Ordinary Cultivators

Come and have an opinion. This is my first time writing a book, so I definitely have a lot of shortcomings. If you have any ideas and opinions, feel free to put them forward. We are open-minded and accept all encouragement and criticism.

Shennong is here, try some poison for everyone who comes next

Understand what I mean

Match a Fengchen

I'm too poor, so I can only give you this little reward. Thank you for your previous support. Besides, the writing is pretty good. Don't be a eunuch like me. Come on!

Come on (ง˙o˙)ว

Isn't this pace too fast? I'm really not impressed at all. When I read a game article next door, I had to read two or three chapters for each game. You can finish reading a short story in these two or three chapters. If you continue to write it, you will be able to write it.

What's going on, dear? Now that I'm in the smart center, updates are no longer as diligent as before? Smart recommendation requires PK results.

It was quite enjoyable to read, and it is considered a good old white novel. I just feel that the realm of cultivation is the same as the decoration. You can rely on your divine eyes to transcend one or two realms to kill enemies, but it is still better than the kind of novice who always relies on realms to crush and abuse vegetables.

The setting is good, but the writing is not good. Amnesia is a highly poisonous thing, and it's so rubbish that you get the weapon spirit. The second poison is

After reading the introduction, I think you can rely on repeated cuts to deepen the probability. Is it in the plot?

Brother, are you not at full attendance?