After Exile, I Made a Fortune Using the Sign-In System

The emotional drama is so awkward that it makes people feel separated, and the male protagonist is also magical. A prince is also a miracle doctor, but he has no temper at all. The female protagonist is twelve years old. Haha, for those who don't know, I thought I was watching Balala Little Demon Fairy. Maybe the author used the writing method in ancient literature to highlight the excellence of the male protagonist. A group of female supporting characters like the male protagonist, then the male protagonist likes the female protagonist, the female protagonist is an emotional idiot, and other decathlons, and then the female supporting characters target the female protagonist in various ways. The last poisonous point is that when faced with a top tribe member, you know that the other person is a top grader, but you still try to use words to make the other person understand the human language. More than once, it's okay to write a top grade member. It's good for you to clean up more, but you have to write a top grade one. If the other person messes with you and doesn't clean up, it's purely for the sake of word count to disgust people. Can you still live with a golden finger? I feel aggrieved and speechless... (In the end, except for what I said above, that is, plots other than the male protagonist and the best, such as the relationship with the family, and the reconciliation between the tribesmen, you can still watch it. Anyway, this article will not kill Shen Nong, don't worry.)

Look what I found

I'm about to enter Qingshui Ditch, looking forward to the follow-up!

I have now seen the latest updated chapter, which is Chapter 78. Overall, it is very good. I think there is no problem with the logic. Big boost for the author!

I couldn't stand Chapter 179 anymore. The main reason is that the author's writing has no outline, let alone a main line, and it's quite confusing. You must remember that whether it is a farming article or an infrastructure article, the most important thing is to use the golden finger crazily to engage in farming or infrastructure construction after the golden finger is around, and then occasionally add some obstacles, such as the best relatives, such as aristocratic and wealthy businessmen. It does not matter whether you write the emotional line or not. If you can write well, write it. If you can't write, don't write it. If you don't see the main story (farming or infrastructure construction) once in three chapters, it will be disappointing. In the era of fast food literature, no matter what selling point you write, you must write around the selling point.

When I read Chapter 88, I thought the article was okay, but I didn't dare to read it anymore. After all, the author had laid the groundwork before, saying that her space would be able to hide people when it was upgraded to level three. I was just waiting to give up the article when the people were hidden in it... 😅 Moreover, when the author described the mall earlier, the stalls were very large, and it was estimated that it might go up to the sky later. Please everyone fasten your seat belts...

As long as the male and female protagonists are in the same frame, it will embarrass a person to death. Let a prince give a massage and sleep in someone else's arms. Author, please write a modern romance.

Even though they were already exiled, they still kept serving as ministers. It looked so awkward. Is it because of the word count?

I feel like it's gone before I even watch it.

The imperial decree is difficult to give birth to, hahaha

It's so beautiful. Can you go faster?

I think the female protagonist's system is the normal system. On the male channel, either the system cheats the male protagonist or the male protagonist falls in love with the system. The system always turns out to be a beautiful woman or the incarnation of a goddess, which is outrageous.

The early, middle, and late stages are all pretty good, but the emotional scenes are a bit intellectually depressing, which is really uncomfortable for a noob!

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is a bit immature.

Don't be influenced by other people. If you think it's broken, just change it. If it still doesn't work, make major changes, sort out the outline, and at least bring it to an end.

It's wonderful, the plot constructed by the author is very rich, and it reads very smoothly. The character descriptions are just right; the branch lines and main lines change naturally and are interlocking. In addition to this book, I am also following "The Monk Family" and read more than a thousand chapters in one go! There is a shortage of books. Do you have any good book recommendations?

It turns out that girls' novels also have a system.

Before it was put on the shelves, although it had many flaws, it was quite interesting to watch. But as soon as it was put on the shelves, I was left speechless. Originally, she had been thinking about moving out as a civilian, but it changed as soon as it was released (I wonder if it was written by a different person). If she didn't move, she wouldn't move. She was also allowed to come and go as she pleased. I couldn't understand why she was exiled. , The first chapter was so unbearable that I abandoned it.

What about Chapter 107? I'm the only one who can't see it 😭