Lurking Starts with the Pretender

The first one is Qin Feng with the flag flying, and the second one is Lin Manyun of the Women's Rangers

Jinse Fifty Strings

In fact, Yu Manli is not bad as a girl. I am very upset that she is not the heroine of the TV series

"You can walk slowly, but you must remember your original intention and never look back. "

I read it before it was put on the shelf, and I didn't like it very much. I can tell that the author wanted to write a serious spy novel, but the beginning was not good, and it felt a bit superfluous. Otherwise, don't involve other things, or just keep cheating until the end. It's very uncomfortable for you to be neither good nor bad. In fact, you deleted the memory of the spy war drama. Except for a normal person, he would not do such a stupid thing. He knows more about the public Japanese military operations in history than the protagonist can get from going inside. He brings the protagonist's experience over the years and directly comes to Shanghai to start the pretender. Even Hong Kong's undercover agents know they won't act like this. Is there some misunderstanding about the intelligence agency? It gets even more ridiculous later. I don't feel that it's against any of the informal spy novels you write, but I find it a little uncomfortable when you write serious ones.

After reading this book, I realized how awesome our party's spy work is. No wonder Wang Jingwei lamented that the so-called spy war is actually a battle between the underground party and the former underground party.

I like Minglou, who has a hidden high-level identity in three aspects. After reading the introduction, I thought this was the same, but it turns out that the identity is really a minor figure, which is boring.

It's nothing interesting. The protagonist has been around for so many years and is still a small character. He tells a joke and it's funny how a policeman can get some useful information.

Invisible Guardian: The border area also needs ambitious young people like you.

Who said we were running errands for general affairs and logistics? Which level of officials, large and small, should not be served?

If you want to blame me, I'm the one to blame. I've done such an excellent job as a military commander that my own people hate me to the core!

It's almost a hundred chapters, and the pig's feet are jumping up and down like a Sabi. I don't know what he's doing. It's basically following the original plot. I'm not good at watching TV series. I'm here to see what you're doing in Chinese translation.

So everyone knows the plot and then looks at the protagonist confused and anxious?

Wang Manchun will be the heroine, otherwise it would be a fool's errand!

Basically, they are all TV dramas. The main character in the middle of 10,000 words is less than 200, so it is better to watch TV dramas!

Is Song Yi good-looking? Good-looking? No, just average

This works too😏

Should I accept it from Manli? ? ? ?

Regardless of character, I prefer Wang Manchun😁😁😁

It seems a bit hazy, and I have been working for eight years, and I am still a small person, and I have strengthened my mental and physical fitness. After watching a little bit, I feel like it's the same with or without him.

If you don't know how to write fan fiction, just go and learn it. What kind of thing are you good at? There is no logic, no excitement, and it also likes to play with mysteries. There is no short-term goal or main line. It makes people look confused. Many redundant details are redundant. Protagonist, protagonist, unfold the plot around the protagonist. Don't switch perspectives at will. Whatever you think comes out, and in the end it ends up being neither fish nor fowl.

I didn't know what you were writing until I saw it on the shelves. Most of the original plot was written into text, and all the lines were completely copied. The main character travels back in time but doesn't know the plot. It's a stupid enough setting. To copy large parts of the original drama is to treat the readers as idiots. The original plot is also confusing and shrouded in mist. This is enough to be criticized by so many people... Spy war stories can't accept this grievance

At the end of the second chapter, Wang Manchun called you and asked you to come over. In the third chapter, it became Wang Erzhu's message to you.

It's so confusing to read, what's all written?

Written according to the TV series, the plot, dialogue, and demeanor. How should I put it? There is no main line and I don't understand it.

Is there a lower part? Why is the upper part finished?

Why can't I understand? It's such a mess. Is it because I'm uneducated?

Book owner, let me borrow a precious place to promote my book, thank you. New book: I pursue heroines in the film and television world. The stock of manuscripts is large and the management is full. Investment is welcome. Now write about the world of pretenders.

The protagonist has no sense of existence. What I want to watch is the protagonist's role, not other people's plots. . .

There aren't any good reviews. It seems really bad.