Azeroth's Necromancer

I found a very serious problem in the article, that is, except for the protagonist, other races are not very intelligent. The author defines them as wild monsters, and they are all big fools. In fact, most monsters in Northrend have brains. The fact that the nerubians can compete with the Lich King and even rely on guerrilla warfare to defeat the Lich King in the early stage shows that they are not the same beasts as in the article. They are a civilization, and the ice trolls are also civilized, have language, tactics, and can talk.

This should be a hegemony novel, not one of those lone ranger, pretentious novels At present, it seems that the protagonist already has more than a dozen undead subordinates. As for whether those furbolgs will be accepted as subordinates or exist as allies, it still depends on how it develops in the future Overall, the book is good, but some details need to be improved Those who like to watch farming and hegemony can join in Those who like to watch pretending to be slapped in the face can forget it, because the protagonist's unicorn arm is broken again😂

I just watched it, can you please change the name of the main character? Lin Bufan's three characters are incompatible with World of Warcraft

I suggest you find a way to go to the soldier master for further training.

This protagonist's name is so outrageous. I wish I could tell others that you are different.

How do you say it? Let's not mention the protagonist's name. Tell others clearly that you are different, and that your undead body still protects the light? Even if you say it's for freedom, it's more reliable than this. The undead have been resurrected in the first place. It's a bit crazy (look at a certain alchemist who doesn't want to tell others his name). He has been tortured by death and still pursues the light. Moreover, the undead is the light resurrected by the power of death. Everything is a kind of torture to the undead. How can I put it? The protagonist's undead made my eyes shine. The more I watched, the more outrageous it became.

Let the dead live? Is that to regain "rebirth" or to welcome " death"?

One thing to say, the mobs can't control Arm Swinger, so why write the Undead God? Look at the Diablo Necromancer mobs, which are tools to achieve the goal.

Let me give the author some suggestions... The writing is indeed good, but the author is a bit shallow in some plots and original settings... The details will be listed below 1. Make a good count of the order of events and the connections between the timelines. 2. You can dig deeper into the things behind the incident, and you can also express your own opinions, but don't speak too harshly. After all, these can easily be slapped in the face by the Blizzard editorial team. 3. Don't design too many non-staff unless necessary (that is, don't create too many undead that regain control) 4. Warcraft itself is a heroic epic plot arrangement, so don't completely recruit events, but you must respect the original design and it is best not to use it. 5. Dark is black, don't go out of your way to whitewash it, because some plot gaps will appear after you whitewash them and may even affect the development of subsequent plots. These are the specific suggestions. It's not that it can't be written as a hegemony style. It's just that the hegemony style requires too many character descriptions and plot arrangements, so it's not suitable for time-travelers. That's all.

Melee combat is recommended. A true psychic will integrate his spells into melee combat.