I Don't Want to Start a New Life

The writing is very good. How come I just saw this book? No one knows about it. I need to promote it more!

Come on, urban literature is now dominated by their single female protagonists.

Lao Zhou has a way of writing female characters, which is PUA. If you want to achieve success in urban writing, the protagonist must not have a dog-licking and compromising mentality. Instead, the woman can have it. This is abnormal, but the sense of substitution is extremely strong and refreshing, so you can learn a little bit.

Ah... Isn't this a harem story? ! Why did it become a stallion story? ! ! Meet one and love the other? ? ? It's a bit toxic and boring. There could be more female protagonists, but if there are too many, it will be boring. The characters are not well drawn and it's not interesting.

I'm opening a separate post to thank the little sharp master for the reward. Really, I was rewarded by a platinum master. If I don't write it down well, I always feel sorry for the master! During this period, I am also grateful to the brothers who have supported me all the way, including old friends and new friends. I am just a small author, and there is no need to talk about lofty ideals. I will work hard to write a good book until it is completed. I have nothing else to ask for! Thank you everyone!

Author, your book is terrible. Specifically speaking, it is not simple where it should be, and the details are too short. ...... What kind of readers do you want for this book? It must be the harem. But your first heroine, Wan Wan, is inexplicably full of favorability. What do you think about this? Of course, this kind of thing definitely exists in reality, but in novels, logic, goodwill, distance, and proximity are required. These three changes, you have not given any details. There is also the tutoring student, good guy, who is more direct and gets started inexplicably, which is even more fierce than the previous Wanwan. ... The details above are not enough. The real feeling of discomfort. The tutoring girl gave the protagonist a watch worth tens of thousands of dollars. This was the year 2000. I really didn't understand. What kind of class does it take to bring you and me so close to each other? The tutoring girl doesn't think about this problem, so the tutoring girl's father doesn't think about it? Giving a student a watch worth tens of thousands of dollars without even considering what the child's family would think? ... But what poisoned me in the end was that, when recruiting employees, they offered an annual salary of 200,000 yuan plus 5% shares. I'm afraid you've forgotten how you managed to get 200,000 yuan. How much was Brother Ma's annual salary in 2000? How about you add some more, add some more shares, and go directly to recruit Brother Xiao Ma? You want to give readers pleasure, not readers to come and see you for fun. Give 200,000 additional shares to an employee who is willing to be won over by a woman to work day and night, you are really awesome. I'm afraid there's no one left in this world. Previously, I kept saying that I would go to the university to recruit good talents. As a result, your forward-thinking vision allowed you to see this? ... After reading the above ten or twenty chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

Entrepreneurship is written like a play. You beat up a gangster, and then the gangster took a dozen people to mess with the protagonist. The protagonist arranged for the gangster to be the boss. There is also a woman who can hardly support herself, and the protagonist also arranged to be the boss. How capable will this woman be? Just find someone who makes games and be the boss. The protagonist can successfully start a business by relying on these things. I believe you.

Do female characters appear too often? I haven't written much about the previous one, so another one pops up! In the end, there was only a name, no image imprint at all!

This... Dozens of people write about a lot of girls together. Is this a supermarket wholesale business? 7

Is it too much to copy the first chapter? Couldn't anyone see it?

Damn it, can anyone who is a drug addict give me some advice: Is this book a pornographic novel disguised as youth and rebirth? I just saw a TV host pinching the protagonist's butt... Is there really no need to write about it, instead of relying on a female character to highlight the excellence of the protagonist? This is just over 10 chapters, and I haven't entered college yet. It really disgusted me! Is this the case later? I would like to ask those who have watched it to tell me that I dare not watch it for fear of vomiting...

I read the title of the book, and I didn't plan to read it. I haven't read a rebirth novel for a long time. I saw a review saying that the writing was okay, and then I read it. It was indeed okay, but the front part is a bit bland. Sponsor 100 points and support the author.

I don't dare to be flirtatious, I am flirtatious but I can't be flirtatious. My own business is half-finished, so White Moonlight Red Rose is nothing but ambiguous. With your rhythm, it may not be attractive at all before it goes on the shelves. How do you expect to get subscriptions and follow-up reading after it goes on the shelves? Go read the rebirth series written by Lao Zhou. The character of your protagonist does not look like a person in his decades, but more like a young boy with a slutty heart and a low reputation. Several heroines are all popular and have no characteristics.

This book is good. It should be picked up without any ink 😏😏😏😏 What a big bowl of noodles 😏 There are clouds under your feet 😏😏😏. It really has some connotation. More emotional scenes should be written. The female characters are well portrayed. Daily interactions still need to be mentioned (can be watered down) Number 😏), otherwise some characters would disappear (poor Yu Yan 😏). The career line is very large, and I feel busy like a top. I can speed up the progress and stabilize it. With money💰, there are several opportunities to get rich instantly. It is better to manage the emotional line well and portray the female characters in depth. It is very important to portray outstanding female characters in the urban genre in depth. (Character cards can be arranged, let's have a party fight 😏)

Please give me support for your first order. The writing is too rushed and complicated. You don't need to make all the money. If you buy Miracle and then represent Warcraft, you can be worth tens of billions. You are busy every day. Readers simply don't understand what the protagonist wants to do. The protagonist has no charm of his own.

No one knows that this book will lead to poor grades. It is well written. Keep writing. After the content is expanded, the number of words will increase, and the grades will get better. Come on ✊ and I will support you like the last book 👏

The big boss is reborn and still has a career, what's so interesting about it? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

There are too many heroines appearing too quickly. I won't finish writing this by the dozens or hundreds.

There are too many women, and talking about career is too exaggerated. Can we just leave everything to others?! I have never experienced any beating from society.

Both Beijing and Shenzhen are more suitable for grassroots Internet entrepreneurship than Shanghai, but Shanghai's culture and policies are not suitable for starting an Internet business from scratch. The most suitable thing for the protagonist is to go to Tsinghua University to study economics and management, and then start a business with classmates majoring in computer science.

Awesome, what did your brother write? Take a look for yourself, the reborn old gangster? ?

I don't know why it looked awkward, so I ran away

His first girlfriend was so kind to him, yet he still acted like a scumbag, how unkind! There is no problem with having a harem, but the first woman is too kind to the protagonist, and she is the woman who said during the internship stage that she wanted to support the protagonist while studying!

The writing is actually pretty good, and the girls are well written, giving it a bit of a Jiuwu feel. Why is it not popular? The problem is that the characters are a little too naive. The routines from more than ten years ago, except for the protagonist, are too intellectually depressing. The plot design does not first suppress and then strengthen, and it is not exciting. As everyone often says, it fails to hit the mark. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better and better.

The writing is really weird, the writing skills are so poor, the plot is like an idol drama, the results shouldn't be much better.

Is it the finale without saying anything?

After reading more than 30 chapters, I just can't stand it anymore! Goodbye!

In the harem novels from ten years ago, the heroines in them had no personality at all. Is it possible that everyone would be willing to be a concubine without fighting? The women there don't have any ambition or arrogance, so they might as well just spend their money to support them, at least be real. There is no sense of reality for women written in this way. In today's society, no one can live without anyone.

The book I finished three years ago, Qidian, gave me a pop-up message, and it's still unfinished.

Is it a story about multiple female protagonists on campus, or about rebirth, or looking for eunuchs? The country is cracking down on this. Authors who don't understand trends will never be able to succeed.