Alliance's Lucky Wheel System

The writing in the first few dozen chapters was pretty good, but when the girl came on the scene, it just didn't feel right. It turned into the strong stench of third-rate urban writing, which is really a pity😓

To be honest, the author, I read it very interestingly at the beginning, but then a "big shot" came and said that it should be banned. Don't you find it disgusting after reading it? The subject matter you wrote is quite good, why do you have to add a paragraph with such poisonous points? To enrich the protagonist's experience? Come on, which reader these days doesn't read novels to relax and relax? Reading this novel makes you feel disgusted? You can think about how many people this book has read after you wrote this point. That's it, there is nothing to comment on.

I just like Wudiwen

Sent at 3 o'clock in the morning. Please read and vote! ! !

Unified reply: Eye of God is a live broadcast in the early stage of the transition, to improve the program effect, and later in games and professions, there are no such plug-ins that extremely affect the balance of the game. These holes will be filled in later, don't worry.

This book has a complete outline and the main plot line is very clear If you think it is okay now, then you will not be disappointed in the future In the early stage, the operations and team battles will be written in more detail The middle stage and later will be a lot more exciting Especially from the perspective of competition and commentary, this is what the author is good at Finally, I want to say: it is really important to read the new book! There are not many words now, I hope all my friends can click to the last chapter Thank you to all readers who have read this book!

I just like to see interesting things, the overall perspective is so cool

Don't say anything else. Don't make any random claims like "the hottest in 2022" if you don't get there. One look at the 160,000-word lv1, which really lowers the initial impression.

Looking forward to the new book, I hope you won't read it. It's really important to me to read the last chapter directly! ! ! Thank you everyone for reading! Please correct me for any errors or deficiencies! Thank you for the steamed buns! ! !

It's appropriate to add a little more about the protagonist's past. Now the character feels a bit fragmented.

To be honest, it's good to watch, but updates are too slow. Ten chapters a day is enough to read.

It's very well written and can be compared with the one from Jiangsu University of Science and Technology.

I found an interesting phenomenon. Genuine readers like to read alliance articles that are original or have reasonable cheats and do not affect the balance of the game. And many readers who turn to pirated copies as soon as they are released are more interested in the invincible feeling of Goldfinger. My idea is to completely weaken the role of the golden finger during the competition. Why, because the protagonist does not need it. So friends, don't worry, there are no full pictures in the back, the competition will be written so that you can read it relatively comfortably.

If you have any good memes or ideas, you can post them in this forum, so that the author can copy them... Ah, let's learn from them.

The live broadcast is well written, the brother is sensational and the girl smells bad

I remember the first time I read the league book Pig's Knuckle, which seemed to be called Xia Xin. I thought the book was really well written. Whether it was a game or an emotional drama, it was all very well written. If the author could handle the relationship between the two parties, it would be good to continue writing it. Some people don't like emotional drama in e-sports books because the author can't handle the relationship between the two parties well. If it can be written well, I think a lot of people won't mind. This book is one of the best among the alliance articles in the past few months. Come on, the author, and strive for 10,000 yuan per day! (Brainless comment, you are right)

The writing is very good, but the plot is a bit too bloody. Times have changed.

That's it. When you see it in Daodu, you can just order it all in such a short time.

Jkd, science and leaves are updated too slowly 😭 There are not many good books.

It's really poisonous to see the fog of war open. Isn't this the same as peeking into the screen? Other cheats are within the rules of the game, but if you remove the fog of war, it is completely cheating.

New chapter. . What does the protagonist mainly express? . Should I pursue a career or continue live streaming? .

There was a post-game interview. Who is turning the neck?

Live streaming is useless if you play it well, but you have to speak it well. There is a guy who uses Centaur to reach the top ten in Korean server and not many people look at him.

It would be better to clear up the relationship between this ex-girlfriend and her later, because she helped her father repay a little bit, but there is no need to whitewash those who played the protagonist, and then later on, she must clear up the relationship with the ex-girlfriend. She will not have a role or less, otherwise it will be kept unclear. Don't you think the plot is very cliché? Otherwise, it would be boring to talk about other supporting characters all the time. It's not that Li Xinyang's writing is not good, it's just that he's not on the same channel. The game is not a game. He's just someone who feels guilty about the protagonist. You've already expressed this, so there's no need to keep repeating it. , Just write the existing plot, the protagonist-heroine-Zhao Kairan game, some details of the game, etc., And pull out some other deviations from the original plot. The expression to people is different from your introduction, which is just my own opinion. As for how you write this, it depends on the author himself. .

Didn't the army lines come out at 1 minute and 30 seconds? The top and bottom lane soldiers arrived last. I just saw a single kill of Gnar with e at 1 minute and 45 seconds. This is too dramatic.

I understand that the author wants to make his novels more literary, but he should also be prepared for a drop in grades. After all, most people read online novels to pursue a happy mood. Who would read online novels if they really want to pursue literary qualities? That's it for now, I'll leave.

If you remove the fog of war, you will at least screen out more than 60% of readers.

What position does the protagonist play professionally? It would be boring if you don't hit the mark.

The main character is a bit too strong. . .

If you don't have a good time to put it on the shelves, just send more. If you reach the number, you can apply to put it on the shelves immediately, and you will be guaranteed. It's been quite difficult for more than half a month now, so come on! 🙂