Tiangong: I Have a Library

Thoughts after reading The pace is too fast, the plot is abrupt, and the twists are abrupt. The introduction to the plug-in is a little sparse. An all-encompassing description can also show the power of the plug-in. Once the skills are released, a brief description can also deepen the impression. In the early stage, I suddenly separated from my sister, and my sister also left directly with a stranger. To be honest, the doctor didn't even form a picture in my mind, so we said goodbye in a hurry. After that, I suddenly learned swordsmanship and wanted to buy a sword made of meteorite iron. The family gave a girl as a gift. . . Divine intuition, why don't you learn fortune-telling with such a powerful intuition? The plot is not explored in depth and it is difficult to get involved. I hope the author will continue to work hard and dig deeper to make the plot more interesting and the characterization more delicate and profound.

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