Journey to the West: the Little Monk I Crowdfunded to Become a Saint

How should I put it? In the first two rounds, I was still writing the book in the direction of crowdfunding. However, the author had a bit of a breakdown in the middle period. On the way to the Westward Journey, he was afraid that readers would think that the water was in the water, which would speed up the journey to the west. However, many plots were not described, which led the author to forget that the original outline was written in the direction of crowdfunding. And I want to open up a different world of Journey to the West by myself, but I still simplify a lot of the content because I am too quick, and may become eunuchs later, but the imagination and writing are still good. The next book can be unfolded slowly, but! ! Don't forget your outline! ! Going too far will make readers feel that it is a poisonous book.

The writing is so messy that it looks like a newbie at first glance.

There are many lines laid out in the front, and Yiyi will talk about them later. There are two main plots. The first is Journey to the West, the gambling game of killing the living Buddha and seizing the body. The temporary victory and the end are in more than 60 chapters. After that, this became a auxiliary plot, and the main plot highlighted the great calamity of mortal immortals. Chapter 73 begins to open up the pattern, and the crowdfunding mode is upgraded PS: The killing line of the Buddha is related to Xiangliu, and everything originates from the four evil species I have made a lot of changes to the golden finger of the crowdfunding in Chapter 75, adding the PK mode and traffic package support mechanism, adding blind box opening and competition fun Qiuqiu, after seeing 73, or starting from chapter 73 (may affect the experience)

The first few pictures were okay at the beginning, but I successfully persuaded them to quit when I walked to the Westward Journey to Gu Insect City. Goodbye.

My review is that I wanted to write something, but I didn't write anything. The beginning of Journey to the West was too chaotic. I either wrote about Journey to the West well, or I just brushed it off. The writing of Journey to the West was accelerated and made nondescript.

This feeling of fragmentation is too great. I can't connect the previous section to the next section. I have no idea what is written. I hit here and there with a hammer and a stick here and there.

I can't understand how it's going to kill me.

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Is it the same conspiracy theory as in the list of gods again?

Come on, I will always support you. It's okay to write slowly. I hope to write something in-depth later.

I read the daily guide, and the introduction seems pretty good, but I think the last update was a day ago, so it won't be broken.

It was promised that it would be crowdfunded, but the theme of Journey to the West has been poorly written, and all that can be seen is whether there are any new ideas. The first few chapters have been crowdfunded, but they start at the beginning and end at the end, which is boring.