Hogwarts Elemental Blaster

Suddenly I saw a leaflet you posted, saying that you should listen to the opinions of the book review section to revise the outline. I also followed his suggestions and read them. Generally speaking, they are not wrong. Basically, the people who read this book want to see the skills of male law and crush Harry Potter. But the problem is that I don't think teaching skills to others is a poisonous point. When I saw you teaching skills to others, I thought you wanted to write magic revolution. With the protagonist as the boundary, what is before the protagonist is the old magic era, and what is after the protagonist is the new magic era. The protagonist will always become a leader and beacon in the magic world, and the organization he founded will become a holy place in the magic world. Everyone who studies magic cannot avoid the protagonist, just like learning physics cannot avoid Newton. Do you think this feels good? And from the setting point of view, the male magician is strong not because of his strong skills, but because the Eye of Darkness brings the male magician almost endless magic power, so that he can release magic squanderingly and regardless of the cost. So even if you teach those skills to others, it will not threaten the protagonist's status. But if you want to make changes, then go ahead. But I remind you, once you have made an outline, don't change it. Make fine adjustments at most, because writing a novel is most afraid of being in both directions. If I say you should change this, you should also change that.

After reading more than 20 chapters, let me give you my thoughts! There are still a lot of bugs. The career choice of DNF is not necessarily a mage in the magical world. The martial arts masters and the four magic gun brothers completely restrained the mage. The Celestials are also quite capable of restraining magicians. Isn't a gunnery master after level 30 more powerful than the Kedavra to kill a pig (laser cannon) with one move? There are dolls for sale in the mall. Buy a ruin girl No. 28. Why does Voldemort come and die one by one? Second bug, exchange for gold coins! I remember that the maximum exchange rate for pounds sterling for gold galleons was 100. The mental power of every person in the demon world is terrifying. After merging with the Eye of Darkness, whoever peeks with their spirit will die. Is Occlumency still needed?

Dumbledore: Shut up, I'm the Headmaster of Hogwarts! ...?

The currency is exploding. Galleons have a strong purchasing power. If you ask the elf to cast a traceless folding spell, it will cost you 51 galleons. . .

After reading Chapter 30, I feel that the first timeline is a bit confusing. Do I receive notices and buy things on the first day? Will school start the next day? What if I haven't previewed my homework? Second, I came up with the words "Elemental Explosion", but I'm a little disappointed that I never saw it😞. Third, the protagonist is very stupid if he does things without protecting his own power. This is not in line with Slytherin. Fourth, does Dumbledore have so much time to pay attention to you, a little wizard? A little wizard who wants to change the magical world, but has no strength. Are there not many little wizards like this left? Doesn't that kid want to change the world? Becoming a hero? Apart from these poisonous features, the characters of the two sisters really stood out to me. These two sisters are so funny (~￣▽￣)~ I hope the author will work hard

Originally, after reading more than 40 chapters, I thought it was okay and wanted to comment on a few bad points. It would be better to change the poisonous points. Later, I felt that I shouldn't comment until I've finished reading. As a result, I burst into tears when I saw more than 50 pictures. What is the spiritual pillar of Big Brother's book? The title Harry Potter's worldview contains the explosive elements. People who click in to read it are thinking about the different levels of skill damage, which is damage crushing. As a result, you taught your skills to others? It was also handed over to Malfoy and the people in Azkaban. Although they are not as harmful as the Eye of Darkness, you can't teach them at one time or two, and you can't teach them at all. It is wrong to say that you want to form a society to protect yourself. How can you protect yourself if you have such discord? It would be better to add the blood mage skills to give the male protagonist a vampire identity, and give him protection as a vampire. And using the identity of a vampire to explain why the male protagonist is a pure-blood wizard, plus the male protagonist's life experience, there are too many things to write. If you still want to write more in the later stage, then add some Cthulhu foreshadowing in the middle stage. Adding dimensions is a matter of course.

Who is the heroine? But don't be Hermione. You can take a look at the recent photos of the actor Hermione. I guarantee that all good feelings will disappear and it will feel like you have been sucked

The power system collapsed directly! Can a cat demon kill Professor McGonagall? Can that mechanical bull destroy the entire wizarding world? (눈_눈)

Dog-licking novel. The protagonist goes to Slytherin and meets a pair of sisters. How do you say this? Isn't it clear? The protagonist is hurt by that sister. The sister asks her to compensate him. Then what does the protagonist feel like? He wants to compensate his sister. The sister rides a broomstick to the sky. The protagonist chases her. The protagonist asks her to make a request that is not excessive.

The younger sister in the original sister is extremely annoying! It is one of the most poisonous points!

After eleven days of interruption, are you still pushing this week?

Damn, when I came in, I saw a picture of Hermione's character... Who the hell put this picture up? I really want to delete all HPs on my bookshelf overnight🙈🙈🙈

Can anyone clarify the confusion of the original novel? Does the original novel mention the so-called upper limit for gold galleons exchange? 9 Out of 10 fanfics despised the upper limit for Muggle coins, and the one with no upper limit was criticized. I have always felt that the setting of the exchange limit is really illogical. Whether it is the original setting or the second setting, it is quite baffling. No matter how low the value of money is, it has value if it can buy materials. How can it become so-called waste paper?

The latest addition to v is a 3-month-old eunuch book. . . . . .

This is the first time I didn't want to read a book after reading the first chapter

It's a very interesting book, but it's just The Eunuch ~ It's a pity