My Seven Deadly Sins in Tokyo

The setting is good, the plot is rubbish, and the protagonist is rubbish

This book is extremely boring. The protagonist is the man of the seven sins and the owner of the devil. I wanted to see a villain-style protagonist, but the protagonist is a waste and the plot is dull.

After reading Chapter 40, I feel that it is pretty good so far, generally satisfactory, and has no negative points. However, I don't know if I'm the only one who feels this way. The protagonist advances too quickly, and the abilities at each level are only briefly described without any in-depth exploration. It's like there is a mysterious object on the third level, which is a poker card for gambling on luck. I feel that if you dig deeper into this mysterious object, you can tell one or two short plots (I am also a street writer who is improving myself at the moment). I hope that the subsequent plots and combat power will not collapse. Of course, it may be that I am short-sighted. Maybe the author has his own rhythm. I just want to express my own opinions and don't criticize.

I just feel like this book shouldn't have a female protagonist. Women will only prevent the protagonist from becoming stronger. And it's of no use. Of course the rich woman thought I didn't say anything.

Why is she the heroine? Personally, I don't think this book is suitable for a female protagonist.

The introduction is quite attractive, but unfortunately there is a female protagonist, so I immediately lost the desire to read it (for personal reasons, I was scared of the female protagonists created by other authors, and even those who have female protagonists don't want to read it)

Introduction: You have to be a God, but you still have to write a heroine? I'm convinced too. If you like a woman so much, don't write about this kind of subject.

Most of the time when I see a female protagonist or a harem, I really don't want to watch it. For example, "The Wild Boar" is the most disgusting harem I have ever seen. It is very well written, but it is disgusting. A wild boar cultivates immortality and has a harem, and all kinds of fucks. There are other novels written like 250, where the heroine saves her because of the hero, and the hero doesn't believe in her, so she has to jump off the building to prove herself, and then the hero jumps off the building, hugs the heroine, flies into the sky, and falls in love with the heroine. Damn, today's novels are so fucking exaggerated.

Readers who think it's good can read it again. Recommended on the website, the editor recommends according to the follow-up reading list. Thank you

If writing books is your hobby, please stick to it. If you want to make money by writing books to support your family, be prepared to change your career as soon as possible. It is too difficult to succeed in writing, and the environment for writing books is getting worse and worse. It is too difficult to write well. Some people are over 40 and still learn crawling with no basic knowledge, just to have room for improvement.

Alive? Who used the art of reincarnation on the author?

It's not bad, but it always feels a bit boring. The protagonist is now a bit like fighting monsters and upgrading. Kill x monsters at point a, upgrade to level x, and then go to point b to repeat the process. Instead, the worldview has shrunk, and the strength of the consortium has plummeted. I initially thought that the protagonist's sanity was a limitation that prevented the protagonist's golden finger from being invincible. I didn't expect that the protagonist's golden finger was really awesome. There was no limit at all. The author could slow down appropriately, and he didn't have to write in such a hurry. He could create more delicate characters and unique stories. I saw that the team leader fell in love with God so casually that I couldn't help it, and then the protagonist had so many tricks up his sleeve that no one doubted him. . . . . Writing too quickly will lead to bugs in some logic.

This book actually has a female protagonist? Just outrageous. From what I can see, this book at most has a bunch of female characters. They may have an affair with the male protagonist, but there shouldn't be a female protagonist... Could it be that there is still a single female protagonist?

? He's a eunuch. He's pretty.

When I saw the title, I thought it was a fan novel about the Seven Deadly Sins.

Proud Lucifer Greedy Mammon Desire Asmodeus Angry Satan Gluttonous Beelzebul Jealous Leviathan Lazy Belphegor These should be the names of the seven demons!

I feel that the protagonist has advanced too quickly. He is almost at level 4 before it is released on the shelves, and the one with the highest combat power currently is only at level 5. If this continues, it may not be over before it is released on the shelves.

This is some veteran's trumpet. If you don't write down, you'll be a eunuch. You're practicing, right?

Because the editor didn't think it was very good, the author decided to run away and change editors.

🐶Ah, it's so 🐶, you're going to have a small orgasm, right?

The male protagonist treats the female protagonist too badly, make good use of it and treat him better

Damn it, I read this book a long time ago, and it took me so long to write in Braille like this

No, is this going in? The donkeys in the production team don't dare to be that long and don't work.

The author's update speed is too slow. Even the production team's donkeys don't dare to rest like this.

After reading two chapters, the first chapter gave me the feeling that it was a very novel setting, but by the second chapter I felt nothing at all. It should be that people in Tokyo can obtain extraordinary abilities by committing crimes and then commit crimes to increase their level. The protagonist's ability is to deprive others of their sins without committing crimes, which is equivalent to depriving others of their abilities.

Can you continue to update? All monthly recommendation votes are for you 😭

The protagonist is extremely hypocritical and leaves 😅

Good habit, finished. I will vote for you if you open a new book.