Jojohuman

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Lance Vance's plot is a complete failure. He doesn't have many scenes when he first appears. The first battle is offline at the speed of light, and the battle is illogical. The enemy is a villain who harmed his whole family, and he has already attacked. However, he has to accept the enemy's bet, blindfold himself and shoot the bottle. If only the bet process can be written as exciting, but he breaks his face in the middle, making the bet meaningless. You can skip this plot and start fighting directly. Furthermore, Lance Vance's ability was not reflected. He could obviously control the wind to attack from a distance, but he attacked the enemy in this way at the beginning, but then he had to fight in close combat and grab a pistol. The enemy was a close-range power type, and his ability was to turn anything he touched with his hands into sand. If Lance Vance had used a kite-flying tactic to fight, he would not have died at all. When you killed the enemy at the end, you said have a good dream, Mr. Diaz, no, he is the villain who killed your whole family. You didn't curse a few words before killing him and expressed admiration. I was convinced. When Ames took revenge in Stone Sea, he also punched countless times and said that this punch was for so and so. In the end, Lance Vance's offline narration was still writing about the last dance of the unyielding girl. To be honest, readers are not familiar with you at all, okay? The character creation is not in place and it is still sensational.

There were too many holes dug and they were not filled. Farroko died just after developing a substitute. I thought he could be saved by being suspended. Why did Qibelin give the knife to Farroco? What is the bill? What is Qibelin's identity? Why did the girl group stab the captain in the back? I don't know any of this. The female dio has always been a soy sauce and has no role.

Very well written

Well written, keep up the hard work and keep updating. I'm optimistic about you.