One Hundred Thousand Reincarnations, Opening up the Invincible Road to the End of the World

The ability to make money is really different.

Brothers of Deep Blue, please leave a message under this post with the names of supporting characters, and I will arrange them one by one.

Then my name is Juechuan, any position

It can be seen that you have put a lot of effort into this book. Some major aspects of this book have already been formed in your mind. You will not change my suggestions. I will give you a few small suggestions. First, make the protagonist smarter. Second, the protagonist's stage goals should not be boring because of the words of a certain woman. Third, you have written out the function of this golden finger, but you have not written out the exciting points. This is my personal feeling. In fact, in my opinion, you have made the protagonist more interesting. The stage target of the character is a woman. This book has been sent. I don't want you to think that I only read without a female protagonist, but this is indeed the case. Or let me put it in another way. Don't write about bitterness and hatred at the beginning. I don't mean there is any real hatred or anything like that, but I mean that the protagonist is given some kind of extreme emotions at the beginning, which will make the protagonist look particularly stupid, especially when someone else gives it to a woman. I saw the second chapter and didn't want to read it.

It's so good. I haven't seen such an interesting article in a long time. Come on, boss!

The beginning was very good, but when it got to modern times, it suddenly got messed up. The protagonist's IQ is not online