Genshin Impact Yae Is My Sister

Qian Ling, the plot you wrote is a bit incoherent, and the sense of immersion is not very good, although the one I wrote is worse than yours.

It looks great. I'm going to work hard to update it! !

I have been following Da Da's articles for a while, so I would like to share my thoughts after reading them. It's quite emotional. I also came here from Yuan Shen Wen, which is a big book. This writing is more mature and smooth than the previous one. The character creation is also very rich, and the emotions of the characters can be seen from some small places. When I see discussions, there are always people talking about the character of the protagonist. I feel that there are too many protagonists who are cheating, but the protagonist here makes me feel very real. Closer to life. The protagonist shows his inner tenderness towards life and the world. I will keep chasing. It is a kind of enjoyment to find warm stories in warm corners. Come on

To be honest, the scene where the protagonist was framed was not a very good one. Barbatos' behavior was outrageous and not mentally retarded. Your previous article did not foreshadow the protagonist and Barbatos' daily mutually destructive relationship as close buddies. Instead, you wrote a paragraph about Barbatos' unilateral prank. Protagonist, this time they start to frame the protagonist directly. The description of the West Wind Knights' handling is also weird. If something happens at this time, if you don't investigate it carefully before making a decision, you will be disgusted. You are a white fox, I want to use your white hair as an eyepatch? Then the protagonist is not angry at all, and then sends him to the Knights. Good guy, knowing that you are facing the Immortal Liyue from the neighboring country, he will directly give you a full range of legal sanctions and warnings to suppress others¿ You said that you are a powerful country and no one is afraid of using your power to overwhelm others. You are awesome. What will happen to Mondstadt? Most of the combat forces have gone out for expeditions. In this situation, Mondstadt still handles diplomatic issues like those fool diplomats from the Kingdom of Solstice. The last diplomat who was so good at diplomacy still has a mask 😅. The protagonist is also a heavyweight player. If someone takes the blame at home and directly slaps your face, you have no temper at all. You are not good at fighting and killing. You can't convince people with a few normal theories? Is the protagonist a DouM?

I'm not telling you, in just these dozens of chapters, I only have one impression of the protagonist, that is, he doesn't dare to cause trouble. Who is responsible for all this trouble? In the end, he didn't even apologize. Knowing that the other party is Liyue Immortal and not handling it well is a political issue between two countries. You just prevaricate it, and you have no temper at all.

Brother Long: The mountains are high and the foxes are wild, Yae is my sister

The mountains are high and the foxes are wild, Yae is my sister. The fox is idle in the mountain stream, Yae cheated me of money. The fox is making trouble in the mountains, Yae and I want it. The fox on the mountain is beautiful, kiss me eight times on the mouth. The fox at the foot of the mountain is charming, and the eight weights press me to sleep. There is a fox on the mountain, and Yae is my wife. The fox outside the mountain is the green mountain, and the fox is outside the fox. Yae obediently enters my pot. The former god has turned into a pink fox, and the sister of the god is really lustful. There is no way to Narukami Taisha Shrine. I live in Yaegomiya Shrine. Ayaka breaks away from the leash and walks away. Yae, I am your dog.

I literally vomited. Why do all the protagonists of Genshin Impact have to go around messing around with women? Is it interesting? You said it would be okay if the emotional process of the person next door, Qiuqiu Ren, was very delicate. However, if the emotional process is so rough, it feels like the protagonist has not done anything yet, and various girls have already fallen in love with him. His character is completely wrong. If your writing skills are not good, then don't write this kind of thing. Can't you write an emotional line carefully?

So the protagonist in Mondstadt was not only raped, tortured and imprisoned? Is there no other action? Ying has no power to recover and can only use the little wind given by Barbatos to fight Tevarin in the air. You, the protagonist, an immortal, have his shield broken by someone else's breath? Not to mention whether you have the appearance of an immortal or something like that, do you really have no temper at all and no one is toying with you? Author: Are you such a person in your life? Then please tell me where you are and I will come to you to ask for money.

After reading novels for so many years, there are no powerful ones like the Virgin Mary or the good old Asasi. Who is not decisive and decisive in killing? To put it bluntly, who has the power to abide by the rules? I am afraid that not everyone will become a citizen of the motherland. The protagonist of your book is just a mortal with no power, and his mentality has not changed at all. He is as useless as Kusanagi Godou of Godslayer. I have no idea what the main character in your book, Jiji Waiwai, is worried about. Just one word, coward.

It is worthy of being a daily guide

The protagonist is wronged and has to explain to the people who wronged him. This makes the protagonist feel cowardly. If the protagonist doesn't explain, there can be a few chapters with small climaxes later. Now the plot is average. The protagonist is a bit like an outsider. The plot is too bland. Is it a transitional plot now?

If you have any opinions, please give me any advice. I would like anything for the new book.

The writing is the same as Song and Jin, the stronger one pretends to be a grandson, and the weaker one is arrogant like you👴

There is a saying that I read this book before it was put on the shelves, and my blood pressure was very high while I was reading it. This protagonist gives me the impression that he has no temper and is so soft.

I always feel like the main character is written like a coward

Has anyone written that I am Ling Hua's dog?

Mountains are high and foxes are wild, Yae is my sister

Your resume is different from the content of the book.

I read novels just for fun! You, the protagonist, are really frustrated.

It's very interesting, but I suggest you skip the part where the protagonist is framed. Everything else is fine.

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It's very disturbing to see how the protagonist doesn't fight back when he is bullied.

My Zhongli Wind one-handed sword.

Why is there no character avatar?

I hope this book will have a single heroine~Kamizato Ayaka, please give me some strength (sad)

The opening chapters are really illogical, it sucks

Mountains are high and foxes are wild, Yae is my sister

I can't stand it anymore, the skirmishers are too poisonous.

Who is the heroine? Is it Sister Tan?