Douluo: Modify the Narration, Tang San Knelt Down

How about we think about it? Yue Guan becomes a girl and gets paired with a ghost.

Please, please, don't do too much genius that isn't in the original. There's no sense of immersion, mainly. 🌚🌚The nearest Lin Changkong. Something else looks weird. Just a personal opinion.

[Lin Tian felt his weak body, soul power, and two soul rings and fell into deep thought, lamenting that he was too weak] - [Lin Tian felt his body's sanctified body, 999-level soul power, and all 99 soul rings of a million years and fell into deep thought, feeling that he was invincible]

Goldfinger is invincible at the beginning. It is easiest to change two words Think: My strength in this world is very poor Change: My strength in this world is invincible

If you find a BUG and can fix everything, it would be too invincible. Even if you can only change two words, why not just change the level to level 99? In addition, the protagonist's martial spirit can kill all the Douluo Continent, right?

Tang San's Blue Silver Emperor bloodline was changed to Blue Silver Bloodline?

Who are the heroines? Author

A eunuch? Then look at a hammer

Although the writing is a bit retarded, it is actually a bit funny

I can't even pronounce it, but it can be expressed so straightforwardly. It really opened my eyes

I'm borrowing the building to promote a book. Of course it's also a Douluo fan, with a single heroine. I wonder if anyone will read it

I've given you the recommendation tickets and rewards. This is the first time I've paid for you. I hope you don't know what's good and what's wrong. Updating a dozen chapters a day is not too much, right?

Brother, give me a role Tian Bing Xin Level 96 Titled Douluo Martial Spirit: Tian Meng Shadow Title: You Meng First Tian Meng Xin Second Qing You Meng Hui Transformation Third Moon Dream Crossing the Sky Fourth New South Dream Sword Fiveth Dream Returns to Three Thousand Sixth Ming Tao Ru Meng Seventh Martial Soul True Body Eighth Turning Mind and Dreaming Ninth Youying Mengxin Three Thousand Flowing Feet Skill Effect The author thinks to himself, I just want to be a follower next to the pig's feet. In addition, Wuhun is a sword, and he wants to steal Zhu Zhuqing as his wife (۶• ㉨ •)۶♡٩(• ㉨ •٩)

Originally this book was okay, but the author insisted on writing it too intellectually.

I thought I was fast enough, but...

An Yinghuang's blood was transferred to you using sugar white.

The author's idea is too limited, and why should the revision focus on improving these things? For example, if the body is shaken, why can't it be changed to a *shock? Wouldn't that be more interesting?

You haven't put it on many shelves yet. Why is it level 4?

Write another Douluo book, and you can write about the inheritance of Ice Emperor Haibo Dong. All those fighting skills have become Douluo magic skills, Ice Emperor Haibo Dongli's magic skills, as well as passive and refreshing. No one has written it yet. You wrote Absolute Fire, Ice Emperor's Eternal God, Refreshing