 2, poisoned to death, where are you?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I'm curious, author, how many chapters can you write like this? If you're not good at it, you'd have to finish the TV series in about 40 chapters at most, maybe more. What's next, how about the main character Wada Shuang's school journey? Or just skip school and write about business cities? Or do you want a eunuch? I have no ill intentions and am just asking

According to this situation, writing a chapter of more than 100 years is still a 10-year-old child

Poison in the first chapter? The author does not talk about martial ethics...

The writing is beautiful, please do more ＾0＾~

Don't go into the palace, you can write slowly, updated every week

At least give it a conclusion.

In fact, the writing is okay, but it was a bit too strong and cold at the beginning. I could change my attitude towards life, or add some background.

The subject matter is quite good. I suggest you reconsider it and reopen it.