Da Qin: Qimen Rescues the Frightened Salamander After the Start of the Game

At the beginning, I had no connection with it. I just wanted to do whatever I wanted and be carefree. The heroine was still a baby fish.

I don't know why, but when I read novels, I'm particularly bothered by the experience card thing. You have the ability to pretend to be awesome, but if you don't have it, why don't you just develop your hard power? You always engage in those imaginary things, and you feel like you don't have any strength at all. You're like a waste, and you all rely on experience cards and stuff like that.

If there are many female protagonists, you should take Yan Lingji, Baby Fish, Chao Banshee, Zi Nu, Hong Lian, Xiao Meng, Shao Siming, Da Siming, Nong Yu, Yan Fei, Hu Meiren Sister Hua, and Tian Mi.

Every day I save the Amazing Salamander at the beginning, why can't I not save it? Nine out of ten books start with saving the Amazing Salamander, which makes me burst into tears (I don't mean it's not good-looking)

How should I put it? You haven't improved the protagonist's hard power at all. You only rely on experience cards. I'm confused. Anyway, there are so many maps in the world of Qin Dynasty. There is nothing wrong with you even if you make the protagonist invincible And it's already 2022. If you are still the Riddler, who will buy your account?

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The person who wrote this book should be a novice, especially a new novice. The writing is so innocent

Is the protagonist, the Saint, mentally ill? ? With Taixu Wonderland, a group of ordinary villagers were actually brought in, so unreliable! ! ! ! Shouldn't we slowly find suitable orphans and then bring them in for development? Don't say that it's because they have been modified by both hands, so you accept them all. This is not enough reason. When you have permanent dual authorization in the future, you can have as many people as you want.

I just saw Chapter 32, and I have some thoughts. 1. Why is it that in Qin Shi, the Tianzong martial arts of Qin Shi are not practiced very much, and most of the strength of the whole body relies on Fenghou Qimen's hard work. If it is really not possible, I can only rely on the experience card to pass the level? In terms of senses, the protagonist has no hard power. He relies entirely on experience cards to show off his skills, and almost no Taoist skills are used. 2. Most of the Golden Finger content comes from Genshin Impact, and it feels very much like a Genshin Impact fan with Qin Shipi's skin. 3. The protagonist sets up some kind of so-called Tianwaitian organization. The name is really hard to criticize, but I basically don't understand what it is going to do. Do I want to establish a paradise, or do I want to establish a situation similar to a modern country, or what, and what is the purpose. I feel like the male protagonist just saw the people's desperation and suddenly did something like this on a whim. I don't know what the purpose is. It's quite fascinating.

It's okay for an organization to just get started. The more I write about it, the more it feels like a club. He keeps recruiting women, and every woman likes him, and then the previous woman becomes jealous again, and it turns into a palace drama again. Then the protagonist pretends to be there again. Headache

The protagonist's power has been weakened like this, and he still needs Xue Yue to help repel the enemy. Since he wants to grow, don't set it like that in the early stage. Now it has been reduced to this for the sake of rhythm. What is there to see? The further it goes, the more boring it becomes.

Why do you have to be frightened? It's okay to have an ex-boyfriend. You have to carry the baby in your belly.

Summoning characters is too inconsistent. Aren't there enough characters for Qin Shi Mingyue for you to write? Personal opinion, don't blame me if you don't like it

Hmm... I was persuaded to quit after Chapter 10... To be honest, the concept is very good. At the beginning, I thought it was a good book! However, the author Jun is really just as he said, he is a newbie and his writing skills are limited! In just a few chapters, when I first came out of the world, I experienced the card forcefully loading coins into the plot, and then suddenly I was in a fairyland... After loading the coins, I asked a group of ordinary people to keep it secret... Full of all kinds of poisonous points...

If you spend more money, I will be a dog. The net will assassinate the protagonist without restraint. The protagonist has brought Li Hanyi with him, and then he can't even kill Tian Ziyi. After watching it for so long, the main character is a loser. Anyone can bully the protagonist, but no one can do anything about the protagonist. For such a poisonous novel, Qin Shi and his colleagues at the starting point are also so poisonous.

If you write about the Qin Dynasty, you should write about the Qin Dynasty. How could the Qin Dynasty be short of women? What's the point of giving other characters from another world? Are you crazy about women? Writing mixed in, why not write about personal unlimited flow

I lost interest when I saw you opening a space. What the hell, it felt like a joke. How could a killer trust you immediately? I'll just listen to you for a few seconds. Wei Wuji is not as good as you.

As a person with status like the Lord, he is always in front of everything. How is it any different from a tool guy? Since the story is about the plot, as the Lord, you should use your brain to plan. You have to do it yourself. Not to mention doing it yourself, your combat power has been reduced. You have to draw a trap and Xue Yue, the strongest combat power, takes action to help repel it. Then you, the Lord, are just a tool person who can only hug his thighs and shout 666?

I'm convinced, since you want to write fantasy, just open a different world. What did you write about Qin Dynasty, poisonous hair

I don't think so. Writers should write more about Chinese mythology and make a game out of it. The writing is weird. Go read this book by Qin Shi Novelist. The content in it is really good.

Collecting opinions. This is my first time writing a book. Many aspects may not be well thought out. If you have any suggestions, please post them below. We will consider them as appropriate! Thank you! ! !

After reading Chapter 30, I don't even know what the protagonist's position is? Should you live in Qin Tongyuan or help Han Fei? Only writing about development, Tianwaitian and Recruiting Women seem useless.

The author is great, can you write about Douluo Continent's fight against the sky later? Let the protagonist go to Douluo Continent

It is recommended not to watch with your brain

It's a stretch on the hips, it's too much on the hips. It's written like a running account, and it's not interesting.

Tide succubus?

This is another NC article. The Jing family provokes the protagonist's influence in various ways, and they live better than anyone else. Three Poxu can compete with a sword fairy. In the end, the Mo family came to act as peacemakers. It's really speechless to see

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the first few chapters and the overall idea are still good, but since the protagonist has a secret realm, it is not good. This kind of thing is too unmatched compared to the strength of the protagonist.

Thinking back on why I gave up, I opened it up seriously, and I already have the Chenge Pot, why not have a "Heavenly Moves Everything"