Demonic Woodcarver

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I created a confused protagonist who has monsters and fears the unknown. Just love to death. The protagonist's master is also a fool. He doesn't explain things clearly and relies on groping. He has no intention of standing on the shoulders of giants. He avoids all the pitfalls in the path of spiritual practice. Looking uncomfortable and foggy. Just like teaching a child, when walking on the road, I will definitely tell you to give way to a car over and over again, but the protagonist's master will not say it.

The protagonist is a fool. He has no memory at all. He is really drunk. If I didn't see it, it's a lie. If I saw it, it's also a lie. He's mentally retarded.

The author is great, I just want to ask, how come the protagonist has such no memory and no vigilance, how many times has something happened to him in just a few days? This is about a giant baby who needs a nanny. After knowing that there is a shengui, he continues to be careless. Fortunately, no one he encounters harms the protagonist. If it were replaced by a gui, the protagonist would have died several times in less than a week (no matter how careless a person is in a dangerous environment, he will not feel comfortable talking to someone who may be dangerous. The author is great) Take a look for yourself and see if the conversations in these chapters look like small talk. Is it OK to pay careful attention to details when writing? There are too many books with various problems in the book shortage. In terms of the ranking of the protagonist's unconditional death, this book is definitely in the top three of the new books I have read recently...) The last sentence is still there, is it OK to write it if you are in a dangerous environment? Protagonist, don't do this

No, the protagonist is like a fool. He thought it was an ordinary world and didn't take it seriously when an abnormality happened so early. Then he got the golden armor and practiced blindly. He knew that the cultivation point existed and was still so reckless. He felt that the master was scaring him. No, right?

The subject matter and creativity are very good, but the early stage is too discouraging. The pig's foot character is a bit naive at best, and stupid at worst. Not all readers today, but most of them like pig's feet that kill decisively. The little fox asked pig's feet to help her prevent disaster even though she knew it would harm pig's feet. When I saw Pig's Foot saved the fox, I thought about when Pig's Foot would come back with revenge. Not only did Pig's Foot not take revenge, he didn't even realize that he had been killed. It seems that Fox will become an important female supporting character and possibly the heroine later on in the plot. This plot is truly speechless. Personally, the author suggests that you should just start a new book. The early stage is too toxic and few can resist subscribing. Also, there are a lot of typos in the first few dozen chapters, but things get better later on.

The idea is good, but the main character is so stupid that I can't stand it anymore, and he's a time traveler.

In this case, I am afraid that the master will die and the apprentice will die too! Because the apprentice is a fool

I really admire the author, the protagonist was so failed in portraying him, he looked like a fool. Otherwise, if you change it to Aboriginal people, nothing will happen. You're like a fool and you still make it time travel.

It's a bit too deliberate. The protagonist is so stupid that he is the kind of cannon fodder who can't survive more than three chapters. Every time I watch his mental activities, it feels like he is going through a catastrophe!

The whole text opens up the halo of wisdom. . . .

You shouldn't read novels without reading the comments section. Even Shen Nong could not withstand this poison.

The background of the story is obviously good, but the character of the protagonist is not good. He doesn't understand anything and he still messes around. The master has obviously said that making masks is risky, and the mask he carved may have magical powers and transform into monkeys. He keeps saying it is an ordinary mask and gives it to others all at once. It is difficult for this kind of time traveler to survive in modern society,

Poison, poison, poison! The protagonist keeps trying to die like a fool, if it weren't for the protagonist, he would have died long ago.

Anyway, I traveled through ancient times but I don't believe in ghosts and gods. I don't know whether my mask is valuable or not, so I gave it to a fox. Not only did I have no brain, I also lost my lower body.

The idea is good, and the writing is okay, but the protagonist is a bit stupid. If the identity of the time traveler is removed and replaced by an indigenous person, the protagonist's behavior and thoughts will be normal.

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist's brain. He has traveled through time and still thinks that the theory of ghosts and gods is superstitious. The plot is weird. The protagonist is used by a fox to ward off disasters. He is lucky and fine, but then nothing happens and there is no revenge. It seems that the author intends to make this fox an important character or even a heroine. Also, the protagonist was too careless and had no doubt in his heart. If it weren't for his luck, he would have died a long time ago. Finally, there are a lot of typos in the novel that are a bit uncomfortable to read.

The fuck is so poisonous. It's really sad that the main character is so naive

The writing is very messy, some settings don't need to be written, just bring them up casually later. The main plot is unclear, there is no context, and there is no connection between the front and the back. I don't know what I am writing. All of a sudden, the sins of ghosts and gods, the four books and the five classics, all the strange powers and chaotic spirits are revealed. I don't know what to write, so I go to the Internet to copy the meaning of the scriptures, and fill in a lot of messy words.

Disgusting, so disgusting to read, this writing style makes me shake my head after reading it, it might as well be written as a cool article

Chapter 8 is poisonous. The protagonist is mentally retarded. The writing and plot are acceptable. I suggest the author rewrite it. The author's IQ should be fine, but he just doesn't know how to describe the protagonist. If you like Xia Ke Xing, you will probably like it. The protagonist of this book has a very low IQ.

After reading Chapter 14, I feel like I can't stand it anymore. I've never seen a protagonist who is so capable of seeking death.

The protagonist is an imbecile, with a low IQ, and a strong sense of being a fool.

Looking back, I see that there are indeed many problems, but as of now, I have neither the energy nor the ability to correct them. I don't want eunuchs, so I can only try to make some improvements in the later plots. If you have any other opinions, please leave them in the comment area. Except for abuse and advertisements, I will not delete them.

. . . . Goodbye, maybe I am too straight-minded. This kind of novel is more interesting than the Secret Intelligence Service. I changed the map in the middle of the book. The writing is terrible. It is also a novel of the Holy Mother. I can't stand it anymore.

The theme of the novel is quite good, but maybe it would be better if there was no protagonist? What kind of fool is this?

It's so poisonous, the plot is interesting, but the protagonist can show his stupidity in every chapter. I feel embarrassed every time he thinks about it. I recommend the author to take a leave of absence to revise the plot, otherwise there will be no new readers.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the protagonist is mentally retarded. He really relies on the protagonist's aura to survive. The more I read, the more I became annoyed with the protagonist, so I gave up 😅

Are the three golden chapters just for persuading people to quit?

Retreating, retreating, knowing that there is something extraordinary in this world, but not being cautious at all.

The writing of the book reflects the fairy nature of the protagonist. The background of the story is a weird style, which makes the protagonist like a mouse crossing the street and can only practice magic. It also causes the main body to develop a trumpet, but the author refuses to give up the big one, so the protagonist is a time traveler, a copycat and a time travel inventor. The most terrifying thing is that the main character is a time traveler. Jiao wanted to build a modern world in a weird world of immortal cultivation. He started to reason with people and established his own network of relationships, which resulted in some unnecessary conflicts. In order to make the characters in the article closer, he also weakened his network of relationships. But even if you can't use the network to solve the problem, you still have to open a new map. In fact, the characters of fellow immortals and demons are okay and nice to watch, but in fact, the immortals and demons should be more immortal than demons. At the same time, a demonic character likes to reason. He is usually a supporting villain. If he still has a conscience, he can still be described, because the supporting character does not need too much plot. Just delete the parts that are difficult to write because of the character. But if you want to write a protagonist, forget it, unless you have a deep hatred and your parents were harmed. But since the protagonist has traveled through time, the relationship has faded and there is nothing we can do about it. At the same time, brother, your setting is a weird world of cultivating immortals. The weirdness is greater than that of cultivating immortals. The golden fingers of the weird world will be cut off for various reasons, and it is easy to be low-pressure, unless you write something funny. At the same time, you are developing productivity in a weird world. Isn't it funny? The human race in the weird world is almost gone, and you are crazy about doomsday foreshadowing (although there is only one map). You still want to play reform at this time, because the protagonist's identity prevents him from making much changes. In the end, he relies on the protagonist's personal power to push it. The author's cheats in the weird world are difficult to write, and he can only fight monsters and upgrades, but cannot buy time and space scrolls. A year has passed. Forget it, let's not talk about it.