
Zhetian: My Passive Refreshes Infinitely
遮天:我的被动无限刷新
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 551k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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166Chapters
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There has always been a question, why do those protagonists insist on raising their level to the full level in the Novice Village? After another wave across the map, destroy all enemies.
Turn your back to all living things
If you want to write a fan harem, you have to read and write novels like You Are Devouring the Starry Sky and Covering the Sky. There are a few novels about harem that I like to read. Harem is not bad, but there are only a few who can write it well.
I don't understand why the protagonist wants Lin Jia. Firstly, he has no talent and secondly, he has no temperament.
When I read Chapter 30, I was thinking that the protagonist is a person from Earth and a time traveler. He joined the Yaochi Holy Land to suppress this idea of gods. However, he joined the Yao Holy Land for more than a year and has not enjoyed any benefits. He has to work for the Yaochi Holy Land. He worked hard and fought so naturally. There is also Lin Jia, an ordinary earthling who just joined the Yao Holy Land and took a mission to fight with others in the mining area. He didn't even see Lin Jia's cultivation. Is this reasonable? I'm not a native of Yaochi Holy Land, so I can understand people working hard, but I really can't understand the protagonist and this Lin Jia working hard. It's as if they just work their lives off with a salary of 2,000 yuan, and they still sell with gratitude.
Is this covering the sky? It feels like I'm doing martial arts
This talent level classification is a headache
This junior, intermediate, advanced and top classification is enough. We also add the god level, god king level, you know what top level is. Top level means that it has reached the peak, and there is no one above. You can make it a world, or a mortal, a transcendent, an immortal, this kind of thing is also fine, your classification The genre is similar to those who wrote martial arts novels in the past. They were third-rate, second-rate, first-rate, and then acquired nature. Isn't this SB? Realm is nature, first-rate and second-rate. At that time, status in the world was written as realm strength. Thinking about it now gives me a brain hemorrhage. It's similar to this kind of martial arts novel. Intermediate and high levels are divided into levels. If you create a god level and a god king level, which is also a division of life levels, it feels more uncomfortable. Moreover, you don't write clearly what the god level is compared to and what the god king level is compared to. Moreover, you seem to have included not only the talent level, but also the levels of heavenly materials and earthly treasures, which makes me a little confused!
The Holy Land of Yaochi is written like a soft persimmon that anyone would dare to step on. Do you really think that the Western Emperor Pagoda is just a decoration? Why is Ye Fan the enemy of everyone in the original work? Not only because he has a huge treasure, but also because Ye Fan is a casual cultivator with no background and no backing. Looking at the protagonist of this book, he is clearly leaning against the big tree of Yaochi Holy Land, but he acts like a casual cultivator. The plot is simply embarrassing to the bone.
The battle in the mining area doesn't give talents for killing people? Do you mean it can only be given by killing monsters? This is really a rubbish setting
The protagonist is a good-for-nothing, a good-for-nothing golden finger, imitating Ye Fan, but it's a pity that he can't do anything at all, and he has no trump card at all. I only feel aggrieved by arranging these novice and passionate plots, and I only feel that the villain directly buries the protagonist and the Yaochi Holy Land together. It is very happy!
Let me go, Daleiyin Temple is such a dangerous place and you actually still fall in love with that Lin Jia, and this Lin Jia actually still feels sweet. It's a bit toxic, and I feel a bit overwhelmed after reading the book for so many years!
The cover of Qidian is a mirror image flipped with a filter
It feels like Yaochi is like a group of "fists"
Looking at the resume, it is another person who has the highest level in history.
I don't know if it's an illusion that this is not like a Zhetian fan novel. Although the characters and place names are the same, after reading about 20 chapters, I don't feel like I'm reading a Zhetian fan novel. Personal opinion
After all, he has the qualifications of a great emperor but no protector.
The protagonist Jiulong La coffin arrived at the ancient forbidden land. As soon as he came out of the Jiulong La coffin, he was shocked. For a moment, he in the wheel sea realm was sucked dry by the ancient forbidden land, and the protagonist of the generation fell.
The bragging was so awesome that the heroine was so baffled by her mother that she didn't even know why she suddenly had the mentality of regretting losing her. How can I write without thinking?
Actually, how should I put it? I feel like this is not a time travel story but a rebirth story. Is it at its peak when it comes out? Invincible? The talent obtained by using the system can actually see through the system itself? You're really awesome if you think about creating your own method without even having the slightest bit of money.
What about the talents of tardigrades, earthworms, lighthouse jellyfish, and the swarming webs of ants and bees? These are all easy to find!
The author is only eighteen or twenty years old. It feels like the protagonist's mind is filled with women, and the protagonist whose lower body controls the brain is disgusting no matter how talented he is.
What is the connection between the characters in Zhetian and the people in Journey to the West? That is, Wu Chengen saw a corner of the future and got a little information about the future. However, because the world view was not big enough, he wrote a "Journey to the West" based on some of the information he got and combined with reality. So we saw that Sun Wukong's weapon is only one hundred thousand kilograms, and a somersault cloud is only one hundred and eight thousand miles.
This introduction looks like a martial arts novel
Why are there two 102s. . .