The Walker in the Martial Arts World

A simple essay, I don't know how to write without Yuan Chengzhi? Martial arts longevity requires at least some knowledge of ancient Chinese literature, Buddhism, Confucianism and Taoism, and some history. Even if it's fantasy, you also need to understand some foreign culture.

Author, what you write is too cliche, traveling through world after world, basically all martial arts novels follow this routine, give me some suggestions, use a world as a base, such as Heaven and Dragon Sword, and then create a sect there to cultivate talents, provide some magic skills, some secrets, and then lead these people to travel to one world after another, and then transport the good things to the world of your base, so that the world of martial arts can be promoted to a fantasy world. How interesting it is to watch.

I also want to write a martial arts, an alternative one. The protagonist has a systematic lottery, but the ones drawn are all weird poisonous skills, such as the Three Yin Centipede Claws, the Thousand Spiders and Ten Thousand Poisonous Hands, and the Red Divine Palm that Li Mochou learned from the Five Poisons secret book. The old version is called the Five Poison Palms, but I think the Red Divine Palm sounds better. Golden Snake Secrets, Toad Kung Fu, and then start with Swordsman of the World, the heroine Lan Phoenix. The book is called "I'm Full of Poisonous Kung Fu"

It is not popular and has no characteristics at all. Today's martial arts fandoms will definitely fall into the street if the writing style of harem novels is not good. Moreover, old bookworms are more disgusted with harems because they have read too many books and have stricter logic requirements. Every time I see harem novels, I want to tell the author, do you think the protagonist is Xiangmomo! If he is a woman, stick to him

After a cursory look at the Yitian chapter, I would like to talk about a few minor issues with the author's Yitian chapter. First, Cheng Kun taught Xie Xun since he was a child, and Xie Xun and Cheng Kun all have memories of it. When Dai Qisi came to Mingjiao, Bai Jinqing was already a famous expert. It was because of the Han Qianye incident that Dai Qisi made great achievements and became the Dharma Protector. Bai Jinqing and Bai Jinqing voluntarily let Zi take the lead. Third, Cheng Kun originally had a very good relationship with Xie Xun, but he didn't know that Xie Xun had joined the Ming Cult. Cheng Kun only found out that Xie Xun had joined the Ming Cult when he went to Xie Xun's house after going down the mountain during the Guangmingding Secret Road Incident, and then he made a temporary plan to take advantage of Xie Xun. The author actually writes well, but I hope he still arranges the plot based on the setting of the original work.

The sentences are not smooth, the author is commendable for his courage

Talking nonsense, gunpowder can actually be used in Jin Yong's novels. There is a description in Swordsman, and gunpowder is extremely powerful.

The protagonist in the author's works is like playing a game all the time, which makes readers feel that they are bloodless and fleshless. You know the ending just by looking at the beginning, it's as tasteless as boiled water

When I saw the beginning of "Swordsman", I guess it was another old routine that must be thrown into the street. The routines of "Swordsman is so proud to the sky", "Shooting the Condor", and "Dragon" are all disgusting to death.

Can the best in Jade Blood Sword compare to the best in Tianlong? What's the difference between them all being first-class?

I just looked a little bit and found that the pig's feet were actually accompanied by Yuan Chengzhi, a big traitor! ! ! ! Too poisonous......

One chapter was defeated, nothing was introduced, just this world, this world, I was speechless.

According to this writing method, there will be no more than 200 chapters.

When you say you write, you really mean it. This person can handle

Take advantage of the fact that you have less to write, so stop writing!

I suggest the author take a look at Chen Dong's earlier works. The World of Immortality is still the Tomb of Gods. I feel that the current works are becoming more and more tasteless. They are actually the system of the heavens.

I have never understood why everyone thinks that among the gold novels, Demi-Gods and Dragons have the highest combat power? Is Tianlong Representative Sweeping Monk a real master? There is a description in the original book, indicating that this person has always existed in the Shaolin Temple, and no one knows his origins, nor does he know martial arts, but he can release a Qi wall three feet away without seeing him take action, blocking the blows of two top masters. No one in the Golden Book can do this, and Qigong is indeed unprecedented. Note, it's not that you can't release the three-foot wall of energy, but you can release it without taking action! After all, there are many masters who can hit the volley palm three feet away. In the original work, the oldest monk in the Shaolin Temple is estimated to be about 70 years old. All of them are masters. They actually don't remember such a person. The sweeping monk has been in the temple for at least 60 years and does not show his martial arts. It is possible for a person to hide his inner strength, but to practice his moves, he has to hide them from hundreds of masters in the temple. Unless you don't practice, you won't show any flaws. And the sweeping monk did not use a single move to conquer the two of them. There is another piece of evidence. These two people have been secretly learning martial arts in the temple for decades. The sweeping monk knows that his internal strength is indeed higher than these two people. Why didn't you win two of them? How important is the Sutra Pavilion to Shaolin Temple? If these two people take out martial arts secrets and sell them in large quantities, will Shaolin Temple still be able to do it? Is there a possibility that Xiao Yuanshan was a peerless man who could carve words on bluestone with his bare hands thirty years ago, and the same was true for Murong Bo. He can't defeat these two people. Even if he gathers the monks, they will probably just deliver food? Can you just endure it? So why did you come out to stop the two from fighting each other in the end? Based on the above, we may be able to find the reason. With thousands of martial arts people watching, many people were fighting at home, but no one in the Shaolin Temple could stop them. It is undoubtedly a bit embarrassing. The world's martial arts is authentic, and this plaque is somewhat unworthy of its name. What's even more embarrassing is that the boss of the group has been revealed to have killed his family, had an illegitimate child, and had an affair with the four evil men. This is such a shocking scandal. (Based on the many appearances of Shaolin monks throughout the book and Jiumozhi's riot) After this incident, if no one comes out to turn the tide, Shaolin can be said to be in disrepute and lose all face. Xu Zhu was originally the best candidate, but unfortunately he was expelled from the school. At this time, the sweeping monk appeared. He had to appear. If he failed, it would not be worse than this. If he succeeded, the benefits would be endless. Allowing the two to resolve their grudges not only shows the compassionate spirit of Shaolin Temple, but also highlights its powerful force and profound foundation. The timing of this appearance is the best, and it perfectly resolves all the previous unfavorable situations. You see, although the abbot is the big bad guy, the purpose of us monks remains the same, and we are still good people on the whole. He even defeated two top masters with ease, and the world's martial arts master is worthy of his name. To add to the evidence, the sweeping monk appeared on the scene when the two of them were about to collapse. One of them had just recognized the enemy he had been looking for for thirty years and vowed to take revenge to the death. A life-long plan that falls short of success is just a matter of life and death. After fighting each other for a long time, it is time to decide the winner, so at this time, you only need to use the most exaggerated way to stop the two people, and hit the two people where they are most confident, to make the two people doubt their lives, and then use a method similar to the Nine Yin Soul Transferring Technique to resolve the dispute. It just so happens that the sweeping monk can do both, so he appears.

After reading the comments and combining it with my own viewing, here are some problems with the author's Yitian chapter 1. In the first chapter, there is a problem with the geographical location. The first wave of people the protagonist meets in the desert are Persians, and the location is the desert. After the protagonist wakes up, there are several naming errors in the Q&A. I have never heard of it. People in the Persian food country call themselves from the Western Regions. If the author is too lazy to write a book, why not just use Persia... He must use the code name of another country in the Western Regions... 2. Regarding the issue of accessibility of communication between the protagonist and the Persians... The author did not provide the corresponding settings before, so it would be very weird to have accessibility of dialogue here. 3. Regarding the issue of the Persian Ming Cult, I encountered a team of saints. First of all, the author has to think clearly about what this team is going to do, whether it is to preach in the Central Plains or to greet the Holy Fire Order. Different purposes have different solutions to the matter of saving people.

Another stallion novel in the guise of martial arts! ! ! Tired of seeing it!

The end of the world reminds me of the knights with sadness, and the firelight traces the shadow and the sword reflects the moon. The horses are trampling their hooves, drinking wine and laughing, singing loudly and proudly, the maples are like blood!

"Those People in the Jianghu" come to visit!

This crappy book title is still walking, isn't it good for walking people?

The best part of this book is all in the cover

It feels like the protagonist is just a thief