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Fuck the plot, the cheating, the competition. But the author's handling is reasonable and smooth. It makes people want to pull off the author's elastic band to see if there is any more.
Uncle Psy came to teach the Chinese team vocationally, he is awesome 🙂, not much else to say, just chase without thinking.
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National football coach Li Tie has more than 100 million yuan in deposits in one bank 👍 The Football Association will usher in a new wave of anti-corruption. But... What's the point? The roots of the big tree are rotten, and all attacks are just "abandoning the car to save the handsome man" 🤔
Another greasy middle-aged man was reborn after being raped. After rebirth, he behaved like a middle school student.
I don't know what you want the protagonist to do by letting him go to Arsenal? We obviously have the ability to win the Champions League, but we have to let the protagonist get injured, fail to reach the final, lose the Champions League to Manchester United, and then lose everything? I can only say that the writing of this season is anticlimactic, and the protagonist is not so stressed, right? Then after staying here for a year, you have to transfer to Real Madrid. So what is the significance of what you wrote about Arsenal this year? Why not go to Real Madrid from the beginning? If you want to suppress the protagonist, you can let him get injured in Real Madrid, or you can force him. So you played at Arsenal for one year, forced all four players to lose, and then transferred, did you deliberately disgust the readers?
The heroine can be fixed, Monica can
The golden finger in the back was directly downplayed, and the protagonist's upgrade route became a mystery. They were all playing games, and then lying down and lying down. It seemed almost interesting. It's a pity that it started with such an interesting thing. I feel that the author is very thoughtful. He traveled to an era when the national football team has not become garbage. Maybe he can really save someone?
Give me some examples. After all, I am also someone who has written game novels. On the one hand, it can strengthen the protagonist's existing characteristics, On the other hand, it can make up for the flaws. On the other hand, it can be used only to create cool points. First of all, the protagonist's defense is very good. Although you have been emphasizing this point, author, I think , In fact, we can go a little further, Just like that god-level goalkeeper, the protagonist in it has become a nightmare for many forwards because of the golden finger. There is even a protagonist effect. Some research has found that when many forwards face the protagonist, the goalkeeper, every time they are saved, the accuracy of the next goal will be threatened to decrease - isn't it awesome? There is also the book I Am Kaka Kaka which is well done, the ability is simple and easy to understand, refreshing and well written, Without going into details, give some specific abilities, the author understands, for example: You will never stop chasing victory, and every opponent who faces you will tremble because of your persistence and fanaticism, and you will seize any opportunity to defend your territory - the entire stadium. In the process of chasing the opponent's football, every meter you move accumulates a layer of momentum. The momentum makes the opponent more likely to panic and make mistakes when facing you. When the football returns to your own feet, the accumulated layers return to zero. In this way, it makes more sense when the protagonist chases the ball and runs around the midfield, and the opponent becomes more prone to mistakes over time, and becomes afraid of the protagonist (thinking that the protagonist is a monster, a modified person, unlimited physical strength, and taking stimulants), which is reasonable and can be written more happily. Or, the protagonist is very strong and strong, but this aspect of the portrayal is only used to break the defense before scoring, which is a pity, How about disrupting the situation? Trapped: The ball is at the opponent's feet, and can be activated when one person faces more than three people. It lasts for twenty seconds. The pace and speed during the period are increased by 15%, and the interception success rate is increased by 15%. It is almost unstoppable and will not be injured. But it will lose control and chase the football crazily until the ball returns to your feet, or the effect disappears. Limited to one use per day. This is a way of writing that the protagonist explodes when facing a bus, or a dense enemy, etc. Imagine that the protagonist is facing four or five people, and he is holding the ball from the opposite side. He rushes forward like crazy, just like a German tank running into the Polish cavalry. Everywhere he goes is a mess, just like the classic moment when Ronaldo was shut down. The physical fitness is strong enough to shock, How fun, how cool? Which man hasn't had fun with himself, and on what occasions has he charged into battle? Of course moderate, moderate, One more, like stacking poor buffs for the opponent, Defensive Tyrant: Victory belongs to you, and can only belong to you, Every interception, tackle, and destruction can slightly weaken the opponent's morale or fighting spirit, and weakly increase the success rate of subsequent defenses. When an enemy player faces you alone and fails to break through, the weakening effect is doubled, and there is a probability of causing short-term fear. Just like the god-level goalkeeper mentioned above, Maybe you can also come up with a noun, which summarizes the situation where midfielders and forwards have weak legs after being intercepted many times by the protagonist. Isn't it wonderful? There is also speed, which can actually be enhanced, because the physical energy is already too much to use up, so let's sum it up, Wind and Lightning: At the expense of accelerating physical energy consumption, gradually increase the sprint speed (slightly), lasting for 10 seconds, and cooling down for fifteen minutes. In this competition, every time this skill is used, the physical energy consumed and acceleration increase proportionally. The limitation of this skill is that it is not very obvious at the beginning, and it requires acceleration time, but it is very suitable for the protagonist in the frontcourt to rush back to the penalty area to defend. Use it a few times in the game, and the physical consumption will begin to increase. But it will become fiercer and fiercer, and the more you fight, the harder it will be. Strong. Of course, if you think this is too outrageous, you can change it. That is, if you rush fast for the first time and then slowly, it will not fit very well. You can also set it to activate the ability for any time. The longer you rush, the faster the speed and the greater the physical consumption. Yes, it is not just defense, the protagonist speeds up. Just like Kaka, you can also make up for your technical weaknesses by overcoming your opponents. Speaking of this aspect, to become the king of the ball, you really can't have too obvious shortcomings. The protagonist's dribbling, those fancy ones are not very good, his foot skills are not very good, this ... You can take out the plunder at the beginning and change it to select a value on a player. When fighting against him, you have the opportunity to steal some of the opponent's attributes, such as dribbling, passing, precise shooting, set kicks, The protagonist's ability cannot be higher than that of the opponent, or you can learn the stealing method of the simulator. Although your setting is that the protagonist is a mudslide, it is actually not inconsistent with the protagonist being able to show off his bicycle sometimes. It is just that before the content that can be written becomes less in the later period, every football writer will think about whether to give the protagonist more ability to write. Some, there are trade-offs, there are gains and losses, and some are better, It depends on experience, Then I agreed to be the spiritual leader, Lao Tie, but you actually... Hey, apart from shouting slogans and saying it a few times, I did nothing else. Waiting for time to ferment and let the strength convince the other party is really not a proactive behavior. For this you have to have charisma, psychological understanding of others, the way to govern, and how to control subordinates, all aspects, This can be seen when the author writes that when faced with a disadvantage, the protagonist chooses to shout slogans, and then it is useless... Let's put it this way, in fact, the protagonist does not take a dominant position in the interaction with other characters, except for the one who changed his nationality, Because the correct leader will not only gain the right to speak, but also use the right to speak to gain more, and In the end, it leads the subordinates, and finally becomes a spiritual symbol, Well, it is a bit mysterious, personality charm is not easy to change, and emotional intelligence, you can't force it to increase, directly become a man, and readers will not buy it. My suggestion is to go a little deeper, don't be so shallow that it is just a slogan or something. Of course, no matter how deep it is, it is actually not easy to write.
I don't care about the rest. The protagonist must be patriotic. Damn, what are you thinking about when you have a child and you don't want to become a citizen? Don't deviate from the general direction. Who wants to see Banana Man?
{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Article Filling Festival Wishing Season"}The latest chapter is a bit poisonous. You don't have to be injured and lose the Champions League to join Real Madrid. Isn't it a more perfect ending to join Real Madrid with the Champions League champion? I feel that the author is a Manchester United fan and forced Manchester United to win the Triple Crown. Although I am also a Ferguson fan, this writing is very poisonous.
Bellucci, the flower of the earth, can be the heroine 👍
Of course I support the gossip and gossip in the early stage. I will consider marrying a decent wife in the later stage. Among the outstanding natural beauties in the early stage is Cheryl. I think she is very worthy of consideration and is also very loyal to the relationship. The most unpleasant thing is the beast Ashley Cole married, who is ugly and whorings outside every day [fn= 51] If it comes to the later stage, should we consider the early stage of Kim Kardashian? Although she likes to be exposed, it has not been exposed in the United States that she cheated on others when she was dating others, just like "Daji and Yang Yuhuan" were forcibly blamed for causing disaster to the country and the people 😤😤😤
Guoan lost to Jingchuan Wenhui, who won the championship, which is outrageous
Don't wander. At least give Roma a Champions League Introducing Gattuso, it must be Gattuso, after all, it is a template! Pluto maintains his form, Totti reaches his peak, the protagonist is at a point of growth, and the central axis of the Champions League is there. Replacement with Lipian Shuai. Get the first Serie A treble.
He transferred to Arsenal, but ended up staying there for just one season without winning any championships. Why write about him?
Cut it off as soon as possible. Don't waste time. Starting over is the right choice for you. Too many flaws
Is there such a shortage of people in this palace? It hasn't been released for so long 😴
It's true, I just discovered a good book, ugh
It was already two years ago that I stopped updating. Time flies so fast.