Alliance: Starting from a Pear Blossom Fragrance, It Will Be Amazing

Passing post: How can I put it this way? In the first few chapters, 30% of the main character's family situation, 60% of daily life and scoring points in the Internet cafe, and 10% are briefly introduced to the heroine. But how to put it, the heroine's family is quite interesting, a bit like an idol drama. Generally, those who click in to watch are those who like to play games. The author has created such a heroine, and the feelings between them To be honest, the love scene is a bit lame. This is what game articles should be based on. But I have seen that if the current trend continues, the author should deepen the description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. To be honest, it is a bit too focused on one and not on the other. To sum up - you can watch it so far. If you ignore the heroine when watching, it will be good enough (personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

The book is okay, please stop writing emotional dramas. Please, tone down the heroine, or just brush it off.

Brother, your description of life content makes me feel uncomfortable.

I'm a good boy. Alliance writing and life can be grounded, but they cannot be grounded in the underworld.

Shen Nong has read it and died of poison.

Wouldn't it be better to have frost and snow for thousands of years? Call it pear blossom fragrance.

The idea is very good, that is, either you downplay the heroine in e-sports articles or you don't write them. If you write like this, you might as well turn to urban articles and stop writing about e-sports. It's not suitable for you😥

I can't stand the first chapter. Rank is a poisonous point. People with higher ranks know how big the gap is between high ranks. The protagonist is a thousand-point king and is killed by a silver explosion. Are you kidding me? I, a goalkeeper from Diamond Suburbs, went to Silver to practice heroes and was killed randomly. You, a thousand-point king, did it for me?

It's so poisonous. He also talked about the former king of time travel, and said that there is no golden level of unique hero.

In 18 years, why go to IG? Also signed with the second team for two years.

The future is promising, let's meet again if we are destined. It doesn't matter if I personally mention it as a joke. A game and competitive article is a game and competitive article, and an urban emotional drama is an urban emotional drama.

If you don't know how to write about emotions, don't write about them. The emotional scenes are poorly written, but why do you feel like you're still enjoying them? Pure self-movement.

Withdraw, withdraw. If you write a female protagonist in this e-sports novel, then she will be the female protagonist. Why are you talking about so many emotional dramas? Slipping away.

Chapter 25 is awesome. . . . . You and I are not suitable for each other Author Farewell😓😓😓

Good evening, Akali players~

Sorry, we are not suitable, come on

After the poison test was completed, the author used the black iron idea to write the king game and couldn't stand it any longer.

Brother, your typos make me suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder.

. . . Your rebirth is no different. ,

I feel that the passion is not enough. I read Chapter 18, but there is no feeling that attracts you to read further.

What happened? Come on, author.