Ten Teng Tianchen

The quality of the book is average, but I still submitted it, mainly because you didn't sign a contract for your last book, but you still insisted on writing five to six million words and finished it. If you were just writing it for fun, then just pretend I didn't say it. If you want to eat this bowl of rice, I suggest you do more research and see how other people's books are written. I haven't written a book, but it seems to me. This book has some shortcomings. First, the introduction is too brief. An introduction can tell the story of a book. As the saying goes, people rely on clothes, and Buddha relies on gold. An introduction can attract and screen readers. The introduction should be attractive and put the highlights and highlights of the book. This will attract readers. The introduction should highlight the features and characteristics of the book as much as possible, so that people who like this kind of books can click in, and people who don't like this kind of books should not come in. When people who don't like it come in, they see flaws everywhere and their evaluation will be lowered. Second, the segments are too long. The author should be good at Chinese language, and the writing style of the work is still acceptable, but he should be better at writing traditional novels, and is obviously not suitable for the rhythm of online writing. If you look at the books at the top of the rankings, you will find that their chapters are very short, one sentence is one paragraph. It can be as long as two or three sentences, or as short as a few words. The advantage of online novels is that they are short and lively, more relaxed, and can make full use of fragmented time. Paragraphs that are too long will increase reading pressure and reduce enjoyment. One sentence can be divided into paragraphs. It is recommended that the average paragraph should not exceed sixty words. Except for special circumstances, it is recommended that it should not exceed one hundred words at most. Third, the pace is too slow. I wonder if you have heard of the Three Golden Chapters? Most people who read online novels actually don't have much patience. If you can't draw out the first little gc or feel comfortable in the first few chapters, the book will not be obviously attractive. Then there is a high probability that people will give up.

If you have the potential to succeed, the most important thing is to persist, come on!

Author, the word count has almost been updated. You can apply for a contract.

Can anyone see my posts? What the hell is this?