There Is a Big Problem with My System of Cultivating Immortals

I originally came here to find faults, but as I read, I forgot to find faults. You can't deceive people by reading experience. This book is very good, but when I read it, it always gave me the illusion that the system's existence was very low, as if it was dispensable. A book I read before called "I Just Don't Play According to the Routine" was the opposite. Lu Wen, the system in this book has a strong sense of presence, and it does not overwhelm the main character, making the protagonist a foil. You can learn from it. However, there is also a problem in his book, that is, the protagonist feels like a puppet of the system. He does whatever the system tells the protagonist to do. Although it is full of laughter, it still feels a bit awkward after reading for a long time.

[Opinion Building] When setting sail for a new book, the biggest fear is not receiving feedback from readers. Yueyue doesn't know how many people read my books, and I don't know how many people will like my books, but whether you like them or hate them, I hope brothers can give me valuable opinions. Moonlight will definitely actively correct them and write the best plots for brothers in the best possible condition! Thanks! Thanks again! I say important things three times, thanks anyway!

It looks pretty good, but this book reminds me of a book I've read before. I just don't play by the rules. It's a bit similar. So far, it doesn't seem to be too bad. I wish the author a great success with his new book

As a non-Chief, I finally got the chance...

At first glance, this book seems to be just a bad joke, just to make people laugh. After reading it in depth, I found that it has a clever setting and a solid foundation. It is suitable not only for novices but also for adults.

I feel like this novel is going to be popular. It's well written. Come on, author.

Harem or single woman? As a single woman, I consciously leave 😌

Pictures come from the Internet, infringement will be deleted

Very interesting comic, I don't know where it comes from😋

Smooth, online IQ, reasonable!

I think there is nothing wrong with this book, and I will support it in the future. Please say goodbye, eunuch, and you must stick to it.

Personally, I feel that this system is better than the one that doesn't follow the rules, and the two causal lines involved are promising.

Your novel is indeed very interesting, and it feels so difficult to write. Once you reach 1 million words, you can definitely take off. At that time, it is best not to stop updating, even if you update once a day. It doesn't matter if it's too slow, it's fine! 🍀

I subscribed to them all in one fell swoop. It's well written and I'm very supportive.

It's well written, but I don't understand it because it's not popular.

The second half of life is about your health, you must take good care of yourself🍀

Your novel is so beautiful, I burst out laughing. Don't stop updating, the updates are too slow.

Hello, sorry to bother you. The second part "One Punch Man, I Break the Stress" is officially released today, thank you! Now, I don't dare to doodle and write.

It's been a while since I heard from you. In normal times, remember to exercise more, and a regular work and rest routine is particularly important. Find a comfortable balance. Health is the capital of revolution. [Write 6,000 words and only update 4,000 words. Write 3,000 words and only update 2,000 words. Write 2,000 words and update every two days. Sleep well 💤 If you are too tired or too busy, you will slow down your writing speed.

There has been no update for five days😭I like the system to be a monster. Let me go, since you can write like this... That's awesome, Mr. Moon!

OMG! It's so beautiful, I can't stop watching it!

I can't figure out the Qidian reading software, and I can't find [Youya Little Moon]...

Haven't heard from you for a long time. 2023, Come on! Thank you! Before, my whole body was weak, my throat was like a knife cutting, and my whole body was extremely uncomfortable. It took about six days to truly recover. Writing a book is important, health is even more important! ... First: get medicine and drink more hot water. Second: Keep your mood calm. Third: In the morning, walk outside for 20 minutes (do stretching exercises). Fourth: Go to bed early. Fifth: Don't take a shower. (But underwear, underwear, and pants should be wiped on the body and changed every two days.) Sixth: While taking medicine, buy some monk fruit or fat seaweed soaked in water to drink. 2023, health first!

I think the writing is interesting. When will the third work be released? I don't understand your work, why can't I find it in Qidian. Com?

For the next one, remember to write 1 million words. When will the second work be released? (Before mid-March for me, what about you?)

What a pity. Personally, I think it's well written.

[Five-star recommendation] (It doesn't look good. You team up to beat me. My home is in Mushroom Village, Longhai District, Zhangzhou City, Fujian Province.) Finally, I stopped writing and studying for a few months and officially published the third part. Thank you very much!

Sorry to bother you. I feel like no one is as idiotic as me, who just saved a manuscript of 1.5 Million words. Fortunately🍅all signed... Thank you!

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