Wife, Let's Cultivate Immortality Together

It was fine before, but after returning to my hometown, it became a mess.

The hand speed is worthy of praise, the rhythm of becoming a god

I'm not sure what happens next, but I'm not interested anymore after reading the first few chapters. If the later chapters are okay, I suggest the author revise and optimize the previous chapters.

The protagonist is predicted to have ten wives!

The article is too honest... Young people may not like it

It was too high-profile at the beginning, and it couldn't be developed later, and it couldn't be written anymore. It collapsed!

The beginning is all expository, but when I reach the fifth chapter, it is still expository. This is a novel, and it is written as expository. How can I read it?

Just a few circles for more than a million words?

. . . Everything on earth has traces to follow

It's understandable. This book was a small hit ten years ago, but now it's really hard to read for old bookworms who have been baptized by the Internet. But it's not easy to write one million words. Come on.

How should I put it? It has a bit of an old-time style. Looking at the cover and title, I thought it would be quite sweet. I really didn't expect the content.