A Superstar's Rise Begins When a Director Tricks Him Onto the Stage

To be honest, if it weren't for the fact that there are no books about Jaylen songs, I wouldn't have read a single chapter of your book. You can read books by other great writers, such as "This Celebrity Wants to Retire" and "I'm Really Not a Big Star". The main plot of your book is too rigid, and the pretentiousness makes me embarrassed, especially the fight song section, what the hell. 1. The songs written in it are very good, but your descriptions are really meaningless. Every time you praise me, my scalp is really numb. The song "Sunny Day" is very comfortable and pleasant to the ear. It can make you feel moved when you listen to it over and over again. What the hell are you writing this review? If you don't know, just read the music review of this song. There is also the story of Mercury, which I feel more and more the more I listen to it. 2. Why did others say that the protagonist loses fans so quickly? Think about the few melons in 21 years. How do you describe it as long as you are handsome but have bad outlook on life? Besides, I don't know where the villain's courage comes from. Will the true fans show it? There are no watery things in it, but nothing about the relationship between men and women. 3. Have you planned the character of your protagonist? The more you read, the more awkward it becomes. At first, he was a confused newbie, but by the 20th or 30th chapter, he turned into a tough guy. There are obviously many solutions. For the part about fighting songs, you can write that the economic company has no experience. If the solution is wrong, you can even write that the system gives a task for the protagonist to solve by himself, and then come to Dou Ge. What you wrote feels that the protagonist's personality has changed. If you are straight man + confused and cute, then you have to plan well. It feels like your protagonist's personality is always wrong. 4. I saw that many of the descriptions above were used awkwardly. The supporting characters, the makeup artist, are lustful, and are nymphomaniacs. Most of the supporting characters are just like fools, which brings down the score.

To be honest, the male protagonist's early confused character is not lovable

I saw a neurotic whose IQ and EQ fluctuated up and down x

When you sing, just sing well, can't you? There is no desire for the entire poem or moment. Also, can the protagonist with his character and IQ survive in the entertainment industry? You don't really think that you will become popular if you have the ability!

Please list an incomparably handsome man for everyone to see. The first chapter of the article says that he is handsome with pig's feet and is amazingly handsome. The author doesn't understand handsomeness. There are not many people in the entertainment industry who are recognized as handsome.

Dou Ge is really poisonous😅

A lot of things are awkwardly written, and I feel like I've gone back to five or six years ago.

As soon as I opened it, my mother asked me why I was kneeling and looking at the computer. What should I do if I felt like vomiting? Will the author reimburse medical expenses?

The male protagonist should have finished his studies.

Hiss, this book has the potential to be ordered thousands of times!