Dragon Tribe: Dragon of Eternal Time

A bit outrageous.

Regarding the character of the protagonist, I will give a unified reply here. If you write about a vicissitudes of old monster, it will be very boring. Will anyone read it? Isn't Lezi a very nice person? Who stipulates that the longer you live, the more vicissitudes of your character you will have?

To highlight the point, this is a fun novel with multiple female protagonists.

The protagonist is the Time Dragon in DND. Do you feel that the protagonist is weakened too much now? The Time Dragon can penetrate time and see the experiences of people or things. Is the writing on perception a bit too weak? As a dragon that has lived for 5,000 years, the protagonist has retained his humanity, but his life experience is much longer than that of a life that only lasted 18 years. Doesn't he act a little too human? After all, the protagonist is set to be the legendary Dragon King. If a dragon is no different from a human, then this identity will be meaningless. But this book has just begun, and everything is still uncertain. I hope the author can handle these things well.

Save the high-quality quotes you heard and saw in the second grade, maybe they will appear in the article! For example: Behold, your death star shines in the sky.

To be honest, the biggest flaw of your novel is that you only describe Lu Mingfei when there is nothing wrong. Also, the protagonist is too nice to Lu Mingfei and acts like a man. It looks strange. To be honest, if you even put a little bit of description of Lu Mingfei into the protagonist's feelings, it will be more attractive than this. This is not a tomb robbing novel, but you still need a heroine to play the main emotional role. A tomb robbing novel doesn't need a female protagonist. I would also like to mention that even if you don't intend to push the heroine, it doesn't matter. You just need them to establish a relationship in the chapter. If the relationship is not established, she is not a heroine.

The protagonist, after being a dragon for 5,000 years, will he still like humanoid women? XPs all look like dragons, right?

Looks too much like the Crooked Dragon King 🙂

The legendary dragon species, the Time Dragon. The growth methods are random, one second is a baby dragon, the next second is an ancient dragon.

The author should write more roles for the protagonist, why does it feel like they are all Lu Mingfei's roles...😰

The invincible cool writing can save the regrets of the past. The protagonist won't be frustrated, just be happy and that's it! It is safe to eat. Here comes the point! Please read it! The new book is a must-read!

The way it was written more than ten years ago is too old. It's also so boring. No ups and downs of rhythm.

I have read a lot of novels related to dragons, but this is the first time I have seen the Dragon-related Invincible style. All in all, this book is still very good. The locations of every cool point are very reasonable, and you will not feel boring when you are not enjoying the fun. The various plots are very interesting. In fact, I have not read Dragons, but I still have some understanding of this book. Although it is an adaptation of Dragons, the general plot is not lost. I hope the author will continue to maintain it. The protagonist must not drift in the later period, otherwise the rating will be low.

Will the heroine accept Nono? If you accept it, the Norton chapter is an opportunity.

Old Tang lives in Brooklyn, New York.

Now that I see it, I'd better say it All opinions represent my own personal opinion. If there is anything wrong, please discuss it rationally😂, I'm a little scared. . In terms of plot, it generally follows the original work, which is fine, but it just feels like it lacks some unknown surprises. Then there is the setting of the protagonist. The protagonist is a dragon, or a dragon set by DND. However, there are too few places in the novel that reveal the identity and setting of the protagonist. Except for the occasional use of controlling time, there is almost no sense of the characteristics of the protagonist as a dragon. If it is just for time control, what is the meaning of the dragon setting? I came here after seeing the author's review from the Brass Dragon next door. The Brass Dragon over there was very well written. The talkative patient even built a dragon's nest under Kassel. It really made me feel like I was watching another Brass Dragon. The other one is I am the Dragon King in the Dragon Clan. This book is the protagonist of the original Dragon Clan, so it looks more human-like and fits the description of the Dragon King in the original work. However, he has made more magical changes to the original work. If you are looking forward to seeing a different Dragon Clan, then it is indeed good. The following paragraph may be criticized, but again, it only represents my personal opinion, please be gentle if you want to criticize😫 Back to the problem of this book, now, I only saw the protagonist and Lu Mingfei transform into wings once when chatting on the top floor at the beginning, and never showed or used the dragon body again. Of course, this can be explained that the protagonist is too strong and does not need to use the dragon body, but for readers like me who like dragons, it does feel like something is missing. I have seen a word in other comment areas called dragon-skinned people, which means people wearing dragon skin. To put it bluntly, it means removing the protagonist's time dragon setting and replacing it with a human with a time-control golden finger. Overall, there will be no problem at all. The dragon setting is dispensable. This is also a common problem when writing dragon protagonists. But considering that this is a fanfic about dragons and not just about dragons about strange beasts, it still depends on what the author thinks. The main reason why I personally consider this issue is because I was attracted by the setting of the Time Dragon Clan. I see that there are too few aspects of the Dragon Clan now, both in form and character, so it looks no different from the ordinary Invincible Dragon Clan fandom. There are a lot of dragon fanfics, but there are very few where the protagonist is a dragon. I found this one with great difficulty. I hope the author will pay attention to it. Of course, if the author has already thought about how to write, don't pay too much attention to what I say. If I influence the author, it's fine if it's a good direction, but if it's counterproductive, it's a heinous crime 😥

Let's just say, author, do you still remember that the protagonist has terrifying abilities? From around the 170th chapter, he started to become like an ordinary person, completely unable to use his abilities.

Ask a question, who are the heroines?

Let's have some emotional drama, isn't there multiple female protagonists? Wherever you can see there is a female protagonist, it's all written about Long San

As far as I'm concerned, this novel is really enjoyable, but it's a dragon fanfic after all, so I have to highlight the characteristics of dragon youth literature, such as being more passionate and romantic. I'm optimistic about the idea of ​​​​this novel, but it seems a bit bland at the moment.

Can anyone tell me when the protagonist will not only smile?

After reading the first few chapters, I don't know why but I feel like I changed the names of the people and it looked like a city god novel.

Even though I have never read Dragon Family, I watched it with gusto, but the number of words is too small. Can the author fix the update time?

The dragon of eternity and time, miss you

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Although this is a bit offensive, I hope the male protagonist will not have the infertility constitution in the future.

To make things bigger, Tachibana Masamune is Bondarev and the king is Herzog, but Bondarev doesn't know the existence of the other party. In the end, they arranged for the two to face each other and let Uesugi Koshi be their intermediary 😜

How many heroines? ? ? Tell me