Devouring the Starry Sky: Fishing in the Sky

Monkey Sai Lei? ? ? Seriously? ? ?

It's so verbose. With such a golden finger, you still follow the process step by step, eat from the big pot, and don't work hard to develop (ー_ー)!!

It's too wordy and misses the point. It's just daily nonsense and the number of words is low. There is no sense of substitution. I feel nothing when reading it. Judging from the current chapter, I am not optimistic about this book. Personal opinion

After reading more than 20 chapters, I realized that the protagonist hadn't caught anything very good yet, so I knew that the early part of the book was basically broken. If you time-traveled to Luo Feng's school days, that would be fine. If you time-traveled to Luo Feng, you were ready to leave the earth. Are you still in love, jealous and fighting with children?

Is it okay not to become a disciple and not to compete in the genius battle? Those two things are too cool. I hope you can write a book about the bright starry sky of your own and don't imitate it.

Go write Romance City. Science fiction and fantasy are not suitable for you. It's really long-winded.

Since it is a harem, we should include all the beauties who appear, otherwise why write about them? Should I save it for others?

After comprehensive consideration, Luo Feng suggested that the author should change the previous paragraph. The country that swallows the stars is two different things from reality. The environment in the novel itself is one of jungle and the strong. There are only a few MPs in the world. No matter how much Luo Feng has face, it is difficult to invite MPs to protect his family. The country is actually a piece of sand. The weak ones have no effect, and the strong ones have their own differences. The selfishness of people cannot be compared with the reality that there are only a lot of ordinary people. The law can restrict people, even though there are almost everywhere people who take advantage of loopholes. What's more, in the novel, it is just a force. What's more, Luo Feng almost died at that time, which is barely a poisonous point. The key is that this is the beginning. If it is not well written, it will easily make people abandon the book.

There are too many routines, and it's not fun enough to write a cool novel. If you want to write a book with brains, the characters' IQs are too low. You can't even throw a golden finger at it, and it's even more awkward to write something that is about things rather than things. Enough

Author, are you serious about devouring the world and writing about the harem? The upper limit of the number of people on earth has been set. The vast majority of women found on earth and even in the universe are just burdens, or even vases. Regardless of whether they can match their ideals, the main character just wants to become stronger by getting together less and leaving more. One female protagonist feels a bit redundant, let alone three or four. In fact, I personally feel that the first heroine in Swallowing Starry Sky is Ai Chen and the second is Qian Shui. First of all, these two are very in line with human aesthetics. Secondly, they also have certain talents. In short, they have common topics and the same goals. It is very comfortable to get along with such heroines. Otherwise, the number of vases you raise is no more than rain and clouds. What kind of beauty is there in the universe? There are so many beautiful women, it is really unnecessary and inappropriate to have a harem.

Is there any heroine with a sexy aunt named "Venina Bolenas"? If so, please send me the title of the book.

The harem-style novels are pretty good. Although they are a bit complicated, some of them are good to read. There are almost no Devouring harem-style novels. As long as you keep reading the author, I promise to keep subscribing.

From the time I followed it until now, the whole plot has been too wordy, and the whole point of interest is just a few fishing trips, and then there are too many daily conversations, and I can't find the point of interest.

After reading three chapters, I don't have any expectations anymore. You black mist enters the golden light, that's all. I wrote one chapter to do it. Twenty words in total are too much.

At the 100th chapter of the original work, Luo Feng was almost a junior warrior, and his combat power was that of a high-level warrior. You can't be slower than the original work, right?

I've probably read a few chapters and it's so confusing that I don't know what to write.

Most of the fans of Swallowing Starry Sky come here for the style of Swallowing Starry Sky, and then you only have four female protagonists in just a few words 😅 People who specialize in writing about harems may not necessarily grasp it.

Author, your decisive sword skills indicate that you are capable of great things.

Is there anyone who has written a prequel to Devouring Stars? I started writing it when the RR virus was raging.

The period is very good. I didn't miss the genius battle or the opportunity to join the Virtual Universe Company, so that's fine. I also hope that the author can quickly give the protagonist a big hook, otherwise I feel that it will be difficult for the protagonist to make a splash in the genius battle!

I jumped from chapter 1 to chapter 5 of this book, and it didn't affect me at all. It's really ridiculous.

The book about Luo Feng's death is finished, everyone is waiting for the new book to be released

The name of the protagonist... Is a joke! 😅

By the way, is there Janet in the novel Swallowing the Stars?

I just finished the book and it was so bad that people were caught off guard.

Crazy? Really killed Luo Feng

Kill you, Luo Feng, and then you will be the protagonist

For those of you who are in a book shortage, you can read the book "The Great Age of Star Martial Arts". It is also about the same subject, not a fanfiction, and has no system. The devouring taste is very pure.