Junior Brother Has Murderous Intent

Well, I came here by invitation and read ten chapters. Actually, I'm quite curious as to why I was asked to evaluate it. Because this book has been put on the shelves and has nearly 10,000 fans. Perhaps the recent subscription and follow-up reading are not satisfactory. The author wants to find out the reason. Then I will just talk nonsense, don't take it seriously. For the indigenous protagonists of fairy tales, well, it's difficult to get ahead in this genre. In the past few years, the climax of several successive waves of immortality writing has basically exhausted readers' sense of reading, and even the subject matter has basically been exhausted. Today's immortality novels must find ways to incorporate more features from other themes, which I didn't see much in the first ten chapters. This should be a direction. I won't say anything else. The author has been writing the book for such a long time, and based on the reading and subscription data, we can see what content readers like to see. Since some people are willing to pay to read what I write now. There must be some merits. See for yourself which content you like. Please improve it more. To be honest, outsiders can't really help you much with this. The readership of a book is basically finalized by the time you write 50,000 words. If you want to change it, it's hard to do it. Now you can only make adjustments. That's it, good luck.

Let's supervise together!

I don't have a monthly pass, but I have black stockings, can I get more updates?

Oh, I'll go and look at it with my head, it's a little bit heady.

The book is good, but the portion is too small, even the grass jelly is not hot pot

Am I the only one who thinks this kind of traditional fantasy novel is very interesting? It's really very interesting.

How many words do you plan to write in this book? Can it be longer?

The Riddler in the front makes me uninterested in watching the Riddler. I hate the Riddler.

Woohoo, author, can I send you a razor blade? Why are the exciting chapters disappearing when I see them?

The last few chapters have become more and more interesting, and I look forward to the follow-up...

I've enjoyed reading the last few chapters, but this book is really slow to pick up

Do it faster, do it faster, it's not enough!

I've finished reading it. The author's writing is good, but the updates are a bit lacking. Come on.

Quick update, quick update, did you hear it?

Not enough to see, please update quickly

Can the author finish the book normally? I'm a little scared after reading this update😱

Work hard and strive to update more than 10,000 times a day

After watching the previous one, I felt it was okay. I hope that the subsequent plots will be more intense.

Don't ask for updates, as long as the author doesn't want pigeons