Make the Fourth Natural Disaster Great Again

As someone who has read the latest chapters, I think I am qualified to say a few words. I have the imagination to write a book, and I have the writing skills, but the plot is too messy. Please give me a good outline, please. The books nowadays are also excellent. Either mediocrity is king, or they are seriously biased. It is too difficult to find a book.

Turning player flow into pretentious flow? The previous one said that the account error is still there, but if you continue to provoke, your account will not be banned?

After reading a few chapters, I didn't want to read anymore and concentrated on writing the fourth natural disaster. Wouldn't it be better to be a behind-the-scenes person? You have to show off or something like that. These chapters have already changed. This is just my personal opinion. Sorry, flashed.

. . . Now the fourth natural disaster has changed. It used to be for saving the world, but now? It's all about cutting leeks.

I always feel that the author has let himself go, but it is still better than The Eunuch. Some of the subplots are barely readable, but the jumping around seems very abrupt in some places...

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First of all, there is one thing that feels very strange. This is obviously a novel about the fourth natural disaster. It always writes about the internal affairs of the players, and then the family, but there is no conquest, expansion, and war. In the early stage, it can be said that you are just showing off, not to mention forestry. Will you be discovered if you always appear? The attitude is just that some of the plots are hard to watch. I am watching the fourth natural disaster, not just to pretend to be 13, and is it interesting to respond to the intrigue? Personal opinion, if you don't like it, don't criticize it. The voice used may be incomplete. I just gave up on expressing my attitude. The main author feels that there is no outline at all.

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You have disturbed a natural disaster! 😏 The Fourth Natural Disaster: I really should go to hell, but what does that matter? How many divisions does Pluto have?

Has this book been deleted before? In the previous chapters, Sha was still the first character. Then there were only fifty places, so I mined a coin and was listed by the protagonist, who said that the number of places would be expanded. Just one chapter later and the interstellar war started? A new term pops up every few sentences?

I feel like it's not appropriate for the protagonist to enter the game, and it's very uncomfortable to watch him being slapped in the face outside. The first few chapters seem to make people feel that the writing is good but the thinking is not good. It's quite embarrassing. Sorry, I was distracted.

The subplot is very rich. But the general direction doesn't work. I can see that the ideas are connected one by one.

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I was confused after watching it. What a weird plot. It was so bad. I was poisoned. I went to the hospital for a check-up. Bye.

The urban family pretends to be slapped in the face

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It's already 2220, I didn't expect there to be such YY writing

What kind of messy writing is this? Whoever reads science fiction doesn't want to see battleships bombarding each other, cannons and giant ships. What's the point of scheming with Luo Libasuo and a few useless things?

Are you saying that the player is the fourth natural disaster? In fact, it is because the player is a higher-dimensional being who can modify game parameters, load files and resurrect, change resources, win directly, add some weird mods to it, such as cultivating immortals, starship girls, etc., And has the control panel of these stars and this universe. It's not comparable to any trashy online game players. With only the ability to survive and upgrade, I will TM[crash] the game or game_over and win directly.