People Are in Douluo, Eat Devil Fruits at the Beginning

It's so wordy. I seriously doubt that I'm in the water.

The writing is not bad, although it is not outstanding, it is not bad. When reading, it feels like telling a short story.

I vomited, it's a stupid story again. It's normal for Ning Rongrong to follow the protagonist because Shrek is too shabby. I can't understand Xiao Wu leaving with the protagonist. Xiao Wu has no interaction with the protagonist at all. She doesn't speak more than ten sentences and then leaves with the protagonist. It's probably a pornographic story where a woman goes to bed with the protagonist after seeing her. No wonder no one has read it.

But don't give me fairy herbs to original supporting characters. Their potential is too low, and they are just classmates, so there is no need to give them to them. Otherwise, it would be like giving one million to each of your classmates when you get rich in reality, which feels toxic.

Ning Rongrong was able to open a harem with two time travelers (Lu Nan and Tang San) present, which is incredible, so when she said she was the protagonist, I completely believed it. I have already imagined in my mind that Ning Rongrong is holding the kitten Zhu Zhuqing on her left, Xiao Wu, the little rabbit on her right, and Huo Wu is beating her back behind her. And Tang San, Dai Mubai and Feng Xiaotian were looking at her with gritted teeth! Oscar even knelt down and shouted: No...

Author, could you please answer, why does the male protagonist, who is level 39, have to find an intermediate college to study? ? ? ? ?

The male protagonist of this book travels back in time, but Ning Rongrong is the female protagonist, and Ning Rongrong runs the harem. The role of the protagonist is to bring other female protagonists to Ning Rongrong, just like the Turtle Gong in the brothel 🙂

To be honest, I really wrote it without thinking. Why don't you guess why Tang Hao didn't take action against Xiao Wu? You first took Xiao Wu to the Holy Soul Village to let Tang Hao know her soul beast identity, and then you took Xiao Wu away from Tang San so that Tang Hao didn't have to think about Tang San. Then how could he, a titled Douluo who hangs around Tang San every day, not take action against Xiao Wu? It's really funny, and it was written without thinking. Also, when we look at doujins and create a bunch of original characters by the author, why do we still write doujins when we feel that our writing is very good? Just be original! I really don't know my position clearly.

The author Tomato has plagiarized your work.

Does the author still remember that the protagonist of this book is a young man named Lu Nan? Isn't this little girl named Ning Rongrong looking for a CP for Ning Rongrong? Will she open a harem for Ning Rongrong in the future? Will the plot between Lu Nan and Qian Renxue be written? Waiting, urgent! ! ! 😡😡😡

I can guarantee that a large number of people will be discouraged from doing women's clothing. It's too poisonous and the writing is good. Why do you do this? The old man who hangs himself because he thinks his life is too long belongs to

Outrageous. After the author let himself go, he directly started to tell stories about girls. The protagonist dressed up as a woman, the heroines liked each other, and even Tang San was turned into a woman by Shura.

The writing is very good, and I finally read a book that makes people's eyes dazzle. The other books are upgraded and so boring. Here, a lot of daily life that makes people's eyes dazzle are added. It's a pleasure to read. But this Tang San should be the comic version, right?

How can I say, the author really let himself go, the whole plot and character design can be said to be collapsed, but I am Rongrong Chef, so I strongly recommend it

To be honest, in the early stage, from the moment Xiao Wu appeared in Tangshan, his life no longer belonged to him. You, a hundred thousand year old soul beast, were seen by Tang Hao. Do you think you can run away? You still want to leave Tangshan, are you thinking about shit? If he hadn't kept this beast soul for his son, do you think Xiao Wu would be alive? As long as you drive away, your skin and muscles will be beaten in minutes.

I saw Chapter 77 and it was boring. Let's not talk about whether women dress up or not in the later stages. The first part is just speechless. First, didn't the protagonist know Xiao Wu's true identity? He took her away and brought her to Tiandou City. Xiao Wu actually went there because she thought she didn't die quickly enough. Second, the magic sword Thousand Blades was used to become Senbonzakura, which was even more exaggerated than Senbonzakura. Adding elements to Senbonzakura, even if there is no surgical fruit, there is basically no solution. Third, I still don't understand why the protagonist goes to Shrek Academy. Is it to increase the word count? By the way, are you exposing the fruits of the surgery? Fourth, the subject matter chosen by the author is novel, but if you are a fan, you should at least understand the setting clearly. The setting for Ning Rongrong to try the attack is really funny, and the author did not write clearly about the soul ring and soul power. Fifth, I have read Chapter 77 (maybe because I am used to reading Naruto and Pirates fan fiction) so far the protagonist has not killed anyone. The Surgical Fruit Demon Sword Thousand Blades are the decisive killing tools of the protagonists in other fan novels, but here they are just for fun, and I feel that it is a pity to be in the hands of such a protagonist.

Come on author, it's very interesting when you let yourself go, and it's even more interesting when Rong Rong is the protagonist. You can write a book specifically with Rong Rong as the protagonist.

Comic version

After watching it for so long, there is no 0.0000000001 Female protagonist. I think the protagonist should be deleted and replaced with Ning Rongrong.

I only read Chapter 50, and I won't talk about the women's clothing they mentioned. That's the Thousand Blades of the Demonic Sword. It's made up of palms, balls, and towers. What the hell is it? It's only for offense but not defense? God's punishment, what does this have to do with the magic sword?

The room is so hairy! Just translate it directly into . Now there is an English word inserted among a bunch of Chinese words, which looks very awkward. room: room. Although it is very different from the field, its meaning is the meaning of the field. Just like our Chinese: covering the sky. Tm, translated into English, is a protective umbrella. What this means is that the difference is heaven and earth. The meaning of the English expression is too single. A batch of garbage!

I hope there will be a surgery fruit novel that puts Yu Xiaogang's little brother on his head and makes him a unicorn

It feels like the first 100 chapters and the next 500 chapters were not written by the same person. The latter part is very poisonous. From the third soul skill onwards, it is obvious that the writing is starting to be abnormal.

How do you feel about injecting a lot of water? It's all water, so just write an introduction to the landscape, place introduction, soul skills introduction, character introduction, just hard water.

Have you changed Rongrong into the protagonist? ? ? ? ? ? ?

I really enjoyed writing it for you hahaha😂

It's my birthday, and the book I'm following was suddenly updated.

Start a new book! The more I watch later, the less I want to watch it

Guys, does anyone have a Douluo fan who writes about Rongrong Zhuqing? ! !

I haven't finished reading Chapter 10, and I started to get addicted. I haven't learned anything about soul beasts, so I secretly went to get the soul ring. As a result, I not only recognized the soul beasts, but also the age of the soul beasts. It's very unreasonable.