Xuanyuanxian Road

It's boring, it's another newcomer who wants to write a famous book for the first time. . . If you don't have a fan base, who would want to watch you write slowly? If you take too big a step, it will be easy to get pulled off. But if you want to write a good Mortal Flow novel, you must first learn how to write exciting stories. Otherwise, you won't know how to make the plot exciting after suppressing the protagonist...

When the protagonist meets beautiful women, they are all beautiful and kind-hearted, doting on the protagonist, while the men are all negative characters like scheming monsters, violent maniacs, who use or deal with the protagonist. Currently there are many scenes, only a transformed turtle is seen, and there is no negative description. The women are very principled and kind-hearted. Personally, I can't see this, I don't mean any harm, don't criticize if you don't like it.

Three Spiritual Roots, Four Spiritual Roots, let me come in and take a look, Five Spiritual Roots, I have to give you a first hand, what age is it, there are still people writing about Five Spiritual Roots, you have made it up to heaven again, speechless

A sect leader who is in the tribulation stage has been injured like that. The protagonist, who is in the Qi training stage, will probably be blown to ashes by the wind when he leaves the house.

Personally, I think the writing is quite good. The plot is not abrupt, it is gradual, and it is not mindless from the beginning. It is a pretty good mortal flow.

In short, you have written your cultivation level too high. I think the transformation stage is enough. Otherwise, when will your little protagonist be able to make a difference? He won't make it if he writes ten million words. If he upgrades too fast, it will be boring and he will still be the same as Long Aotian of others.

Come on, Xianxia just needs to keep up with the number of words. If you have a million words, you will become a god.

The writing is very good. Come on, write well.

A martial arts master without a golden finger? It really must be collected. The most annoying ones are Shuangwen. Unfortunately, 99.999% Of the starting points are the same. There is a shortage of books.

😡😡Come on, come on. Getting better slowly